Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更自然并有完整結構。先用一句主題句直接回答（I learned manners from my parents），接着用1–2句具體細節說明如何學習（例如父母示範、糾正行為或通過故事/規矩），並使用連接詞讓句子更連貫（for example, they would…; also）。避免語法錯誤和冗詞，注意動詞形式和冠詞使用。

예시: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. For example, they always modelled polite behaviour by greeting neighbours and saying “thank you,” and they would gently correct me when I forgot to say please. As a result, good manners became a habit for me.

제안: 回答需更精確且自然，避免口頭語和重複（如 “I mean” 或多餘助動詞）。用一個清楚的主題句表明立場，然後給出1–2個具體理由或例子，並用連接詞（because, so, for example）連接句子。注意語法（主語與動詞一致，正確的情態動詞形式）。

예시: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it helps people communicate respectfully. For example, when you greet someone politely and listen carefully, others are more willing to talk and cooperate with you.

× Usually my parents told me how to be polite such as say hello, thank you to adult.

✓ Usually my parents taught me how to be polite, such as saying "hello" and "thank you" to adults.

此句有多处问题：1) 动词搭配不当：用 told me how to be polite 后面接具体示范，动词 teach 比 told 更合适；2) 不定式/动名词形式错误：列举行为时应使用动名词 saying，而不是原形 say；3) 介词及名词单复数问题：应为 "to adults"（复数），不是 "to adult"；4) 句子需要适当的标点和并列连词（and）。改进建议：使用 teach 表示教导，列举动作时用动名词形式，并注意名词单复数一致。

× I mean, only if you be polite, people can may can talk to you.

✓ I mean, only if you are polite, people can talk to you.

此句问题包括：1) 动词形式错误：条件句中应使用 be 的适当形式 are（主语 you）；2) 情态动词重复且混用："can may can" 是错误的，句中只需使用一个情态动词 can 表示能力或可能性；3) 句子结构需简洁清晰。改进建议：条件从句用正确的动词形式（you are），并只使用一个情态动词（can）。