Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn nên tập trung vào cấu trúc câu đúng (thì quá khứ), chia động từ phù hợp và ngắt câu rõ ràng. Tránh lặp từ và dùng từ sai (ví dụ: "scam" không đúng ngữ cảnh). Nên mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn nêu rõ ai dạy bạn và khi nào, rồi thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ hành động của cha bạn hoặc kỷ luật cụ thể). Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản như "then" hoặc "so" để nối ý và giữ tổng số câu không quá 5.

예시: My father taught me to be polite when I was a child. I was sometimes rude to my grandparents, so he scolded me and explained why manners are important. He also showed me how to speak respectfully and encouraged me to apologize when I was wrong.

제안: Bạn cần trả lời trực tiếp, dùng cấu trúc câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh các lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: dùng tính từ/ trạng từ đúng: "polite" đúng là tính từ nhưng phải dùng cùng động từ phù hợp). Tránh các cấu trúc không tự nhiên như "we could" hay "gonna" trong bài thi. Thêm một lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ ngắn để làm rõ quan điểm, dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "therefore" để kết nối ý.

예시: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps you build good relationships. When you show respect and listen carefully, people are more likely to trust and help you. For example, polite behavior at work can lead to better cooperation and new opportunities.

× I learn to be polite and actually when I am actually I has impolite with my grandparents so my father would scam at me and teach me how to polite without it.

✓ I learned to be polite, and actually when I was younger I was impolite with my grandparents, so my father would scold me and teach me how to be polite.

Incorrect tense and verb forms: the student uses 'learn' (present) but the context is past, so use 'learned' and 'was'. 'I has impolite' is wrong: subject-verb agreement and adjective use; correct is 'I was impolite'. 'would scam at me' is incorrect vocabulary and spelling; 'scold' fits meaning. 'teach me how to polite' is missing 'to be' and wrong form; use 'teach me how to be polite'. Use commas to separate clauses for clarity. Suggestions: use past tense consistently for childhood events, ensure subject-verb agreement, choose correct verbs ('scold' not 'scam'), and include 'to be' before adjectives when needed.

× Yes, of course we could.

✓ Yes, of course we do.

Tense/modal error: 'we could' suggests possibility rather than agreement. The examiner asked if being polite is important; a present simple affirmative response 'we do' or 'it is' is appropriate. Suggestion: use 'Yes, of course' followed by present simple ('it is' or 'we are') to express agreement.

× When you polite with everyone, everyone will love you and very trust you, so everything gonna be very good for you.

✓ When you are polite with everyone, everyone will like and trust you very much, so everything will be better for you.

Missing verb 'are' before adjective: use 'are polite'. 'Love' is strong; 'like' or 'respect' may be more natural but 'like' is acceptable. 'very trust you' is incorrect adverb placement and collocation; use 'trust you very much'. 'gonna' is informal and wrong in formal speech; use 'will be' or 'will be better'. Also adjust word order: 'trust you very much'. Suggestions: include the appropriate form of 'be' with adjectives, place adverbs like 'very much' after the verb, avoid informal contractions like 'gonna' in formal responses.