Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答总体清楚但有语法和表达不准确的问题，且有冗余填充词（如“Uh, well”）和句子不够简洁。建议：1) 去掉多余的填充词，开门见山作主题句；2) 修正语法错误并用更自然的表达（例如“made me great guests”应为“taught me to greet guests”或“encouraged me to greet guests”）；3) 控制在最多5句内，第二句用一两个具体细节支持观点并使用连接词如“for example”或“also”以保持连贯。

예시: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. They taught me to say “please” and “thank you” and modeled good manners themselves. For example, my mother always encouraged me to greet guests and say thank you after meals, so these habits became automatic for me.

제안: 回答内容相关且有观点，但存在语法和连贯性问题，以及词汇和句子结构可以更自然。建议：1) 用一到两句直接给出观点（主题句），随后用一两个简短具体原因支持；2) 修正语法错误（例如“all as cities grow”改为“as cities grow”或“with increasing urbanisation”，“being polite help”改为“being polite helps”）；3) 使用连接词如“because”或“for example”保持逻辑流畅。

예시: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps us make a positive impression. For example, as cities grow and we meet more strangers, polite language makes introductions easier, and when we need to ask for favours or have difficult conversations, respectful words help keep interactions smooth.

제안: 回答明确且包含例子，但表达有重复和填充词，部分句子结构可更自然精简。建议：1) 去掉“Uh”之类的填充词；2) 把类似的场合合并并用连接词精炼（例如“at work, when meeting new people, and in public places”）；3) 例子可以更具体并用一两个关联词连接原因和结果。

예시: We should be polite at work, when meeting new people, and in public places because it shows respect and helps cooperation. For example, on the bus I usually say “excuse me” and “thank you” when someone makes way for me, which makes everyone feel respected.

제안: 回答含混且有严重语法与词汇错误，内容不清晰，未能直接回答问题。建议：1) 首先用一句话直接回答（描述具体礼貌行为）；2) 用正确的时态和常见表达（过去式描述童年）；3) 提供一到两个具体例子并解释原因或结果，避免不相关或错误的词汇。

예시: As a child, I showed politeness by always saying “please” and “thank you” to my teachers and parents. For example, if a teacher passed me food or helped me in class, I would say “thank you” immediately to show appreciation.

× For example, my mother made me great guests and say thank you after meals and now it's a habit.

✓ For example, my mother made me greet guests and say thank you after meals, and now it's a habit.

句中原文用 "made me great guests" 是拼写与用法错误。应为 "made me greet guests"，其中 greet 是动词，表示“向客人打招呼”；并且整个动作发生在过去，使用过去式 made 是正确的，但后面动词要用原形 greet（在 make sb do 结构中被动者动词用原形）。此外在两个并列动词短语之间需要使用逗号或连词“and”连接。建议注意动词拼写和 make + 宾语 + 动词原形 的结构。

× Good manners are absolutely important in our daily lives, all as cities grow and people travel more, we will meet more and more strangers, so being polite help us make a positive impression.

✓ Good manners are absolutely important in our daily lives. As cities grow and people travel more, we will meet more and more strangers, so being polite helps us make a positive impression.

原句有两处问题：1) 句子结构过长且连接词使用不当，应将句子拆分或用恰当连词开头。2) 主语 "being polite" 是单数形式，谓语应为第三人称单数形式 "helps"，而原文用了 "help"，出现主谓不一致错误。建议把复合句分开并使用正确的主谓一致形式。

× Sometimes we need to have difficult conversations or asks to borrow something, and using respectful language makes those interactions smoother.

✓ Sometimes we need to have difficult conversations or ask to borrow something, and using respectful language makes those interactions smoother.

这里的并列动词结构应为 "have ... or ask ..."，第二部分的动词应与前面保持一致的原形或不带第三人称变化。原文用了 "asks"（第三人称单数形式），与主语不匹配且不符合并列结构，应改为动词原形 "ask"。建议注意并列动词时形式一致。

× Uh, I think we should be polite at work when meeting new people and in public places.

✓ Uh, I think we should be polite at work when meeting new people and in public places.

该句本身结构与介词使用基本正确，但与下一句衔接存在冗余“and with strangers because it makes daily life smoother.” 后一句中介词使用不当。以下针对下一句单独给出更正。

× Uh, it's important at work because it shows respect and helps cooperation and with strangers because it makes daily life smoother.

✓ It's important at work because it shows respect and helps cooperation, and it's important with strangers because it makes daily life smoother.

原句中 "helps cooperation and with strangers" 结构混乱，介词短语位置错误。应把关于“strangers”的信息独立成分，使用正确的介词搭配如 "important with strangers"，并保证并列分句结构对称。建议把内容分成两部分，保持并列成分结构一致。

× When I was a child I more than a foodie, a plate of dish couldn't for my stomach.

✓ When I was a child I was more than a foodie; a plate of dishes wasn't enough for my stomach.

原句有多处问题：1) 缺少系动词，应为 "I was more than a foodie"。2) 单词拼写和数错误："a plate of dish" 不正确，应为复数 "a plate of dishes" 或 "a plate of food"。3) 否定结构和谓语时态应使用过去式 "wasn't enough" 来表示过去不够用。改正后符合过去时态和名词复数形式。建议注意系动词的使用、名词单复数和过去时态的一致性。

× So I will always ask to a teacher to cross some dishes and then I will say thank you.

✓ So I would always ask a teacher to pass some dishes to me and then I would say thank you.

原句中多处问题：1) 时态：描述过去习惯应使用过去式或过去习惯结构，如 "would" 或过去式 "asked"，而不是将来时 "will"。2) 介词和动词搭配错误："ask to a teacher to cross some dishes" 不自然，应为 "ask a teacher to pass some dishes to me"。3) 动词选择错误："cross" 用在这里不恰当，应使用 "pass"（递给）。因此把句子改为过去习惯表达 "would" 或过去式以保持时态一致，并修正介词与动词搭配。建议注意时态与常用搭配，避免直译。