Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答需更自然、语法正确并直接回应问题。注意时态和动词形式（例如“teach”应为“taught”），使用更准确的词汇（e.g. “greet”代替“generate”），并用一到两句具体细节支持。避免重复词和冗余。可将回答控制在最多五句内，并用连接词使表达连贯。

예시: My parents taught me to be polite when I was a child. For example, they encouraged me to greet strangers and older people with a friendly “hello” and to use phrases like “please” and “thank you.” They also set an example by being respectful to others themselves.

제안: 回答要结构清晰，先给出直接观点，然后用具体理由或例子支持。修正语法和句子结构（例如“earn others' respect”应放在合适位置），避免语音填充词（um、uh）。使用连接词（because, for example, therefore）使逻辑更清楚。控制在最多五句内。

예시: Yes, I believe being polite is very important because it helps you earn other people's respect. For example, polite behavior at work or school can lead to better relationships and more cooperation from others. Therefore, I always try to be considerate and use polite language.

× When I was a child, my parents often teach teach me to be polite.

✓ When I was a child, my parents often taught me to be polite.

问题类型：过去时错误（ID 5）。句子描述的是过去发生的频繁动作，所以动词应使用过去时。原句用现在时“teach”两次且重复。建议将动词改为过去式“taught”，并删除重复词“teach”。

× For example, if I met stranger or the elder, they will teach me to generate them and say hi hello to them.

✓ For example, if I met a stranger or an elder, they would teach me to greet them and say hello to them.

问题类型：代词/冠词及时态混合错误（ID 12 与 22 与 6）。简要说明： 1) 名词前缺少不定冠词，应为“a stranger”与“an elder”。 2) 原句“they will teach”与上文过去时不一致，应使用过去时/过去习惯用法，改为“they would teach”或“they taught”。这里用“would teach”更能表达通常的过去习惯。 3) “generate them”用词错误，正确动词为“greet”表示打招呼；“hi hello”重复，保留“hello”或“say hello”。 建议使用“a/an”以及正确动词“greet”，并确保时态与前文一致。

× I think being polite is very important when you because it can earn respect earn others' respect compared to a people who respond who is implied um

✓ I think being polite is very important because it can earn others' respect compared to people who are rude.

问题类型：现在时/句子结构/用词错误（ID 6 与 26 与 13）。解释： 1) 原句中“when you”多余且造成句子不完整，应删除。 2) “earn respect earn others' respect”重复，保留“earn others' respect”。 3) “compared to a people who respond who is implied um”结构混乱，意思不明确。把意思改为“与粗鲁的人相比”（“people who are rude”）。 建议把句子简化为“because it can earn others' respect compared to people who are rude”，保证语义清晰和语法正确。