Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が不明瞭で文法や語順の誤りが多く、内容も曖昧です。まず主題文で直接答え（誰から学んだか、どうやって学んだか）を明確に述べ、その後で理由や具体例を1〜2文で補足してください。接続詞（for example, because, so）を使って文のつながりをはっきりさせ、不要な言い淀み（uh, umなど）は避けましょう。語彙は “learned”, “taught”, “parents”, “teachers”, “forced”, “observing”, “examples” など基本的な語を正確に使う練習をしてください。

예시: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. They taught me basic manners such as saying “please” and “thank you,” and they corrected me when I was rude. For example, my mother always reminded me to greet guests politely, so it became a habit.

제안: 答えは肯定しているが、理由の説明が不明瞭で語法の誤りがある（'I will'の誤用、'neutral communication will be reubricated'は意味不明）。まず短い直接的な主題文で賛意を示し、次に2つ程度の具体的な理由を論理的に述べてください。接続詞（because, so, therefore）や比較表現を使い、結果や感情を明確に伝えましょう。語彙は “improve relationships”, “show respect”, “create a positive atmosphere” など実用的な表現を使うと良いです。

예시: Yes, I think being polite is very important. Being polite shows respect and helps to build better relationships with others. For example, polite behavior at work can make teamwork smoother and create a more positive atmosphere.

× It was not it was tired as fair action, but it was after definitely uh, not by my parents.

✓ It was not something I learned fairly; it definitely did not come from my parents.

The original sentence has unclear structure and several grammar issues: redundant phrases ('it was not it was'), incorrect word choice ('tired' vs 'learned' or 'something'), and misplaced modifiers ('as fair action', 'after'). Rewriting into a clear clause 'It was not something I learned fairly' and adding 'it definitely did not come from my parents' corrects the sentence structure and meaning. Suggestion: identify the intended meaning, use a single subject and verb per clause, and replace incorrect vocabulary with appropriate words.

× I uh was forced her because the polite person that is kind for other.

✓ I was forced to be polite because I thought it was kind to others.

Errors include incorrect verb form and preposition: 'was forced her' is ungrammatical; the passive verb should be followed by 'to' + base verb ('forced to be'). Also 'kind for other' should be 'kind to others'. The corrected sentence uses 'was forced to be polite' and 'kind to others'. Suggestion: after 'forced' use 'to' plus infinitive; use 'to' with 'kind' and plural 'others'.

× Yes, I will. Of course. I think I like not only I can make others happy, but also I will also become happy because neutral communication will be reubricated and.

✓ Yes, of course. I think not only can I make others happy, but I will also become happy because neutral communication will be reestablished.

Multiple tense and word-choice problems: 'Yes, I will' is unnecessary and unclear; 'I like not only I can' mixes structures—use inversion 'not only can I' or 'not only do I'. 'Will also become' is acceptable but restructure for clarity. 'Neutral communication will be reubricated' uses a wrong verb ('reubricated' is not standard); 'reestablished' or 'restored' fits. Suggestion: remove redundant modal, use correct 'not only... but also' structure, and replace nonstandard words with correct verbs.