Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 问题回答要更直接并注意时态和语法，避免重复与拼写错误。可以先用一句话总结主要来源（如父母和老师），然后用一到两句具体举例说明（例如父母如何示范、学校里的礼貌课程或阅读带来的具体礼仪）。连接词（for example, also, because）能让逻辑更清晰。注意单词拼写（polite, books, please/appliances 等）并把句子控制在不超过五句内。

예시: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents and teachers. For example, my parents always reminded me to say “please” and “thank you” when asking for something. At school, teachers taught us manners through role‑playing activities, which helped me practice polite responses. Also, reading children’s books about good behaviour reinforced these lessons.

제안: 回答要明确、语法正确并补充具体理由或例子。首先直接给出观点（Yes, it is very important），然后用一到两句说明原因并举例。注意用词和搭配（polite 而非 play；politeness can help build good relationships / shows respect to others）。使用连接词（because, for example, therefore）提高连贯性。

예시: Yes, I think being polite is very important because politeness helps build and maintain good relationships. For example, saying “thank you” and listening respectfully to others shows that you value them, which makes people more willing to cooperate. Therefore, polite behaviour often leads to better friendships and working relationships.

× And in many ways at home my parents will teach me, at school my student my teachers will teach me.

✓ In many ways, at home my parents taught me, and at school my teachers taught me.

问题类型：句子结构错误（26）。原句中有冗余连接词“And”且结构混乱，且“my student my teachers”显然是笔误或重复。根据上下文谈童年经历，应使用过去时（taught）。建议把句子拆成两部分并用连接词“and”连接，去掉多余词语，使用逗号分隔从属成分。比如："In many ways, at home my parents taught me, and at school my teachers taught me."。这样更简洁且语法正确。

× And I really love to read book in books I will learn some plies so I can learn many knowledge about the appliance.

✓ I really loved reading books; from books I learned some polite expressions, so I could learn a lot of knowledge about manners.

问题类型：包含多项错误，主要为名词/冠词使用错误（22）和句子结构错误（26）。原句中“read book”应为“read books”或“reading books”；“in books I will learn”时态与上下文不一致，应为过去时或过去习惯；“plies”可能为拼写错误，应为“polite expressions”或“politeness”；“many knowledge”不正确，应该用“a lot of knowledge”或“much knowledge”；“appliance”用词错误，语境应为“behaviour/ manners”。建议改写为过去时或现在完成时，明确名词复数与冠词使用，并使用恰当词汇。例如："I really loved reading books; from books I learned some polite expressions, so I could learn a lot about manners."。

× Yes, I think play is very important because it can't make good relationships to others and it shows that you respect to others.

✓ Yes, I think politeness is very important because it helps you build good relationships with others and shows that you respect them.

问题类型：形容词/副词使用不当（13）和介词使用错误（11）。原句中“play”应为“politeness”或“being polite”；“it can't make good relationships to others”错误使用“can't make”，且应为正面表达“helps you build”；“relationships to others”介词应为“with”；“respect to others”应为“respect them”。建议使用正确名词“politeness/being polite”，用“help”表达促进关系，用“with”搭配relationships，并用宾格代词“them”。例如："Yes, I think politeness is very important because it helps you build good relationships with others and shows that you respect them."。