Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but a bit repetitive and slightly wordy. Start with a concise topic sentence, then add one specific example or short anecdote using a linking word (e.g. “for example” or “for instance”) to make your response more vivid. Avoid repeating the same idea about respect twice.

예시: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. For example, they always reminded me to say ‘please’ and ‘thank you’ and modeled respectful behavior at the dinner table, which helped me internalize those habits.

제안: Good direct answer, but it repeats the same concept of receiving respect. Make your topic sentence concise, then add a different supporting reason or brief example (e.g. improves relationships or reduces conflict) using a linking phrase like “because” or “because of this.” Keep it to 2–3 sentences total.

예시: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it helps maintain good relationships. For example, polite behavior at work or school usually reduces misunderstandings and makes cooperation easier.

제안: Your answer is natural and directly addresses the question, but it repeats “daily” and “maintain.” Make a concise topic sentence and then add one specific context or brief example (e.g. public transport, workplace) introduced by “for example” to enrich the answer.

예시: We should be polite at all times, not only on special occasions. For example, being polite on public transport or at work shows consideration for others and creates a friendlier environment.

제안: This is a clear and specific answer with concrete examples. To improve, start with a short topic sentence then mention one additional small habit or brief anecdote (e.g. helping parents or greeting elders) using a linking word like “also” to add variety and depth without exceeding three sentences.

예시: I showed politeness by saying ‘please’ and ‘thank you’ whenever someone helped me. I also greeted elders politely and offered to help with small tasks around the house.

× I learned to be polite mainly by my parents.

✓ I learned to be polite mainly from my parents.

Use of preposition: 'learned by my parents' implies they were the ones being learned; correct preposition is 'from' to indicate source. Replace 'by' with 'from' to show parents taught the student.

× They taught me that politeness will give you the same respect that you give towards others.

✓ They taught me that politeness will give you the same respect that you give to others.

Incorrect use of preposition 'towards' with 'give' is awkward. Use 'to' after 'give' to indicate the recipient. Also sentence tense is future modal 'will' which is acceptable here as taught general consequence; keep tense but fix preposition.

× And also I learned to be respectful of other people like what they taught us in church.

✓ Also, I learned to be respectful of other people, as they taught us in church.

Sentence structure and conjunction: 'And also' is redundant; use 'Also' or 'And'. 'Like what they taught us in church' is ungrammatical; use 'as they taught us in church' to connect clause correctly.

× Yes, being polite is just a basic human decency that everyone should learn and practice in their everyday lives.

✓ Yes, being polite is a basic human decency that everyone should learn and practice in their everyday lives.

Article use: 'just a basic' is acceptable but 'just' is unnecessary; cleaner sentence drops 'just'. Also 'their everyday lives' is fine as gender-neutral singular. This is a stylistic improvement rather than strict grammar error.

× I believe that being polite will get you into receiving the same respect that you give and radiate to towards others.

✓ I believe that being polite will get you the same respect that you give and radiate to others.

Redundant and incorrect preposition sequence 'to towards' is wrong; remove redundancy and simplify to 'get you the same respect' or 'get you the same respect that you give to others.' Also 'into receiving' is awkward; 'get you the same respect' is clearer.

× I don't think that there should be a specific occasion for a person to practice being polite.

✓ I don't think there should be a specific occasion for a person to practice being polite.

Unnecessary 'that' after 'think' is optional; removing it improves flow. No major grammatical error otherwise.

× I think that everyone should respect other people on a daily basis and that this should be a a practice that we maintain until we grow up.

✓ I think everyone should respect others on a daily basis and make this a habit that we keep as we grow up.

Problems: double 'a a' (typo) and awkward phrasing 'this should be a practice that we maintain until we grow up.' Replace 'practice' with 'habit' and 'maintain until we grow up' with 'keep as we grow up' for natural wording and correct redundancy.

× The most basic thing that I learned to show politeness is by simply saying thank you every time a person did something for me, and also by saying please whenever I ask someone to do something for me.

✓ The most basic way I learned to show politeness was by simply saying 'thank you' every time someone did something for me, and by saying 'please' whenever I asked someone to do something for me.

Tense consistency: question asked 'What did you do to show your politeness as a child?' so past tense should be used ('was', 'did', 'asked'). Also 'thing' to 'way' is clearer. Use 'someone' instead of 'a person' for natural phrasing. Quotation marks shown here required by context but in JSON use single quotes.