Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, clarity and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct verb forms, and add one or two specific supporting details linked with a connector. Keep it natural and within 3–4 sentences.

예시: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. Because both of them were teachers, they corrected my manners and taught me how to behave in public. For example, they always reminded me to say “please” and “thank you,” and to greet elders respectfully.

제안: Fix word choice and sentence structure, avoid overgeneralisation and use linking words to add a reason and an example. Be specific and balanced in your opinion.

예시: Yes, I think being polite is very important, especially when visiting another country. If visitors are rude, they can create a negative impression of their home country; therefore, polite behaviour helps build mutual respect. For instance, simple actions like following local customs and speaking politely can prevent misunderstandings.

× Well as a kid I learned how to be played by my parent.

✓ Well, as a kid I learned how to behave from my parents.

Original sentence uses 'be played' which is incorrect passive and 'parent' singular with context; the intended meaning is 'learned how to behave' and the source is 'from my parents'. This fixes verb choice (behave) and preposition (from). Suggestion: use active verb 'behave' and correct preposition 'from' and plural 'parents'.

× Since my parents were all teachers, they are straight to my manners and they will told me how to react like a good citizen.

✓ Since my parents were all teachers, they were strict about my manners and they told me how to behave like a good citizen.

Multiple errors: 'are straight to my manners' is incorrect word choice and preposition — should be 'were strict about my manners'. Tense consistency: sentence begins with past 'were', so following verbs should be past: 'will told' is wrong; use 'told'. Also 'react like a good citizen' is better as 'behave like a good citizen'. Suggestion: keep past tense and use correct adjective 'strict' and preposition 'about', and past verb 'told'.

× Yes, being plied is significant to our each individuals, especially when we visit a foreign country.

✓ Yes, being polite is important for each of us, especially when we visit a foreign country.

'Being plied' is a wrong word; intended 'polite'. 'Significant to our each individuals' is ungrammatical — use 'important for each of us' or 'important to individuals'. Also 'important' is more natural than 'significant' here. Suggestion: use 'polite' and correct phrase 'each of us' or 'individuals'.

× For example, many Chinese visitors have ill behaviors in foreign countries which leave a bad impression to local people and this is very harmful for our country.

✓ For example, many Chinese visitors behave poorly in foreign countries, which leaves a bad impression on local people and is very harmful to our country.

Problems: 'have ill behaviors' is unnatural — use 'behave poorly'. Relative clause subject-verb agreement: 'which leave' should be 'which leaves' because the clause refers to 'a bad impression' (singular). Prepositions: use 'leave a bad impression on' rather than 'to'. Also combine clauses for clarity and use 'harmful to our country'. Suggestion: use natural collocations ('behave poorly', 'leave a bad impression on') and correct subject-verb agreement in the relative clause.