Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 答题有直接回应问题并给出细节，但存在语法时态、单数复数和句子连贯性问题，且部分表达重复。建议：1) 注意时态和主谓一致（例如“we saw them”应为“we saw”或“we met them”）；2) 用连接词使信息更连贯（例如“for example, because, so”）；3) 删除冗余短语并增加更具体的例子（例如具体场景或家人如何示范）。练习时尽量控制在3–4句内，语句自然流畅。

예시: My parents taught me manners from a young age. For example, they always told me to say “thank you” and “sorry” and to greet both elders and children when we met them. They also led by example—my mother would bow slightly to older relatives, so I learned polite behavior by watching her.

제안: 回答直接但较简短，包含重复和不自然表达（如“at the first time”应为“for the first time”或“the first time they meet someone”）。建议：1) 扩展原因并给出具体影响或例子（例如职场或社交场合的例子）；2) 使用连接词（because, therefore, for example）来增强逻辑；3) 注意固定搭配（例如“in my culture”后接具体习惯）。保持2–3个支持句以丰富内容。

예시: Yes, I believe politeness is very important because it helps build good first impressions. For example, in China people often use polite greetings and modest language when they meet someone new, which creates mutual respect and smoother relationships. Therefore, being polite can be helpful both socially and professionally.

× When I was a child, my parents always taught me to be polite to the elderly and the kids and they always taught me to say thank you or sorry to other people.

✓ When I was a child, my parents always taught me to be polite to the elderly and to children, and they always taught me to say "thank you" or "sorry" to other people.

句子中原本使用的短语“the kids”在此上下文中不如“children”自然；同时并列结构中“to be polite to the elderly and the kids and they always taught me...”读起来重复且不够平衡。将并列不定式的对象统一为“to the elderly and to children”，保持结构一致性；并用引号标注“thank you”和“sorry”作为固定短语。此外整体时态为过去时（When I was a child），使用“taught”是正确的，主要调整为更自然和结构对称的表达。建议：在列举对象时用平行结构（重复 to 或不重复都要保持一致），并用更通用的词（children）。

× Also, I must greet people when we saw them.

✓ Also, I had to greet people when we saw them.

原句混用了情态动词“must”（表现在或普遍真理）与过去时间状语“when we saw them”，时态不一致。因为描述过去的习惯或要求，应使用过去时的情态表达“had to”或直接用一般过去时。这里改为“had to”更好地表示过去的义务或习惯。建议：描述过去的义务或习惯时，用过去时（had to / would / used to）而不是现在时的 must。

× In my culture in China, people all try to be polite when they meet people, and mostly they will stay polite when they meet people at the first time.

✓ In my culture in China, people generally try to be polite when they meet others, and mostly they remain polite when they meet someone for the first time.

句子存在时态和用词不自然的问题：1) “people all try” 改为更自然的“people generally try”；2) 第二部分用“will stay polite”不必要地引入未来将来时，且与一般习惯描述不符，应使用一般现在时“remain polite”；3) “when they meet people at the first time” 是不正确的表达，正确说法为“when they meet someone for the first time”。此外将重复的“people”替换为“others/ someone”使句子更自然。建议：描述常态或习惯时用一般现在时，使用自然搭配如 “for the first time”。