Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答需要更清晰的時態、一個明確的主題句，以及具體細節來支持敘述。避免填充詞（如 "uh" ）和重複，並使用連接詞使句子更流暢。你可以說明父母具體做了什麼（例如示範、糾正、獎勵）以及這些方式如何影響你的行為。

예시: When I was a child, my parents taught me manners by role-playing common situations, such as greeting relatives and saying thank you. They would correct me gently when I used the wrong words and praise me when I behaved politely, which encouraged me to keep practicing. As a result, I became more aware of how to show respect to others.

제안: 回答應使用正確語法並表達完整的觀點。先給出直接的主題句，接着用具體理由和例子支持你的看法，並使用連接詞（例如 "because", "for example"）。避免模糊或不完整的片語（如 "be implied" 或 "first phase of your social"）。

예시: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps you build good relationships at school and work. For example, polite behavior makes teachers and colleagues more willing to help you, and it creates a positive impression during interviews or group projects.

× Well, as a child, my parents will ask me to, uh, name the, the people we have met. They think it's, uh, respect, respect way to those ground, ground up and, uh.

✓ Well, as a child, my parents would ask me to name the people we had met. They thought it was a respectful way to teach me from the ground up.

问题类型对应：5（过去时问题），4（情态动词用法），26（句子结构错误），13（词语使用不当）。解释：原句中使用了“will ask”表示将来或习惯性现在，但说的是“作为孩子”过去的经历，所以应使用过去时或过去习惯式“would ask”。“we have met”在叙述过去的既定经历时，应使用过去完成或简单过去，这里改为“we had met”或“we met”；我选择过去完成以强调发生在那个时间之前的动作。句子“they think it's ... respect, respect way to those ground, ground up”词序混乱且用词不当，应改为“they thought it was a respectful way to teach me from the ground up”，把“respectful”用作形容词，明确“teach me”来表达教育的意思，且“from the ground up”为固定短语表示从基础开始。建议：当描述过去习惯时使用“would”或过去时；保持时态一致；用恰当的形容词（respect → respectful）；使用固定搭配（from the ground up）。

× Yes, be implied we make you have more chance during your study and work life because your behavior is the first phase of your social. Society.

✓ Yes, it implies that you will have more opportunities during your study and work life because your behavior is the first impression in society.

问题类型对应：4（情态动词/情态表达错误），6（现在时问题），26（句子结构错误），13（词语使用不当）。解释：原句“be implied we make you have more chance”语法混乱，缺主语和正确时态。应使用“It implies that...”来引导宾语从句。将“make you have more chance”改为更自然的表达“you will have more opportunities”。“during your study and work life”可保留。“your behavior is the first phase of your social. Society.”中“first phase of your social”不通顺，应改为“first impression in society”。因此整体改为现在时的一般陈述。建议：用固定表达“It implies that...”或“This means that...”；用“opportunities”替换“chance”；“first impression”是常用搭配，注意句子主谓完整且时态一致。