Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要点不清、语法多处错误、用词不准确且句子冗长。建议先用一句主题句直接回答问题，然后用1–2句具体细节支持（例如举例说明谁教你、什么时候、如何练习），注意主谓一致和代词使用，句子不要超过5句。可以练习用连接词（because, when, for example）使表达更连贯。

예시: When I was a child, my parents and teachers taught me to be polite by setting a good example. For instance, my mother always reminded me to greet adults and say “thank you” after receiving help. Because of that daily routine, politeness became a habit for me.

제안: 回答重复、用词不恰当（例如“precious from”错误），逻辑不够清晰。建议先直接回答（Yes, I do），然后给1–2个明确理由并用具体例子支持。使用更准确的词汇（important, respectful, helpful）并用连接词（because, for example, therefore）。控制在3–4句内。

예시: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps build good relationships. For example, polite students often receive more support from teachers when they ask for help. Therefore, politeness can make life at school easier and more pleasant.

제안: 回答较具体但表达有些混乱与冗长。建议先给一个总体回答（e.g. in daily interactions and formal situations），然后列举2–3具体场景并简短说明应对方式。避免重复，使用连接词（for example, when, also）。注意人称与动词形式一致。

예시: We should be polite in everyday situations and more formal occasions, such as at school or work. For example, when a teacher helps you solve a difficult problem, you should say “thank you.” Also, be polite when meeting elders and during group discussions.

제안: 回答重复且语法混乱，表达不够具体。建议先用一句话概括自己常做的礼貌行为，然后补充1–2个具体例子（say hello, help classmates, say thank you）并说明原因或效果。句子不要过长，注意用词（friendly, kind）和时态一致。

예시: As a child, I showed politeness by greeting my teachers and classmates every morning. I also helped classmates with simple tasks and always said “thank you” when someone helped me, which made our class atmosphere friendlier.

× Honestly I think if you want to be applied you just should say hello with your teacher and your parents every day and sometimes when I get up early you should just appreciate your parents because your parents is so significant for you.

✓ Honestly, I think if you want to be polite you should say hello to your teacher and your parents every day. Sometimes when I get up early, I appreciate my parents because they are very important to me.

错误类型：形容词/副词使用不当（“applied” 用错，应该是“polite”）；同时句中还存在介词、代词和主谓一致问题（见后）。改正建议：将“applied”改为表示“有礼貌”的形容词“polite”；“say hello with” 应改为“say hello to”；把冗长句拆成两句以保持清晰；将“your parents is” 改为复数主语的正确谓语“they are”；并注意插入逗号和冠词以使句子更自然。

× Absolutely yes, because it's so significant for high school students and sometimes we should be precious from my parents and my teacher.

✓ Absolutely. Yes, it's very important for high school students, and sometimes we should show respect to my parents and my teachers.

错误类型：形容词/副词使用不当及介词/动词搭配错误（“significant” 可用但用法更自然为“important”；“be precious from” 是错误搭配）。改正建议：将“significant”替换或调整为“important”；把“be precious from” 改为正确短语“show respect to”；并将“teacher”改为复数“teachers”以与上下文一致。

× It's so crucial. And if you be a very polite person, you can get a lot of kindness for something for someone.

✓ It's so crucial. And if you are a very polite person, you can receive a lot of kindness from others.

错误类型：第三人称单数/动词形式错误（“if you be” 用法不正确，应使用“if you are”）；同时介词搭配错误（“get a lot of kindness for something for someone” 语序和介词不当）。改正建议：将“be” 改为“are”；把“get...for” 改为更自然的短语“receive...from others”。

× Honestly, it's just some little things. For example, if your teacher asks you some questions and they help you solve some questions and some difficult problems, you should be polite and you should just appreciate your teacher and say thank you.

✓ Honestly, they're just small things. For example, if your teacher asks you questions and helps you solve difficult problems, you should be polite and appreciate your teacher by saying thank you.

错误类型：介词与代词使用不当（“some little things” 更自然为“small things”；重复使用“some questions”啰嗦；“they help you” 指代不明，应与单数“teacher”一致；“appreciate your teacher and say thank you” 可用更自然的介词短语）。改正建议：把“they”改为“he/she”或改用被动/单数动词“helps”；合并重复内容，使用“appreciate...by saying thank you” 表示方式。

× Honestly As for me, I just say hello with my teacher and my classmate every day because sometimes I'm I'm all I'm an outgoing person and I just want to share my friendly and all my can kindly with my teacher and classmates. It's so nice things.

✓ Honestly, as for me, I just say hello to my teacher and my classmates every day because I'm an outgoing person and I want to share my friendliness and kindness with my teacher and classmates. Those are nice things.

错误类型：现在时态和词性使用不当（“say hello with” 应为“say hello to”；“classmate” 应为复数以配合“every day” 的习惯；重复的“I'm I'm all I'm” 为口误需删除；“share my friendly and all my can kindly” 是词性和搭配错误，应为“share my friendliness and kindness”；“It's so nice things” 语法错误，名词复数时指示代词也应改）。改正建议：使用正确的介词“to”，复数“classmates”，删除多余重复，替换不当词为名词形式并调整指示代词为“Those”。