Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Focus on grammatical accuracy, concise phrasing, and clearer linking. Correct article and verb forms (a → no article or 'good manners' → 'good manners' without 'a'; 'encourage' → 'encouraged'; 'that's habits has' → 'those habits have'). Keep answer within 3–4 sentences: give a topic sentence, one specific example, and a brief result. Use a linking phrase like 'for example' and a result phrase like 'as a result'.

예시: My parents taught me good manners when I was a child. For example, they encouraged me to say 'sorry' and 'thank you' and to respect others. As a result, those habits have stayed with me, and I try to act politely in everyday life because I believe it matters.

제안: Improve grammar, word choice and coherence. Fix subject-verb agreement ('represent' → 'represents'), incorrect words ('countries' → 'courtesy' or 'courtesies'), and plural/singular forms ('relationship each others' → 'relationships with others'). Remove fillers like 'uh'. Structure into a clear topic sentence, a reason, and a brief example or result. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'therefore' to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it represents our families and cultural values. It also shows basic courtesy towards others; therefore, politeness helps build better relationships and makes everyday interactions more pleasant and respectful.

× To be honest, my parents taught me a good manners when I was a child.

✓ To be honest, my parents taught me good manners when I was a child.

The phrase 'a good manners' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'manners'. Remove the article so the plural noun stands alone: 'good manners'. (grammar_problem_type_id:22)

× For example, they always encourage me to say sorry or thank you and to be respectful to others.

✓ For example, they always encouraged me to say 'sorry' or 'thank you' and to be respectful to others.

The rest of the sentence refers to past habit 'when I was a child', so the verb should be past tense 'encouraged' to match time reference. Also short phrases like 'sorry' and 'thank you' are better set off with quotes or commas. This is a tense consistency issue categorized under adjusting verb forms to past context. (grammar_problem_type_id:10)

× That's habits has stayed with me and I still try to act politely in my everyday life because I believe it really matters.

✓ Those habits have stayed with me, and I still try to act politely in my everyday life because I believe it really matters.

'That's habits has' is incorrect: 'habits' is plural so use plural demonstrative 'those' and plural verb 'have'. Also combine clauses with a comma and conjunction for clarity. (grammar_problem_type_id:27)

× Of course, I strongly believe being polite is very important because it represent our families, cultures and traditions, shows basic countries towards others.

✓ Of course, I strongly believe being polite is very important because it represents our families, cultures and traditions and shows basic courtesy towards others.

'Represent' must be 'represents' to agree with singular subject 'being polite'. 'Shows' should remain singular 'shows' if tied to the same subject; the phrase 'basic countries' is incorrect word choice and should be 'basic courtesy'. Also add 'and' to link the two effects. (grammar_problem_type_id:6)

× Politeness helps uh build better relationship each others and make everyday interactions more pleasant and respectful.

✓ Politeness helps build better relationships with others and makes everyday interactions more pleasant and respectful.

Problems: 'helps uh build' — remove filler 'uh' and use base verb 'build' after 'helps'. 'Relationship' should be plural 'relationships' to match general statement. 'Each others' is incorrect; use 'with others'. Finally, subject 'Politeness' is singular so verb should be 'makes' not 'make'. (grammar_problem_type_id:12)