Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 用词和语法需要更准确，句子结构应更自然。建议：(1) 修正词汇错误（"pilotness"→"politeness"）；(2) 先用一句主题句直接回答，然后用一两句具体细节支持；(3) 控制句子数量不超过5句并注意时态一致。

예시: I learned politeness mainly from my teachers and my parents. For example, my kindergarten teacher introduced basic manners in our first class, and my parents always showed respectful behavior at home, which I copied.

제안: 表达清晰，观点明确，但有语法和流畅性问题。建议：(1) 注意动词搭配（"when you are communicate"→"when you communicate"）；(2) 避免填充词如“uh”；(3) 用连接词使逻辑更顺畅并给出具体原因或例子。

예시: Yes, definitely. Being polite is important when you communicate with older people or respected professionals, because it shows respect and makes conversations more comfortable and productive.

제안: 回答重复前一问题内容且语法有误。建议：(1) 直接给出场景并用连接词列举；(2) 修正语法（"when we are communicate"→"when we communicate"；"that are older than you"→"who are older than you"）；(3) 提供更多场景细节以丰富内容。

예시: We should be polite in formal settings like meetings, classrooms and family gatherings, and especially when talking to elders or authority figures, because politeness helps maintain respect and smooth interaction.

제안: 内容具体但语法和用词需要改进。建议：(1) 修正常见错误（"When I was child"→"When I was a child"；"elderly generations"→"elderly people"或"seniors"）；(2) 用过去时描述习惯（"I would"或"I used to"）；(3) 使用一到两个具体例子并保持句子简洁。

예시: When I was a child, I used to give up my seat on the bus to elderly people and I would greet them politely, saying "Good morning" to show my respect.

× Our teacher taught us pilotness and respect in the first lesson in our kindergarten, and I also learned it from my parents and teachers through their behavior.

✓ Our teacher taught us politeness and respect in the first lesson at our kindergarten, and I also learned them from my parents and teachers through their behavior.

问题类型接近“句子结构错误/用词错误”。原句中“pilotness”是拼写和词形错误，应为“politeness”。另外，搭配上应使用“at our kindergarten”而不是“in our kindergarten”以表达“在幼儿园”，并且“learned it”与前面并列的两个名词不一致，改为“learned them”。建议：注意单词拼写与可数/不可数、代词指代的一致性。

× Yes, definitely, especially when you are communicate with people uh who are older or have good reputations. Being polite shows your respect and it would help them to feel more comfortable in communication.

✓ Yes, definitely, especially when you are communicating with people who are older or have good reputations. Being polite shows your respect and it helps them feel more comfortable during communication.

第一句中应该使用现在进行时的动名词形式“communicating”，原句缺少-ing。第二句中“would help”与一般现在时背景不一致，改为“helps”。此外，“in communication”更自然为“during communication”或省略。建议：注意动词的-ing形式用于进行动词，主句时间一致时使用一般现在时。

× When we are communicate with teachers, professors or relatives that are older than you, is very essential to be polite, to show your respect and it could also help the communication be more comfortable.

✓ When we communicate with teachers, professors or relatives who are older than us, it is very important to be polite to show your respect, and it can also make communication more comfortable.

问题包含多处时态与结构错误：应使用“communicate”或“are communicating”（这里用一般现在时“communicate”更自然）。“that are older than you”中先行词为人，应使用关系代词“who”，且与主语一致改为“us”。句子主干缺少形式主语，需加“it is”。“essential”可用，但“very important”更自然；“could also help the communication be more comfortable”语序不当，改为“can also make communication more comfortable”。建议：注意关系代词用法、主语一致、以及句子完整结构（主语+谓语）。

× When I was child, I sometimes stood up on the bus or at the public transportation to give the seat to elderly generations and also I would actively say hello to them to show my respect.

✓ When I was a child, I sometimes stood up on the bus or on public transport to give my seat to elderly people, and I would also greet them to show my respect.

“When I was child”缺少不定冠词，正确为“a child”。“at the public transportation”搭配错误，常用“on public transport”或“on the bus”。“give the seat to elderly generations”表达不自然且“generations”用法错误，应为“give my seat to elderly people”或“to the elderly”。“actively say hello”改为更自然的“greet them”。建议：注意冠词使用、固定搭配（on public transport/on the bus）和名词选择（elderly people/the elderly）。