Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g. word order and articles) and avoid repetition. Aim for 2–4 sentences and include a brief example or result to make it more vivid.

예시: I learned politeness mainly at school. For example, every morning we were taught to greet teachers and to use polite phrases like “please” and “thank you,” which became a habit. Because of that practice, I now find it easy to show respect to adults and classmates.

제안: Provide a direct topic sentence, then support it with a clear reason and a short example. Fix collocations and articles (say “learning places” → “school” or “workplaces”), and avoid filler words like “Oh.” Keep it to 1–3 sentences and use a linking word to connect your reason.

예시: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps create respectful relationships at school and at work. For instance, polite communication makes teamwork smoother and reduces misunderstandings, which improves productivity.

× For example, I learned how to greet teachers properly on a daily basis and then how to answer teachers nicely.

✓ For example, I learned how to greet teachers properly on a daily basis and how to answer teachers politely.

The original sentence used 'then' which is unnecessary and slightly awkward in this context; more importantly, 'nicely' is grammatically acceptable but 'politely' is a more precise adjective/adverb for manners. This is an adjective/adverb choice issue, classified here as verb in the present participle form only because the error relates to form and usage of the verb phrase. Suggestion: remove 'then' and use 'politely' to clearly express manners.

× So in the school is the right place to me to learn how to treat people nicely.

✓ So the school was the right place for me to learn how to treat people kindly.

The original has incorrect word order ('in the school is the right place to me') and wrong preposition use ('to me'); this is a sentence structure and preposition problem. Reorder to 'the school was the right place for me' and use 'for me' as correct preposition. Also change 'nicely' to 'kindly' or 'politely' for natural collocation. Ensure past tense 'was' matches 'When I was a kid'.

× Oh absolutely proper attitude is extremely important in both learning place and working place

✓ Oh, absolutely, a proper attitude is extremely important in both learning environments and the workplace.

The phrase 'in both learning place and working place' uses incorrect and unnatural prepositions and noun forms. Use 'in' with 'the workplace' or better 'learning environments' for plural generality. Also add the article 'a' before 'proper attitude'. Add commas for natural speech. Suggestion: use 'learning environments' and 'the workplace' and include 'a'.

× When I was a kid, I learned proper attitude in school.

✓ When I was a kid, I learned a proper attitude at school.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'proper attitude' and uses the less natural preposition 'in school' (use 'at school' for being present in school). This is an article and preposition issue. Suggestion: use 'a proper attitude' and 'at school' to be idiomatic.