Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更自然、语法正确且信息更具体。注意主谓一致（people → person/people 改为『to be polite』），用一到两句补充具体例子并用连接词使结构连贯。例如说明父母和老师具体教了哪些礼貌行为，并用连接词（e.g. "for example", "also"）衔接。控制在最多5句内。

예시: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents and teachers. For example, my parents always reminded me to say “please” and “thank you,” and my teachers taught us to raise our hand before speaking in class. These habits helped me behave respectfully around others.

제안: 内容意思不清且有多处语法错误与用词不当（e.g. "opposite feel wrong and comfortable"）需要改为清晰的观点和具体理由。把观点放在首句，然后用两句支持理由，使用连接词（e.g. "because", "also"）。避免冗余表达，句子不超过5句。

예시: Yes, definitely. Being polite is important because it shows respect for other people and helps build good relationships. Also, polite behaviour can make you seem more responsible and trustworthy in school or work.

제안: 回答总体不错，但需注意用词和短语搭配（e.g. "focus to the teacher" 应为 "focus on the teacher"）。可以再提供一两个具体场景或对比来丰富内容，并用连接词串联句子。保持句子数量不超过5句。

예시: We should be polite in most situations, such as at school, at work and in public places, because politeness shows respect and helps avoid conflicts. For example, in class students should keep their voices low and focus on the teacher, while at work colleagues should listen carefully and speak courteously.

제안: 回答简短但可更自然和具体。把主题句放前面，然后描述具体细节并用连接词（e.g. "for example", "so"）衔接。可加一两句说明为何这样做重要或举另一个小例子，句子总数不超过5句。

예시: As a child I often showed politeness by saying thank you and apologising when needed. For example, once I borrowed a pen from a friend and immediately thanked her, which showed my appreciation and helped maintain our friendship.

× When I was very little, I learned how to become a polite people from my parents and my teachers.

✓ When I was very little, I learned how to become a polite person from my parents and my teachers.

原句中使用了複數名詞“people”來表達單個人的特質，與不定冠詞或單數語境不一致。應改為單數名詞“person”。建議注意單數與複數名詞的搭配，當描述“成為有禮貌的一個人”時用“person”。

× My parents told me some daily life polite skills and my teachers told me class.

✓ My parents taught me some polite daily-life skills, and my teachers taught me in class.

原句中“told me some daily life polite skills”表達不自然，應使用動詞“teach”搭配“skills”，並將形容詞順序調整為“polite daily-life skills”。此外“my teachers told me class”缺少介詞或動詞形式，正確應為“taught me in class”。建議學習動詞 collocation（teach/learn/tell 的用法）以及形容詞順序。

× Yes, definitely. It not only can let the opposite feel wrong and comfortable but also can improve our the sense of responsibility and how to promote our self.

✓ Yes, definitely. It can not only make the other person feel comfortable and respected, but also improve our sense of responsibility and help us develop ourselves.

原句多處代詞和詞語使用錯誤：1) “It not only can let the opposite feel wrong and comfortable” 結構錯誤且用詞不當，應為“make the other person feel comfortable and respected”；2) “our the sense of responsibility” 冗餘定冠詞，應為“our sense of responsibility”；3) “how to promote our self” 語法與反身代詞錯誤，應為“help us develop ourselves”或“promote ourselves”。建議：注意固定搭配（make someone feel...），避免冗餘冠詞，反身代詞用法為 ourselves。

× I think we should be polite on most occasions, for example at school and in the workplace, because politeness shows respect and helps avoid conflicts. For instance, as a student, we should keep our voice low in class and focus to the teacher.

✓ I think we should be polite on most occasions, for example at school and in the workplace, because politeness shows respect and helps avoid conflicts. For instance, as students, we should keep our voices down in class and pay attention to the teacher.

原句存在代詞和名詞單複數不一致以及搭配問題：1) “as a student, we” 單數與複數不一致，改為“as students”；2) “keep our voice low” 不自然，應為固定表達“keep our voices down”；3) “focus to the teacher” 搭配錯誤，應為“pay attention to”或“focus on”後接主語。建議注意主語一致（單複數）和常用搭配（keep voices down, pay attention to）。

× When I was a kid, one time I forgot my pen and I borrowed it from my friend, so I said thank you to her.

✓ When I was a kid, one time I forgot my pen and borrowed one from my friend, so I thanked her.

原句時態和措辭有些冗贅：1) “I forgot my pen and I borrowed it from my friend” 使用“it”不清楚指代，且連續兩個主語重複，簡潔說法為“forgot my pen and borrowed one from my friend”；2) “I said thank you to her” 更自然的過去式表達為“thanked her”。建議保持時態一致（過去敘述用過去式）並使用更自然的英語表達。