Paper— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答切题，结构清晰，也提供了具体例子。需要注意语法和搭配：应说“arts and crafts”或“crafts”，而不是“arts or craft”；“create postcards by myself”可以改为“design postcards myself”，表达更自然。此外，“I tend to avoid them”略显绝对，可以补充更自然的个人偏好，使语气更口语化。

예시: No, I haven’t really made any paper crafts because I’m not very good at arts and crafts. I prefer digital creative activities instead. For example, I sometimes design postcards myself using Photoshop.

제안: 回答有明确原因，但存在一些不自然的表达。应说“write my notes on paper”，而不是“write out my notes on the paper”；“I thought it convenient”应改为“I found it convenient”；“remember the knowledge”不够地道，可以改为“remember what I had learned”。另外，第一句较长，可以使用“Also”连接补充信息，让表达更流畅。

예시: When I was a child, I mainly used paper to take notes. Computers and smartphones were not allowed at my secondary school, so writing by hand was my only option. I found it convenient, and I also felt that handwriting helped me remember what I had learned.

제안: 回答直接，理由和例子都很具体。主要问题是固定搭配和动名词使用：应说“on special occasions”，而不是“in some special occasions”；“I find handwriting letters are”应改为“I find handwritten letters are”或“I find writing letters is”。还可以避免“physical letters”和“handwriting letters”的重复，提升词汇自然度。

예시: Yes, I still write handwritten letters, especially on special occasions such as birthdays and anniversaries. I feel they are more personal and meaningful than digital messages or emails. For example, I sent my grandmother a postcard for her birthday last month.

제안: 观点清楚，也有对比和例子，但语法错误较明显。第一句应改为“Handwritten letters are not as common as they were before”；“handwrite letters”应改为“handwritten letters”或“writing letters”；“digital message”应改为复数“digital messages”。可以减少“meaningful”的重复，并用“Although”或“However”更自然地组织让步和对比。

예시: No, handwritten letters are not as common as they were in the past. Most people use email or social media because these platforms are faster and more convenient. However, I still think handwritten letters feel more personal. For instance, I kept a postcard from a friend because it meant more to me than an ordinary text message.

제안: 回答切题，使用了原因和例子，整体较完整。需要改进比较对象和冠词：应说“more reliable than using my smartphone to take notes”，因为“it”与“texting”不完全对应；“during the lecture”应根据语境改为“during lectures”或“during a lecture”；“remembering materials”可以改为“remembering the material”。最后一个例子与“go out”联系稍弱，可以选择购物清单或突然想到的想法作为例子。

예시: Yes, I usually carry a pen and a small notebook when I go out. I like writing down ideas as soon as they come to me, and it is sometimes more convenient than using my phone. For example, I often make quick notes about things I need to buy or remember during the day.

× I am not skilled at arts or craft, so I tend to avoid them.

✓ I am not skilled at arts or crafts, so I tend to avoid them.

“craft”在这里与“arts”并列，表示不同类型的手工艺，应该使用复数形式“crafts”。同时，后面的“them”也指代复数的“arts or crafts”。

× When I was young I preferred to write out my notes on the paper because computers and smart phones were prohibited at my secondary school.

✓ When I was young, I preferred to write out my notes on paper because computers and smartphones were prohibited at my secondary school.

“paper”在这里表示一种书写材料，是泛指，不需要使用定冠词“the”。因此应说“write on paper”，而不是“write on the paper”。

× Yes, I still write physical letters, especially in some special occasions, such as birthdays or anniversaries.

✓ Yes, I still write physical letters, especially on special occasions, such as birthdays or anniversaries.

表示“在特殊场合”时，英语中固定使用介词“on”，所以应说“on special occasions”，不能说“in special occasions”。

× I find handwriting letters are more meaningful than digital messages or emails.

✓ I find handwritten letters more meaningful than digital messages or emails.

这里需要一个形容词来修饰“letters”。“handwritten”是过去分词，意思是“手写的”；“handwriting”是动名词或名词，不能在这里直接作形容词使用。还可以使用句型“ I find that handwritten letters are more meaningful...”。

× Not as common as before, people prefer to use digital platforms like emails or social media to send messages because they are quicker and more convenient.

✓ Handwritten letters are not as common as before, and people prefer to use digital platforms like email or social media to send messages because these platforms are quicker and more convenient.

“Not as common as before”本身没有谓语动词，不能独立构成完整句子。需要补充主语“Handwritten letters”和系动词“are”，形成完整句子。

× However, I think handwrite letters are more meaningful than digital message.

✓ However, I think handwritten letters are more meaningful than digital messages.

“handwritten”是过去分词，作形容词修饰“letters”，表示“手写的信件”。“handwrite”是动词原形，不能直接放在名词“letters”前作形容词。

× However, I think handwrite letters are more meaningful than digital message.

✓ However, I think handwritten letters are more meaningful than digital messages.

“digital message”表示一般性的“数字信息”，应使用复数“digital messages”，与复数概念“handwritten letters”保持一致。