Paper— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and support your response with a specific example, as you did here. However, “paper boards” is unclear; use the name of the craft you mean, such as “paper boats” or “greeting cards.” You could also avoid repeating the idea that the activity was enjoyable and fun.

예시: Yes, I have. When I was younger, I used to make paper flowers and greeting cards. I enjoyed choosing the colours and turning a plain sheet of paper into something decorative. It was a relaxing way to spend my free time.

제안: You give relevant activities and explain why you liked them. Clarify “paper boards,” which is not a natural or clear expression in this context, and use a linking phrase such as “For example” to introduce a specific activity. The final sentence could be more concise.

예시: As a child, I liked drawing on paper and folding it into different shapes. For example, I sometimes made paper boats and tried floating them in a basin of water. It was a simple activity, but I could spend ages doing it.

제안: This is a clear, natural answer with a useful contrast between texts and letters. To make it more personal and specific, add a brief example of when you might write a physical letter.

예시: Not very often, to be honest, because texting is much faster and more convenient. Still, I think handwritten letters feel more personal. I might write one to thank a close friend for a thoughtful gift, for example.

제안: Your answer is well organised and gives a relevant reason, but “loud ones” should be “loved ones.” Also, say “in their lives” when referring to people generally. You could make the example more specific and avoid repeating the idea of sentimental value and meaningful reminders.

예시: Yes, many people still keep handwritten letters because they can be very sentimental. For example, someone might save a letter from a grandparent or a close friend as a reminder of that relationship. Unlike a text message, a handwritten letter can feel like a keepsake.

제안: You answer directly and give a practical reason for carrying a notebook. The response is clear, though the last two sentences overlap slightly. You could combine them and give a specific example of what you might write down.

예시: Not usually, because I can take notes on my phone. However, I sometimes bring a small notebook and a pen, especially if I have an appointment or need to remember a quick list. They’re also useful if my phone battery dies.

× I think these letters can become meaningful reminders of special moments in their life.

✓ I think these letters can become meaningful reminders of special moments in their lives.

The pronoun their refers to people, which is plural, so the noun should also be plural: lives. Match the number of the noun to the plural meaning of its antecedent.