Paper— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答是否做过，再说明你做过哪些纸艺以及原因。注意使用自然表达，如“make paper boats and birds”；“I hide”与语境不符，可以说“I have tried”。“I was a strong people”语法和意思都不清楚，若想表达自己有耐心或擅长手工，请直接说明。

예시: Yes, I have. I’ve made paper boats and birds, although some of the designs were quite difficult. I enjoyed the challenge and felt proud when I finished them.

제안: 题目问过去的喜好，注意统一使用过去时，例如“liked”。先说明你小时候喜欢做什么，再具体描述一张纸如何折成动物，以及你为什么觉得有趣。注意说“a piece of paper”和“an animal”，并用“because”连接原因。

예시: As a child, I liked making paper animals. I was fascinated by how a single piece of paper could be folded into something that looked like an animal, so I wanted to learn different designs.

제안: 用“No, I don’t”直接回答当前习惯，不要用过去式“didn’t”。随后解释原因：可以说手写不够工整，或电子信息更方便。注意自然表达“my handwriting isn’t very neat”，并避免“not good result”这类不清楚的说法。

예시: No, I don’t write physical letters anymore. My handwriting isn’t very neat, and it’s much quicker to send a message by phone or email.

제안: 先清楚表达观点，例如“Not many people do”。然后说明原因：写信耗时、保存不方便。注意使用“letters take a long time to write”和“they can be difficult to store”等自然搭配，并检查主谓一致；不需要重复表达“不方便”。

예시: I don’t think many people keep handwritten letters nowadays. They take a long time to write, and they can be difficult to store. However, some people still treasure letters from family members because they feel personal.

제안: 先直接回答是否会随身带纸和笔。注意不要把“paper”说成“people”；接着说明你通常用手机记事或拍照。将“resolve something”换成符合语境的“write something down”或“make a note”，并删去重复、含糊的表达。

예시: No, I don’t usually carry paper and pens when I go out. I normally take my phone with me, so I can make a note or take a photo whenever I need to remember something.

× I think I was a strong people.

✓ I think I was a strong person.

“a”后面要接单数可数名词，people通常表示“人们”，是复数形式，不能与a搭配。这里应使用单数person。建议检查冠词和名词的单复数是否一致。

× I like the to do crafts with papers as a child I think only one piece of paper to become a animals.

✓ I liked doing crafts with paper as a child. I thought one piece of paper could become an animal.

“as a child”表示过去的经历，因此描述当时的喜好和想法时，应使用过去时liked和thought。回答关于童年经历的问题时，注意保持过去时的一致。

× I like the to do crafts with papers as a child I think only one piece of paper to become a animals.

✓ I liked doing crafts with paper as a child. I thought one piece of paper could become an animal.

原句中“the to do crafts”和“one piece of paper to become”缺少正确的句子结构；两个完整意思也需要分开。表达“喜欢做手工”可说“liked doing crafts”，表达可能性可用“could become”。建议确保每个从句有合适的主语和谓语，并用句号分隔完整句子。

× I like the to do crafts with papers as a child I think only one piece of paper to become a animals.

✓ I liked doing crafts with paper as a child. I thought one piece of paper could become an animal.

paper在这里表示制作材料，通常作不可数名词，不加-s。“one piece”表示一个，因此后面的animal也应使用单数。建议先判断名词表示材料还是多个独立物品，再决定是否使用复数。

× I like the to do crafts with papers as a child I think only one piece of paper to become a animals.

✓ I liked doing crafts with paper as a child. I thought one piece of paper could become an animal.

animal是以元音音素开头的单数可数名词，前面应使用an，而不是a。建议根据后面单词开头的发音选择a或an。

× No, I didn't write physical letters because I think my write the word is not perfect and physical letters is not good result.

✓ No, I don't write physical letters because I think my writing is not perfect, and physical letters are not good.

问题询问现在是否仍写实体信，因此回答日常现状应使用一般现在时don't write，而不是didn't write。回答当前习惯或事实时，注意使用一般现在时。

× No, I didn't write physical letters because I think my write the word is not perfect and physical letters is not good result.

✓ No, I don't write physical letters because I think my writing is not perfect, and physical letters are not good.

physical letters是复数主语，因此be动词要用are，不能用is。建议先找出句子的主语，再根据主语是单数还是复数选择相应的动词形式。

× No, I didn't write physical letters because I think my write the word is not perfect and physical letters is not good result.

✓ No, I don't write physical letters because I think my writing is not perfect, and physical letters are not good.

“my write the word”不能作为句子的主语；此处可用动名词短语“my writing”。原句的并列部分也需要用正确的主语和谓语构成。建议用名词或动名词表达“我的书写”，例如“my writing”。

× I think don't have many people keep handwritten letters today, because handwritten letters will spend people many times and the letters is con inconvenient to save.

✓ I think there aren't many people who keep handwritten letters today because writing them takes a lot of time, and they are inconvenient to store.

表示“没有很多人……”时，应使用“There aren't many people...”，不能省略there。建议用“There is/are”结构表达某处或某种情况“有/没有”某人或某物。

× I think don't have many people keep handwritten letters today, because handwritten letters will spend people many times and the letters is con inconvenient to save.

✓ I think there aren't many people who keep handwritten letters today because writing them takes a lot of time, and they are inconvenient to store.

“handwritten letters will spend people many times”结构不正确。要表达“写信花费很多时间”，可以用“Writing them takes a lot of time”。建议使用“某件事 takes 人 时间”这一结构表达耗时。

× I think don't have many people keep handwritten letters today, because handwritten letters will spend people many times and the letters is con inconvenient to save.

✓ I think there aren't many people who keep handwritten letters today because writing them takes a lot of time, and they are inconvenient to store.

the letters是复数，后面的be动词应使用are；改写后用they指代复数的信，也要搭配are。建议检查代词所指的名词，并让主语和动词保持单复数一致。

× When I go out I will bring a bag but I I have phone.

✓ When I go out, I bring a bag, but I have a phone.

这里描述的是外出时通常会做的事，使用一般现在时bring比will bring更符合日常习惯的表达。谈论规律或习惯时，通常使用一般现在时。

× When I go out I will bring a bag but I I have phone.

✓ When I go out, I bring a bag, but I have a phone.

phone是单数可数名词，前面需要冠词。此处泛指一部手机，应说a phone。遇到单数可数名词时，检查前面是否需要a、an或the。

× When I want to resolve something I will pick a take a photo or use word.

✓ When I want to resolve something, I will take a photo or use Word.

“pick a take a photo”包含重复且结构不完整的动词表达；这里直接说“take a photo”即可。建议避免在同一动词短语中重复添加动词，并使用完整的动词结构。

× When I want to resolve something I will pick a take a photo or use word.

✓ When I want to resolve something, I will take a photo or use Word.

若word指的是Microsoft Word软件名称，应写作专有名词“Word”，不加冠词。原句中的“use word”若不是指软件，则需要根据实际意思补充合适的冠词或名词。