Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant and clear but can be improved in naturalness, coherence, and specificity. Start with a concise topic sentence, then add one or two specific examples using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like “diverse manners” and correct small grammar issues (e.g., “my friend ask” → “my friends asked”). Keep answers to no more than 3–4 sentences.

예시: I learned to be polite mainly from my mother and teachers. For example, my mother always reminded me to say “please” and “thank you,” and my teachers corrected me when I interrupted classmates. As a result, polite habits became automatic for me.

제안: Your response expresses a clear opinion but needs better structure, grammatical accuracy, and clearer examples. Begin with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No + reason). Use linking words (for example, however, because) and give a specific, grammatically correct illustration. Replace vague or incorrect words like “route” with “rude.” Limit to 2–3 sentences for clarity.

예시: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it builds trust and cooperation. For example, if a friend asks for help politely, I’m much more likely to assist them; however, I would be reluctant to help if they were rude and demanding.

× When I was a child, if I had some rude behaviors, my mother and my teachers taught me correct manners immediately.

✓ When I was a child, if I displayed rude behavior, my mother and my teachers taught me the correct manners immediately.

Original uses 'had some rude behaviors' which is unnatural for English; 'displayed rude behavior' or 'behaved rudely' fits past tense context. Also use singular 'behavior' or uncountable, and add the definite article 'the' before 'correct manners' because specific manners taught are implied. Maintain past tense throughout.

× Therefore, I remember diverse manners right now.

✓ Therefore, I still remember various manners now.

Original uses 'diverse manners' and 'right now' awkwardly. 'Various' is a more natural adjective for different examples, and 'still remember' indicates continuation from past to present. Use 'now' rather than 'right now' for more natural phrasing.

× Of course, for example, if my friend ask me some question sincerely, I will want to help them, but if they just ask me directly and route, I won't help them.

✓ Of course, for example, if my friend asks me a question sincerely, I will want to help them, but if they just ask me directly and rudely, I won't help them.

Subject-verb agreement: 'my friend' requires the third person singular verb 'asks' not 'ask'. Use 'a question' (singular) rather than 'some question'. 'Route' is a misspelling; the intended word is 'rude' or adverb 'rudely' to modify 'ask'. 'Rudely' is preferred to describe how they ask. The sentence keeps future intention 'will want' which fits the context.