Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement and tense), use a clear topic sentence, reduce redundancy, and add one specific brief example to make the answer more concrete. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use linking words (for example, 'for instance' or 'so').

예시: I learned to be polite from my parents, who were good role models. They raised me in a traditional family and consistently encouraged good manners, teaching me to say ‘please’ and ‘thank you’. For instance, when I forgot to say thank you, my mother would gently remind me and explain why it mattered.

제안: Fix grammatical errors, use a clear topic sentence, avoid vague phrasing like 'except', and provide one concrete effect or example. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'therefore' to show cause and result. Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

예시: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it shows respect for others and leaves a positive impression. As a result, people feel more comfortable around you and daily interactions, such as asking for help or working in a team, become much smoother.

× I learned to be polite as a child because my parents were good role model.

✓ I learned to be polite as a child because my parents were good role models.

The noun 'role model' should be plural to agree with the plural subject 'my parents'. This is an incorrect use of a noun form (treated like an adjective/adverb error in given list). Suggestion: make the noun plural when referring to more than one person: 'role models'.

× We grow up in a traditional family where they consistently encourage manner, taught me to say please and thank you, and corrected me gently when I was rude.

✓ We grew up in a traditional family where they consistently encouraged good manners, taught me to say 'please' and 'thank you', and corrected me gently when I was rude.

The sentence mixes present tense 'grow' with past actions 'taught' and 'corrected'. Because the context is childhood, past tense should be used: 'grew up' and 'encouraged'. Also 'manner' is uncountable here; use plural 'good manners'. Suggestions: keep past tense consistent for past events and use correct noun form 'good manners'.

× Of course being polite is very important because it's reflect your respect for other and leave a positive impression.

✓ Of course being polite is very important because it reflects your respect for others and leaves a positive impression.

Use third person singular verb forms with subject 'it': 'reflects' and 'leaves'. Also 'other' should be plural 'others' when referring to people in general. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with their singular subject and pluralize general references: 'others'.

× Except people feel comfortable and value when they are around you and it can make daily interaction much more pleasant.

✓ Also, people feel comfortable and valued when they are around you, and it can make daily interactions much more pleasant.

'Except' is incorrectly used; 'also' or 'besides' fits here to add information. 'Value' should be past participle 'valued' to describe people feeling a certain way. 'Interaction' should be plural 'interactions' for general situations. Suggestion: use appropriate conjunctions for linking ideas and correct adjective/verb forms: 'also', 'valued', 'interactions'.