Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cavaba daha aydın və qısa struktur verin: mövzu cümləsi, səbəb və qısa nümunə. Qrammatikanı düzəldin (məsələn, “I was a very polite person” və ya “I learned to be polite from my parents and teachers”), artikllara və fel formalarına diqqət edin. Həmçinin durğular və “um/uh” kimi fasilələri azaltmağa çalışın. Dil genişliyini artırmaq üçün “taught me manners”, “respect for others” kimi ifadələrdən istifadə edin.

예시: I learned to be polite from my parents and teachers because they always taught me good manners. For example, my mother insisted I say ‘please’ and ‘thank you,’ and my teacher praised me when I showed respect to classmates.

제안: Cümlələrinizi iki-üç bağlı cümlədə quraraq fikri daha məntiqli təqdim edin: qısa mövzu cümləsi, səbəb və konkret nümunə. Filler sözlərini azaldın və qrammatik səhvlərə diqqət yetirin (məsələn, “behave politely” və ya “is very important”). Lüğət genişliyini artırmaq üçün “leave a good impression”, “foster mutual respect” kimi ifadələr əlavə edin.

예시: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it leaves a good impression and helps build positive relationships. For example, saying ‘please’ and ‘thank you’ usually encourages others to be courteous in return.

제안: Sakit və daha düzgün ifadə ilə cavab verin: filler sözlərini çıxarın, düzgün isim və ifadə seçin (“work environment” əvəzinə “workplace” və ya “work environment”), artiklları əlavə edin (“in all places”, “in official places such as hospitals”). Struktur olaraq mövzu cümləsi, səbəb və 1-2 konkret nümunə verin. Qrammatika üzərində çalışın (məsələn, “when you are at work” və “be polite to your coworkers”).

예시: Politeness is important in almost every situation, especially in the workplace and official places such as hospitals. For instance, being courteous to coworkers and medical staff helps maintain professionalism and calm.

제안: Cavabı qısa və konkret saxlayın: mövzu cümləsi ilə başlayın, sonra 1-2 dəqiq nümunə verin. Qrammatikaya diqqət yetirin (məsələn, “I didn’t interrupt adults” və “I gave up my seat” kimi dəqiq fel zamanları istifadə edin). Həmçinin, əlaqələndirici sözlər (“for example”, “for instance”) əlavə edərək cümlələri daha axıcı edin.

예시: As a child, I showed politeness by not interrupting adults and by giving up my seat for elderly people. For example, I always waited my turn to speak and offered my seat on the bus.

× I think that when I was a child I was so polite person because my parents and my teachers always taught me to be polite to adults or it doesn't matter to all people.

✓ I think that when I was a child I was a very polite person because my parents and my teachers always taught me to be polite to adults and to everyone.

Use an adverb or determiner with 'polite person': 'a very polite person' is correct. Replace 'or it doesn't matter to all people' with 'and to everyone' for clarity and correct conjunction. Also add 'to' before 'everyone' to mark the object of 'be polite'. Suggestion: Use 'a very polite person' and 'to adults and to everyone' to make the sentence grammatically correct and natural.

× That's why I have learned to be polite from my parents.

✓ That's why I learned to be polite from my parents.

Present perfect ('have learned') suggests a connection to the present; simple past ('learned') fits because the action occurred in childhood and is being described as a past event. Use simple past for completed past actions tied to a past time period. Suggestion: Use simple past when referring to habits formed in childhood: 'I learned'.

× For example, state your opinion, give one reason, then add a short example.

✓ For example, state your opinion, give one reason, and then add a short example.

No major verb form error, but linking with 'and' improves flow and correctness of list structure. Add 'and' before the final item in a series. Suggestion: Use 'and then' to connect actions smoothly.

× use 'behave polite' (adjective) instead of 'behave polite' (adjective), and 'is very necessary' is awkward — use 'is very important' or 'is necessary.'

✓ use 'behave politely' (adverb) instead of 'behave polite' (adjective), and 'is very necessary' is awkward — use 'is very important' or 'is necessary.'

The verb 'behave' requires an adverb to modify it: 'behave politely' not 'behave polite'. Original had a typo repeating same phrase; correct the guidance to show adverb use. Suggestion: When modifying verbs, use adverbs (e.g., politely).

× I think that, uh, politeness is so important in all places, especially, umm, employee environment.

✓ I think that politeness is important everywhere, especially in the workplace.

'Employee environment' is not a natural noun phrase; use 'the workplace' or 'work environment'. Remove filler words and 'so' which is informal. Preposition 'in' is required: 'in the workplace'. Suggestion: Use natural collocations: 'in the workplace' or 'in the work environment'.

× I mean, when you are work, uh, you have to be polite to your coworkers and it's, it doesn't matter, uh, all official place like hospital.

✓ I mean, when you are at work, you have to be polite to your coworkers, and it does not matter whether it is an official place like a hospital.

Use the phrase 'at work' (not 'are work'). Add 'whether' and 'it is' to make the clause grammatical: 'it does not matter whether it is an official place like a hospital.' Use 'place' with an article 'a hospital' or 'the hospital' depending on context. Also expand contractions for clarity. Suggestion: Say 'at work' and use 'whether it is an official place like a hospital' for clarity and correct sentence structure.