Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer more direct and grammatical: begin with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, reduce repetition, and add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., “because,” “for example,” “so”). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I learned to be polite mainly at school because my teachers taught us how to respect others. For example, they encouraged us to say “please” and “thank you” and to listen when classmates were speaking, which helped me earn respect from others.

제안: Answer directly with a clear opinion, avoid repeating the same phrase, and provide a specific reason and brief example. Use linking words like “because” or “therefore” to make your point coherent. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps you build strong relationships. For instance, when I am polite to colleagues and family members, they are more willing to help me and communicate openly.

× I started to learn being polite person when when I when I was a child, when my teacher teach us to be polite to the other people and respect another children to gain another respect from the others.

✓ I started to learn to be a polite person when I was a child, when my teacher taught us to be polite to other people and to respect other children in order to gain respect from others.

Errors: incorrect use of verb + -ing after 'learn' (should be 'learn to do'), extra repeated words 'when', missing article before 'polite person', incorrect verb tense 'teach' should be past 'taught', incorrect prepositions and articles 'the other people' and 'another children', awkward phrase 'gain another respect from the others'. Suggestions: Use 'learn to + base verb' (learn to be), remove duplicates, use 'a polite person', use past simple for past events (taught), use 'other people' and 'other children', and rephrase final purpose as 'to gain respect from others' or 'in order to gain respect from others'.

× my teacher teach us to be polite to the other people and respect another children to gain another respect from the others.

✓ My teacher taught us to be polite to other people and to respect other children to gain respect from others.

Errors: 'teach' is present tense but the context is past; 'the other people' and 'another children' misuse articles and quantifiers; 'another respect' is incorrect. Suggestions: Use past tense 'taught', use 'other people' and 'other children', and use 'respect from others' without 'another'.

× to be polite to the other people and respect another children to gain another respect from the others.

✓ to be polite to other people and to respect other children in order to gain respect from others.

Errors: unnecessary definite article 'the' with 'other people', wrong preposition/phrase 'from the others' and awkward infinitive sequence. Suggestions: Remove 'the' before 'other people', use 'in order to' for purpose, and use 'respect from others'.

× when my teacher teach us to be polite to the other people

✓ when my teacher taught us to be polite to other people

Errors: 'teacher' (singular) requires past tense 'taught' in this context; 'teach' disagrees with past timeframe. Suggestions: Use past simple 'taught' to agree with subject and past time reference; also remove 'the' before 'other people'.

× I think being polite is a important behavior for us, for individual people, so that you can earn respect from another person and you can gain some respect from your family or other friends.

✓ I think being polite is an important behavior for individuals, so you can earn respect from other people and gain respect from your family and friends.

Errors: 'a important' should be 'an important' (article before vowel sound), awkward phrasing 'for individual people', inconsistent use of 'another person' and 'some respect'. Suggestions: Use 'an important', use 'individuals' or 'people', use 'other people' and 'gain respect' without 'some'.

× so that you can earn respect from another person and you can gain some respect from your family or other friends.

✓ so you can earn respect from other people and gain respect from your family and friends.

Errors: 'another person' is too specific and inconsistent with general statement; 'other friends' is redundant after 'family'. Suggestions: Use plural 'other people' for generalization and list 'family and friends' without 'other'.

× So that politeness is very important.

✓ So, politeness is very important.

Errors: sentence beginning 'So that' is incorrect connector; also no verb agreement issue but phrasing is wrong. Suggestions: Use 'So,' or 'Therefore,' before the clause; keep 'politeness is very important.'