Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và chọn từ: câu trả lời hiện tại có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai (teach → taught, poly → polite, at a child → as a child). Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề, rồi thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết với liên từ để làm rõ cách bố mẹ dạy (ví dụ: bằng gương, bằng lời nhắc, bằng phần thưởng). Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu, tự nhiên và cụ thể.

예시: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. They taught me by example — they always used polite language with others — and they reminded me to say “please” and “thank you.” As a result, politeness became a habit for me.

제안: Sửa ý và dùng từ chính xác: học sinh có vẻ nhầm lẫn giữa “polite” và “bully/bullied”. Trả lời nên nêu quan điểm rõ ràng rồi giải thích lý do bằng một hoặc hai câu bổ sung với liên từ (because/so). Tránh mơ hồ và dùng vốn từ phù hợp (important, respectful, helpful).

예시: Yes, I do. Being polite is important because it shows respect and helps build good relationships. For example, polite behavior can reduce conflicts and make social interactions smoother.

제안: Trả lời cụ thể hơn và dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề nêu những hoàn cảnh cụ thể (at work, with elders, in public). Dùng liên từ (for example, especially) để liệt kê và giải thích ngắn gọn. Tránh câu mơ hồ như “I don't know”.

예시: We should be polite in many situations, especially at work and when meeting elders. For example, saying “please” and “thank you” at the office creates a positive atmosphere, and politeness shows respect when talking with older people.

제안: Sửa ngữ pháp, trình tự thời gian và đưa ví dụ cụ thể: nói rõ hành động bạn làm khi còn nhỏ (saying thank you/sorry, helping others, waiting your turn). Bắt đầu với câu chủ đề ở thì quá khứ (I used to…). Thêm 1 câu giải thích ngắn vì sao bạn làm như vậy.

예시: When I was a child, I used to say “thank you” and “sorry” often to show politeness. I also helped my family with small tasks and waited my turn in games because my parents taught me that these actions were respectful.

× My parents teach me to be poly at a child.

✓ My parents taught me to be polite as a child.

The verb 'teach' should be in the past tense 'taught' because the action happened in the past. Also 'poly' is a spelling error and should be 'polite'; 'at a child' is incorrect preposition and article use — use 'as a child' to indicate time/role. Suggestion: Use past tense for past events and correct prepositions and spelling.

× Yes, I do. I think being bullied is very important.

✓ Yes, I do. I think being polite is very important.

The student used 'being bullied' which changes the meaning and is likely a wrong word choice. The adjective 'polite' fits the question. Suggestion: Choose the adjective that matches the intended meaning and context.

× I don't know but I think people so polite every day.

✓ I don't know, but I think people should be polite every day.

The sentence is missing a modal verb 'should' to express obligation or expectation. Also word order 'people so polite' is incorrect. Suggestion: Insert appropriate modal verbs and correct word order: 'people should be polite'.

× Well when I grew a child I was a great adult and said thank you and sorry because my parent told me that is polite.

✓ Well, when I was a child I tried to be well-mannered and said 'thank you' and 'sorry' because my parents told me that it was polite.

Multiple issues: 'grew a child' is incorrect — use 'was a child' (past state). 'I was a great adult' is illogical in context; replace with 'I tried to be well-mannered' or similar. 'parent' should be plural 'parents' to match earlier reference. 'that is polite' should be in past 'that it was polite' to match past narration. Suggestion: Use correct past-state expression, plural forms, and consistent past tense throughout.