Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答需更直接且语法正确，句子不宜冗长或含糊。应有主题句（直接回答方式），随后用1–2个具体细节说明，例如父母如何示范（通过言语、行为或规则）。注意时态一致与人称形式。可用连接词如“because”或“so”来衔接理由。

예시: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. They always taught me to say words like "please" and "thank you" and showed politeness by greeting others respectfully, so I copied their behavior.

제안: 回答要更清晰、句子完整并用更合适的词汇表达观点。先给出简短立场句，再给一两个简洁理由和具体例子。避免词汇错误（如"foster impressions"、"planting"），可用"first impression"、"polite"等。使用连接词如"because"或"for example"。

예시: Definitely. Being polite creates a positive first impression because people feel respected when you greet them and use expressions like "hello", "please" and "thank you". For example, a polite greeting can make a stranger more willing to help you.

제안: 回答要具体列举几种场合并简短说明理由，避免模糊表述（如“seven plans”）。先给主题句，然后用连接词列举场合并解释每个场合为什么需要礼貌。注意名词和动词形式（如"respect teachers"改为"show respect to teachers"）。

예시: We should be polite in many situations, for example in class, at family gatherings, and during job interviews. In class, students show respect to teachers because teachers share knowledge; at interviews, politeness helps create a professional impression.

제안: 回答要简洁并给出具体行为示例，注意语法和表达的自然性（如"say hello and sir/madam"，不要用"mister All you are so beautiful"）。先用一句话概括，然后列举1–2个具体例子，使用正确句型如"I used to..."或"My parents taught me to..."。

예시: As a child, I used simple phrases to show politeness. For example, my parents taught me to say "hello" and "nice to meet you" to their friends, and to say "Excuse me" or "Could I order, please?" in restaurants.

× When I was a child, I learned to be plain, followed by parents.

✓ When I was a child, I learned to be polite, following my parents.

句子结构不清晰，原句“learned to be plain, followed by parents”语序和用词错误。应使用“polite”而非“plain”，并用现在分词短语“following my parents”表示“跟随父母学习”的行为，保持句子连贯。建议把动作主体和修饰语放在正确位置，避免被动短语误导。

× They always teach me to speak Kuju and please.

✓ They always taught me to say "please" and use polite phrases.

代词和词类使用错误；原句中“teach”时态与前文过去时不一致，应用过去式“taught”。"speak Kuju"不明确，推测为“说礼貌用语”，应改为“say 'please' and use polite phrases”。建议确保代词/动词时态一致并使用准确表达。

× And they always do this by themselves and I will follow this examples.

✓ And they always did this themselves, and I would follow these examples.

“by themselves”冗余且时态不一致；“this examples”单复数错误且代词选择不当。将行为用过去式“did”与前文保持一致，使用“themselves”可省略“by”。“these examples”和“would follow”更符合过去习惯表达。

× Definitely yes. I think if you meet someone stranger, the foster impressions is whether this people is planting.

✓ Definitely yes. I think if you meet a stranger, the first impression is whether this person is polite.

时态与词形错误：应使用一般现在时描述普遍事实；“someone stranger”应为“a stranger”；“foster impressions”应为“first impression”；“this people is planting”包含代词、单复数和词汇错误，应为“this person is polite”。建议注意冠词、单复数和常用短语。

× If you say mister or say something like hello thank you please they will think your respect to them and

✓ If you say 'sir' or say things like 'hello', 'thank you', and 'please', they will think you respect them.

代词和词序错误："mister" 用法不当，应使用“sir”或适当称呼；“your respect to them”中“your”应为主格“you”。并需用并列结构列举问候语。建议使用主格代词并调整词序以使谓语完整。

× There are seven plans which should be planned for example, such as in class, because in Chinese traditional culture, students must be respect to their teachers because they show knowledge and teach them.

✓ There are several situations in which we should be polite, for example in class, because in traditional Chinese culture, students must respect their teachers since teachers impart knowledge to them.

原句结构混乱，重复使用“plan/planned”，短语冗余且语义不清。将“plans”替换为“situations”，去掉重复并改用“respect”动词形式，修正因果关系表达。建议避免重复词并使用准确名词和动词搭配。

× And in some places like a family gather and important meeting interview

✓ And in some places like family gatherings and important meetings or interviews.

介词与名词形式错误：应使用复数“gatherings”，“meetings”，并用并列连接“meetings or interviews”。建议使用正确的名词形式及并列结构以表达多个场合。

× When I was a child, my parents let me to say hello and mister All you are so beautiful when I meet my parents friend or reality to show the respect and the plantless.

✓ When I was a child, my parents encouraged me to say hello and to praise with phrases like 'You look so nice' when I met my parents' friends or relatives to show respect and politeness.

时态、动词不定式、词汇和标点多处错误："let me to"应为“encouraged me to”或“let me say”且动词时态与过去相符；"mister All you are so beautiful"为不当表达，应改为常用礼貌用语；"parents friend or reality"应为"parents' friends or relatives"；"plantless"误拼，应为"politeness"。建议使用规范短语并注意所有格和复数形式。

× And I also taught to say could I order something in the restaurant?

✓ And I was also taught to say, 'Could I order something in the restaurant?','' or better: 'Could I place an order, please?',''

动词短语错误：应被动表达“was taught”，因为是父母教学生；原句中缺少被动助动词且问句格式不自然。建议使用被动语态“was taught”并提供更礼貌的餐厅用语。