Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn nên sửa ngữ pháp cơ bản (thì và dạng động từ), hoàn chỉnh câu chủ đề và nối các ý rõ ràng hơn. Cụ thể: dùng quá khứ đơn cho hành động trong quá khứ (learned), dùng động từ đúng dạng (I learned, not I learning), thêm mạo từ hoặc đại từ khi cần (someone who helped me), và sắp xếp ý theo trình tự hợp lý (ai dạy bạn, họ dạy cái gì, tại sao). Hạn chế lặp từ và giữ tối đa 3–4 câu ngắn gọn.

예시: I learned to be polite from my parents when I was a child. They always encouraged me to say "please" and "thank you". By doing this, they taught me how to show gratitude and respect to others, which helped me build better relationships.

제안: Bạn cần diễn đạt rõ ràng ý chính và sửa cấu trúc câu. Tránh viết tắt không rõ nghĩa (BEP), dùng thì và chia động từ đúng (it helps, someone who helped me), và loại bỏ các phần không rõ ràng hoặc dư thừa. Nên có một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes, it is important) và 1–2 câu giải thích cụ thể với từ nối như "because" hoặc "so" để làm rõ lý do.

예시: Yes, I believe being polite is very important because it helps to show gratitude and respect. For example, when you say "thank you" or listen politely, people feel appreciated, so it is easier to maintain good relationships.

× I learning to be polite when I was a child from my parents.

✓ I learned to be polite when I was a child from my parents.

The verb 'learning' is incorrect in this past context. Use the past simple 'learned' to match 'when I was a child'. Suggestion: Use past simple for completed actions in the past (I learned).

× They often told me to say please and thank you because it will help me show my gratitude and respect for someone help me.

✓ They often told me to say please and thank you because it would help me show my gratitude and respect to someone who helps me.

Multiple issues: 'will' is not consistent with past-tense reporting ('told me... because it would'). Use 'would'. 'for someone help me' is ungrammatical; use relative clause 'someone who helps me' or 'someone who helped me' depending on meaning. Also change 'show my gratitude and respect for' to 'show my gratitude and respect to'. Suggestion: Keep tense consistency in reported speech and use proper relative clause and preposition.

× Yes, I think BEP is very important because it's help me show my gratitude and respect for someone who have me in a dissent is also have me take in talk a good relationship.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps me show my gratitude and respect to people who are kind to me and helps me build good relationships.

Several grammar errors fixed: 'BEP' unclear; replace with 'being polite'. 'it's help' should be 'it helps' (third person singular). 'for someone who have me in a dissent' is ungrammatical; use 'people who are kind to me' or 'people who help me'. 'is also have me take in talk a good relationship' corrected to 'and helps me build good relationships.' Suggestion: Use subject-verb agreement (helps), clearer vocabulary, and simpler sentence structure to express benefits.