Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và dùng từ chính xác; câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, có câu chủ đề và 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh dùng các từ sai nghĩa (“rescue pupil”, “conduct my search”). Nên diễn đạt tự nhiên như ‘I learned from my grandfather; he showed me manners like greeting adults and using polite language’ và thêm một ví dụ ngắn.

예시: I learned most of my manners from my grandfather when I visited him often. He taught me practical things like greeting elders politely and saying “please” and “thank you,” which I practiced every time I met relatives.

제안: Câu trả lời hợp lý nhưng cần mạch lạc hơn và dùng liên từ để mở rộng ý. Thêm một lý do cụ thể hoặc ví dụ để chứng minh quan điểm, và sửa nhỏ ngữ pháp như “self respect for the other person” → “self-respect and respect for others”.

예시: Yes, I do. Being polite shows your personality and demonstrates self-respect and respect for others. For example, saying thank you at work can help build better relationships with colleagues.

제안: Ý hay và trực tiếp nhưng nên dùng cấu trúc mạch lạc hơn và mở rộng bằng dẫn chứng cụ thể. Thêm liên từ như “therefore” hoặc “for example” để liên kết ý, và tránh mơ hồ (‘except when joking around’ có thể dẫn hiểu nhầm).

예시: I think we should be polite in almost all situations, especially in formal settings like work or school. For example, even when disagreeing, you can express your opinion calmly and respectfully.

제안: Cần chỉnh sửa nhiều: ngữ pháp và vốn từ sai khiến nội dung khó hiểu (‘rest a doors’, ‘sow lineness’). Trả lời nên có câu chủ đề + 1-2 hành động cụ thể, rõ ràng (ví dụ: opening doors for adults, listening without interrupting). Viết tiếng Anh đơn giản nhưng chính xác.

예시: When I was young, I often opened doors for adults and spoke quietly when elders were talking. I also tried not to interrupt people and always said “please” and “thank you.”

× He taught me how to rescue pupil and how to conduct my search

✓ He taught me how to rescue a pupil and how to conduct my search

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'pupil', which is an article error (use of articles). Also 'rescue pupil' is unnatural; adding 'a' makes it grammatically correct. Suggestion: use appropriate articles before singular countable nouns and consider more natural phrasing like 'how to help a pupil' or 'how to rescue a pupil.'

× Yes I do because I think it's a way to express my personality and self respect for the other person.

✓ Yes, I do because I think it's a way to express my personality and self-respect for other people.

Use a comma after 'Yes' for pacing and clarity. 'self respect' should be hyphenated as 'self-respect' (compound noun). 'the other person' is awkward when speaking generally; use 'other people' for a general statement. Suggestion: punctuate introductory elements and use plural or uncountable forms for general statements.

× I think that, except when joking around, we should always be polite because politeness means respecting the other person.

✓ I think that, except when joking around, we should always be polite because politeness means respecting other people.

'the other person' implies a specific person; for general occasions use 'other people.' This is a choice of noun reference rather than strict preposition error, but it affects correctness and naturalness. Suggestion: use plural 'other people' when generalizing about how to treat people.

× When I was young, I used to rest a doors and avoid interrupting them to sow lineness

✓ When I was young, I used to greet adults and avoided interrupting them to show politeness

Multiple errors: 'rest a doors' is incorrect vocabulary and phrase — likely intended 'greet adults.' 'used to' pairs with base verb; for a sequence in the past, keep past habitual 'used to greet' and use 'avoided' (past) for the second action for consistency. 'sow lineness' is wrong words; correct phrase is 'show politeness' or 'showing politeness' — here 'show politeness' fits. Also 'them' correctly refers to adults. Suggestion: use correct verbs ('greet', 'avoid', 'show') and keep consistent past tense when describing past habits.