Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更有条理并尽量使用完整时态，避免重复和口头禅。先用一句主题句直接回答（例如：I learned manners from my family and school），然后用一到两句具体说明（什么时候、谁教的、具体礼貌用语），最后可补充一句短结论。注意使用连接词（for example, also）和正确的过去时态来描述童年经历。

예시: I learned to be polite mainly from my family and kindergarten. For example, when I went shopping with my mother she taught me to greet her friends and say "hello" to older women. My kindergarten teachers also taught us to say "please" and "thank you" when asking for things. These early lessons helped shape my manners.

제안: 回答需更清晰、有逻辑并提供具体原因或例子。先给出明确观点（Yes/No加理由概述），然后用一到两条具体理由支持（例如：it builds good relationships; it shows respect），最后用一句总结。避免重复词汇和犹豫语气，使用连词（because, so, therefore）来连接句子。

예시: Yes, I believe being polite is very important because it creates a good first impression and helps build positive relationships. For instance, people are more likely to help or trust someone who says "please" and "thank you". Therefore, politeness can make daily interactions smoother and more pleasant.

× When I'm small, when I go shopping with my mom and see my mom friends and my mom will teach me to say hi to some aunties and in the kindergarten school they will also teach me to say thank you or umm.

✓ When I was small, when I went shopping with my mom and saw my mom's friends, my mom taught me to say hi to some aunties, and in kindergarten they also taught me to say thank you.

问题类型（6：现时态问题）：原句时态混用且与描述的过去经历不一致。句中使用了现在时（"I'm"、"go"、"see"、"will teach"）但语境是讲童年回忆，应使用过去时。建议将动词改为过去式（was, went, saw, taught），并修正名词所有格（mom's friends）和冗余表达（'the kindergarten school' 改为 'kindergarten'）。此外，句子通过适当的标点和连接词分开，语义更清晰。

× Yes, I think being polite is very important because I think it's the first memory when people see you if you very rude and I think a lot of people don't like you or just hate you while so being so, uh, rude and I think it's.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important because it's the first impression people have of you. If you are very rude, many people won't like you or may even dislike you for being rude.

问题类型（27：主谓一致/句子结构错误）：原句结构混乱，存在主谓不一致和词汇使用错误（'first memory' 应为 'first impression'；缺少动词 'are' 在 'if you very rude' 中；重复和赘述使句子不完整）。建议使用明确的主语和谓语，修正词汇（memory → impression），补全缺失动词，并去掉重复部分，使表达简洁通顺。