Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答总体清晰但存在语法错误、拼写错误和表达不够自然的问题。建议：1) 修正语法和拼写（例如 “They all so cite” 应为 “They also set” 或 “They set”）；2) 用一到两句补充具体细节（举例说明父母如何示范，比如通过日常对话或礼貌行为）；3) 使用连接词使句子更连贯（例如 “for example” 或 “for instance”）。这些改进会使回答更自然、具体并且更符合雅思评分标准。

예시: I learned to be polite mostly from my parents when I was young. They always reminded me to say “please” and “thank you”, and they set a good example by being courteous to others. For example, my father always greeted neighbors and my mother taught me to listen patiently when someone was speaking.

제안: 回答内容正确且直接，但有小的语法问题和可以扩展的空间。建议：1) 修正语法（“a good relationships” 应为 “good relationships” 或 “a good relationship”）；2) 用一两个具体结果或例子支持观点（例如说明礼貌如何在学校或工作中带来积极影响）；3) 使用连接词（例如 “because” 或 “as a result”）使逻辑更清晰。这样可以增加回答的说服力和细节深度。

예시: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it shows respect and makes communication smoother. For instance, being polite at work can help you get along with colleagues and make teamwork more effective. As a result, polite people often build stronger professional and personal relationships.

× They all so cite a great example for me.

✓ They also set a great example for me.

原句中“all so”是拼写/词序错误，应为“also”。此外，动词“cite”用法不当，通常表示引用（quote），而不是树立榜样，应改为“set”。改正后句子更自然、语义准确。建议：注意常见副词拼写（also），并区分常混淆动词的语义（cite vs. set）。

× Politeness shows respect for others and helps build a good relationships.

✓ Politeness shows respect for others and helps build good relationships.

原句中“a good relationships”存在冠词与名词数不匹配问题（单数冠词a + 复数名词relationships）。应去掉冠词或将名词改为单数（a good relationship）。此处语境更常用复数形式“good relationships”。建议：检查冠词与名词单复数一致性，复数名词前不加不定冠词a。