Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答需要更直接和条理清晰。注意时态一致（过去式），合并重复信息并用连接词衔接细节，句子不宜过长或重复。可以先给主题句（I learned from my parents and teachers），然后补充具体方式（parents modelled behaviour; teachers taught manners at school），最后举一两个具体例子。

예시: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents and my primary school teachers. For example, my parents always said “please” and “thank you” at home, and my teacher used role-playing in class to teach us how to greet adults politely.

제안: 回答过于重复且语法有错误。应先直接回答（Yes），然后用一到两句说明原因并举例或结果。使用更准确的表达（e.g. being polite is important for building good relationships）。避免重复相同词组。

예시: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps people build trust and get along better. For instance, saying “thank you” and listening respectfully can make social and work relationships much smoother.

제안: 回答缺乏清晰结构且有语法和表达错误。先给总体观点（we should be polite in many situations），然后列举2-3具体场合并用连接词（for example, when...; also...）。最后可以简短说明原因或举例。注意短句和准确表达。

예시: We should be polite in many situations, especially in public. For example, at school we should greet teachers, and in public transport we should give up seats to elderly people. Also, when someone asks for help, we should respond kindly.

제안: 回答包含正确内容但表达混乱与时态混用。应用过去式描述过去习惯（I used to...），并列举具体礼貌用语或行为，句子不宜重复。可补充一两个具体情境来丰富内容。

예시: When I was a child, I used to say “please”, “thank you” and “sorry” regularly. For example, I would greet older people with “hello” and always thank anyone who helped me with my homework.

× I can remember that when I was a child my parents will teach me and they gave me some examples and also So when I grow up I go to the primary school my teacher teach me they teach me and give me some education.

✓ I can remember that when I was a child my parents taught me and gave me some examples. Also, when I grew up and went to primary school my teachers taught me and gave me an education.

错误类型：情态动词/时态混用（主要为过去时与将来/现在时混用），句子中使用了 will 在描述过去发生的事情，应使用过去时。建议：描述过去发生的动作时把动词置为过去式（teach→taught，grow→grew，go→went，teacher→teachers）。将冗长的并列句拆分为更清晰的句子。

× Yes, of course, to be a good people polite is one of the most important points in this way. I think polite is very important for everyone.

✓ Yes, of course. To be a good person, being polite is one of the most important points. I think politeness is very important for everyone.

错误类型：形容词/名词使用不当。原句用 people（复数名词）与 good 搭配不当，应使用 person（单数）。此外 polite（形容词）在此处应用名词形式 politeness 或使用 being polite。建议：将 people 改为 person，并将 polite 用作名词短语或改成 politeness。

× I think in the public areas, for example, when we go to school and we have to say hello to we have to say hello when we meet our teachers and this and also when someone asks us to help them, we can take our hands.

✓ I think in public areas, for example, when we go to school we should say hello when we meet our teachers. Also, when someone asks us for help, we should offer a hand.

错误类型：介词与短语搭配错误及表达不清。原句 "in the public areas" 可简化为 "in public"；"asks us to help them" 更自然的是 "asks us for help"；"we can take our hands" 是错误表达，应为 "offer a hand" 或 "help them"。建议：使用固定搭配（in public, ask for help, offer a hand/help）。此外将重复或多余的部分删除以使句子通顺。

× I have to say when I was a child I will always say like please thank you and sorry also I will say hello to the elder when. I ask them to help, I will I will say thank you to them.

✓ I have to say that when I was a child I would always say please, thank you and sorry. I would also say hello to elders. When I asked them for help, I would say thank you to them.

错误类型：情态动词/时态使用不当。原句在描述过去习惯时不应使用 will，应使用过去习惯用法 would 或 used to，且部分动词时态需与上下文一致（ask→asked）。建议：描述过去习惯时使用 'would' 或 'used to'；注意复数形式 elders 而非 the elder；将重复的 'I will I will' 删除并改为统一过去式结构。