Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn về cách bạn học phép lịch sự; tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ thừa, dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng rồi giải thích chi tiết. Cụ thể: (1) Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp cơ bản (thời quá khứ, chia động từ, đại từ), (2) Loại bỏ từ lặp lại và mệnh đề không hoàn chỉnh, (3) Cung cấp 1–2 ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: cha mẹ dạy chào người lớn, cúi đầu, nói 'cảm ơn'), và (4) Dùng liên từ để nối ý cho mạch lạc (because, so, when).

예시: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents when I was a child. They taught me simple habits like greeting adults, saying 'thank you', and using polite words. For example, my mother always reminded me to say hello when someone arrived at our house, so I practiced it every day. Because of that, these habits became natural for me.

제안: Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, mạch lạc và tránh lặp ý. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes, I do) rồi nêu 2 lý do chính tối đa; (2) Dùng liên từ để nối ý (because, therefore, also); (3) Tránh lặp từ (stronger relationship / healthier, better — chọn một); (4) Thêm một ví dụ ngắn hoặc kết luận để hoàn thiện. Hãy để độ dài không quá 5 câu và ngữ pháp chính xác (số động từ, thì).

예시: Yes, I believe being polite is very important because it helps build trust and respect in relationships. For example, saying 'please' and 'thank you' makes others feel appreciated, which strengthens friendships. Also, polite behaviour makes social interactions smoother and more pleasant for everyone.

× As a child, I used to learn about pride by by my parents.

✓ As a child, I learned about pride from my parents.

Original has redundant 'used to learn' and incorrect preposition phrase 'by by my parents'. Use simple past 'learned' for a past habitual fact and 'from' to indicate source. Suggestions: use 'learned' or 'was taught' and replace 'by' with 'from'.

× They often told me that I've When someone go to go home, you have to greet them with a welcome and yeah.

✓ They often told me that when someone goes home, you should greet them and welcome them.

Multiple problems: 'I've' is incorrect/incomplete (sentence fragment), verb form 'go' should be third person singular 'goes', and wording 'greet them with a welcome' is unnatural. Use reported speech with past tense 'told' and present simple in general rule 'when someone goes home'. Use modal 'should' for advice and 'welcome them' or 'greet them' as verb phrase. Suggestions: remove 'I've', change 'go' to 'goes', use 'should' or 'have to' consistently, and rewrite awkward phrase.

× Yes, I think being polite is very important because it makes people feel good about you and being polite make you feel better and you will get a stronger relationship and a relationship that is healthier, better.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important because it makes people feel good about you, and being polite makes you feel better; you will have stronger, healthier relationships.

Error: 'being polite make' should be 'makes' (subject-verb agreement). Awkward repetition 'a stronger relationship and a relationship that is healthier, better' should be condensed: plural 'relationships' fits general statement. Use adjectives in correct order 'stronger, healthier'. Suggestions: ensure verb agrees with singular subject 'being polite' and avoid redundant phrases; prefer plural when speaking generally.

× Also being polite helps you have gained more respect from people and from friends.

✓ Also, being polite helps you gain more respect from people and friends.

'Helps you have gained' mixes present simple 'helps' with past participle 'gained' incorrectly. Use base form after 'helps' ('helps you gain'). 'From people and from friends' is redundant; 'people and friends' overlap, so simplify. Suggestions: after 'help' use the base verb (help someone do something), and remove redundant prepositions/phrases.