Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and clarity: use correct verb tenses and reduce redundancy. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one supporting detail with a linking word. Be specific about what your mother taught and give one short example.

예시: I learned to be polite from my mother when I was young. For example, she always reminded me to say “please” and “thank you,” and she taught me how to greet adults politely when we visited relatives.

제안: Fix grammar and improve word choice: use correct collocations (e.g., “enhance effective communication” → “enhance effective communication” or better “improve communication”). Start with a concise opinion, then add one clear reason with a linking word and a brief example if possible.

예시: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps reduce conflicts and improves communication. For instance, polite language can make difficult conversations less confrontational.

제안: Make the response more natural and specific: correct articles and plural forms, and give one additional example or explanation using a linking word. Keep it concise and direct.

예시: We should be polite in professional settings, such as at work, where we interact with colleagues and clients. For example, polite emails and respectful meetings help maintain good working relationships.

제안: Correct verb forms and possessive errors, and make the answer more specific: state a clear topic sentence, then add a brief example of a situation. Avoid unnecessary phrases and limit to up to five sentences.

예시: As a child, I showed politeness by always saying “please” and “thank you,” and often asking “may I?” before taking something. For example, when I visited relatives I would greet them politely and offer to help with small chores.

× When I was a child, my mother often took me to meet new people and she will taught me how to talk politely.

✓ When I was a child, my mother often took me to meet new people and she taught me how to talk politely.

The sentence mixes past tense with 'will taught', which is ungrammatical. Use simple past 'taught' to match the past context established by 'When I was a child' and 'often took'. Suggestion: keep all verbs in the same past tense for consistent narration.

× Such ads say thank you or please to people and also how to respond to the adults.

✓ She taught me to say 'thank you' or 'please' to people and also how to respond to adults.

The original 'Such ads' is incorrect and likely a typo; 'She taught me to say' fits the context. Use 'adults' without 'the' because speaking generally. Put quoted phrases for clarity. Suggest: use 'teach someone to do something' structure and omit unnecessary articles.

× Certainly I believe that being polite is very important because it helps reduce conflicts and can enhance effective of communication.

✓ Certainly, I believe that being polite is very important because it helps reduce conflicts and can enhance the effectiveness of communication.

The phrase 'enhance effective of communication' is incorrect word choice and form. Use the noun 'effectiveness' with the article 'the' to modify 'communication'. Also add a comma after 'Certainly' for natural flow. Suggest: 'enhance the effectiveness of communication'.

× So I encourage people to be nice.

✓ So I encourage people to be polite.

The question is about politeness; 'be nice' is acceptable but less formal. Change to 'be polite' to maintain topic consistency. No tense change needed.

× I would say in professional occasions such as in workplace we should be polite to our colleagues and client.

✓ I would say at professional occasions, such as in the workplace, we should be polite to our colleagues and clients.

Use 'at' or 'on' for occasions; 'in workplace' needs the definite article 'the workplace'. Also 'client' should be plural 'clients' to match general statement. Add commas for clarity. Suggest: 'at professional occasions' or 'on professional occasions' and pluralize 'clients'.

× When I was a child, I always say thank you and please or even may I to people I met and I think that kind of words will show my respect to other people's.

✓ When I was a child, I always said 'thank you' and 'please' or even 'may I' to people I met, and I thought that those words would show my respect for other people.

Multiple tense inconsistencies: 'always say' should be past 'always said' to match 'When I was a child' and 'people I met'. 'Think' should be past 'thought'. 'Will show' should be conditional 'would show'. Replace 'kind of words' with 'those words' and 'other people's' (possessive) with 'other people' and use 'respect for' rather than 'to'. Suggestions: keep past tense throughout and use correct collocations 'respect for someone'.