Paper— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and use the plural form “paper crafts.” The phrase “taught me how to make” is incomplete, so specify what your father taught you to make. Add one brief detail about the craft to make the answer more specific and natural.

예시: Yes, absolutely. I made paper crafts when I was about five years old. My father taught me how to make simple paper animals, and I really enjoyed creating them together.

제안: You provide a clear preference and a good reason, but “paperboards” may not be the intended word, and “orangamy” should be spelled “origami.” The final phrase, “I made them really, religious,” is unclear and should be removed or replaced with a meaningful result. Use a linking phrase such as “For example” before giving specific examples.

예시: As a child, I loved making things out of paper, especially simple origami animals. For example, I made paper cranes and boats. I found it satisfying because folding a flat sheet into a small model felt almost magical.

제안: Your answer is grammatically correct but too short to demonstrate your speaking ability. Add a reason, explain how often you write letters, or mention the situations in which you write them. A second sentence would make the response more natural and effective.

예시: Yes, absolutely, although I don’t write them very often. I usually send handwritten letters on special occasions, such as birthdays, because they feel more personal than text messages.

제안: The phrase “some body” should be “some people.” Also, give a brief explanation to support your opinion and avoid making an overly absolute statement unless you clarify it. You could mention that people generally prefer digital messages, while some keep letters for sentimental reasons.

예시: Yes, some people still keep handwritten letters, especially if they are from family members or close friends. However, most people now prefer digital messages because they are quicker and easier to store.

제안: The answer is understandable but incomplete for IELTS Speaking. Add a reason and a specific situation in which you use paper and pens. This will create a clear topic sentence followed by supporting detail.

예시: Yes, I usually carry a pen and a small notebook with me. I use them to write down quick reminders or ideas when I’m travelling, especially if my phone is out of battery.

× I made craft with paper when I was 5 years old.

✓ I made a craft with paper when I was five years old.

Craft is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article such as a. Use a before a singular countable noun when mentioning one unspecified item.

× No, only some body.

✓ No, only some people do.

Some body is not the correct pronoun for referring to certain people. Use some people when referring to more than one person. The verb do is added to complete the short answer and refer back to keep handwritten letters.