Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更直接和连贯，开头用一句主题句直接回应问题，然后用一两句具体细节支持。注意语法和词汇使用（例如“learned to be polite”，“family members”，不要重复同义短语）。尽量控制在3–4句内，使用连接词如“so”或“because”来增强逻辑。

예시: I learned to be polite from my parents and grandparents. They taught me simple habits like saying "please" and "thank you" and greeting guests warmly. Because they praised polite actions, I tried to copy them and it became a habit.

제안: 回答需要更清晰地表达原因，避免模糊或不合逻辑的词组（如“break the good items fear”）。使用明确的理由并举例说明影响。保持句子简短并用连接词如“because”或“so”。

예시: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it helps people get along. For example, polite behaviour can prevent arguments and make daily life more pleasant for everyone.

제안: 回答需明确指出具体场合并用清晰的句子表达原因。避免语法错误和不连贯的词组，提供1–2个具体场景（如公共场所、工作场合、家庭聚会），并说明原因或举例。使用连接词如“for example”或“such as”。

예시: We should be polite in public places, such as on public transport and in shops. For example, saying "excuse me" when you need to pass someone shows respect and keeps things calm.

제안: 回答要用正确的短语（例如“say hello”，“say thank you”），避免重复。先用一句话总结你做了什么，再用一两句具体例子说明情境和效果。注意语法和词序。

예시: As a child, I showed politeness by always saying hello and thank you to adults. For instance, I would greet my neighbours and thank my teacher after class, which made them smile and treated me kindly.

× When I was a child I learned being polite with my parents and grandparents.

✓ When I was a child, I learned to be polite from my parents and grandparents.

句中“learned being polite”用法不正确。动词learn在表示学会做某事时应接不定式（learn to do sth）或learn + 动名词在强调习得动作过程时也可，但更常用且更自然的是learn to be polite。此外，介词应使用from 表示“从……那里学到”。建议使用“learned to be polite from...”结构。

× They told me to be polite with each other and this can leave other good memory.

✓ They told me to be polite to others, and this can leave good memories.

原句中“with each other”用于父母对孩子不合适，应改为“to others/other people”。“leave other good memory”中“other”位置和数态错误，应为“leave good memories”（复数）。此外句子逻辑更通顺需用并列连词and连接两部分。

× Yes, I think being polite is very important because people don't like rude behavior and actions and this will break the good items fear.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important because people don't like rude behavior, and this can ruin good impressions.

原句“break the good items fear”词不当且语义混乱。应把想表达的意思改为“ruin good impressions”或“break good relationships”。使用适当名词短语更清晰。将“will”换成“can”更符合推断语气（可选）。

× I think people should be polite in public because in the public Boy were it all the bad.

✓ I think people should be polite in public because bad behavior affects everyone there.

原句结构混乱且包含单词拼写错误（Boy were）。需要重构句子表达“公共场合的不良行为会影响在场的所有人”。建议使用主语+谓语+宾语的完整句子。

× When I was a child, I think say good say hello and say thank you is a good way to show in to show to be plight and it leave other impression of plight.

✓ When I was a child, I think saying hello and saying thank you are good ways to show politeness, and they leave other people with a positive impression.

句中“say good say hello and say thank you”重复且不自然，应改为动名词短语“saying hello and saying thank you”。主谓一致：复数主语“saying hello and saying thank you”对应复数谓语“are”。“to show in to show to be plight”词序和词汇错误，应使用“show politeness”。“it leave”主谓不一致，应为“they leave”。最后使用“positive impression”更地道。