Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答需要更自然、简洁并遵循基本结构：先给出主句直接回应，然后用一两句具体细节支持。注意时态和语法（如 use past tense: learned; 主谓一致; 避免重复词 like “their their”）。可使用连接词（for example, so）使逻辑清晰。尝试控制在3-4句内。例句中可加入具体情景（e.g. family dinners, school）提高内容具体性。

예시: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents and teachers. For example, at family dinners my parents always reminded me to say "please" and "thank you," and my teacher would praise me when I used polite language at school. As a result, I copied their behavior and it became a habit.

제안: 回答应先直接回答（Yes, I do）然后给出两到三个具体理由并用连接词衔接。注意避免重复词（e.g. “shows shows shows”）和啰嗦表达，使用更准确的短语（e.g. "builds trust", "helps communication"）。控制长度在2-4句内，使表达更自然。

예시: Yes, I do. Being polite helps people feel comfortable and makes conversations smoother, which builds better relationships. It also shows respect and good manners, so others are more likely to trust and cooperate with you.

× When I learn to be polite, meaning because my parents and teachers often corrected me and it's show me the right way to behave so I copy their their occasions.

✓ When I learned to be polite, it was because my parents and teachers often corrected me and showed me the right way to behave, so I copied their actions.

错误类型：现在时/过去时混用与动词形式错误。原句中用“When I learn”与过去发生的情况不一致，应使用过去时“learned”。另外“it's show me”中主谓不一致且时态错误，应改为过去式“showed me”。“copy their their occasions”是用词错误，正确应为“copied their actions”。建议：回顾一般过去时的用法，当描述过去的经历或习惯时，用过去式（learned, corrected, showed, copied）；注意词汇搭配（occasions通常指场合，actions指行为）。

× For example, my parents always remind me to say please and thank you and my teacher praised me when I used polite language.

✓ For example, my parents always reminded me to say 'please' and 'thank you', and my teacher praised me when I used polite language.

错误类型：代词/时态一致性问题与动词时态。句中前半使用一般现在时“always remind”，但描述的是过去的教养经历，应改为过去时“always reminded”，以与后半句“praised”保持时态一致。建议：保持整句时态一致，描述过去经验时统一使用过去时。

× Of course being polite to others is very important and kindness makes people feel comfortable to talk with you and more well into communicate with you.

✓ Of course being polite to others is very important, and kindness makes people feel comfortable talking with you and makes communication easier.

错误类型：现在时使用与动词搭配问题以及不正确的短语结构。原句“feel comfortable to talk with you”中不定式用法不自然，应改为动名词短语“comfortable talking with you”。“more well into communicate with you”结构不通，应改为“makes communication easier”或“helps people communicate with you more easily”。建议：学习常见动词后接动名词或不定式的用法（feel comfortable + doing）；避免直接字面翻译，使用自然搭配（communication easier/communicate more easily）。

× And it also shows you shows shows the fact that you are respectful and well mannered.

✓ And it also shows the fact that you are respectful and well-mannered.

错误类型：词类重复与形容词形式错误。原句中“三次shows”重复且多余，应只保留一次“shows”。“well mannered”应写为连字符形式“well-mannered”作为复合形容词。建议：注意不要重复单词，复合形容词在置于名词前时常用连字符（well-mannered）。