Paper— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Speak more clearly and directly answer the question with a correct simple past structure. Use natural vocabulary for paper crafts (e.g., folded paper, paper airplanes, origami) and avoid unclear phrases. Keep it to 1–3 concise sentences and fix grammar (e.g., subject-verb agreement and tense).

예시: Yes. When I was a child I often folded paper to make paper airplanes and simple origami. Those were my favourite toys and I played with them with my friends.

제안: Begin with a clear topic sentence in past tense and then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., "for example", "sometimes"). Correct verb forms and plural/singular agreement. Be concise and avoid repetition.

예시: As a child I used paper mainly for drawing. For example, I coloured pictures with crayons and often exchanged drawings with my friends at school.

제안: Answer directly with a clear present-tense sentence, then give a brief reason with one linking word (e.g., "because"). Use precise vocabulary (e.g., "messages" or "emails") and avoid repetition. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

예시: No, I rarely write physical letters nowadays because people prefer instant messaging apps like WhatsApp or social media. As a result, most communication is digital rather than handwritten.

제안: Start with a clear viewpoint (e.g., "Yes, some people do"). Use one or two specific reasons and an example, and correct word choice ("letters" not "lessons"). Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to organize ideas.

예시: Yes, some people still keep handwritten letters, especially from loved ones, because they are sentimental. For example, many keep birthday cards or letters from parents as treasured keepsakes.

제안: Answer concisely and correct basic errors (plural forms, prepositions). Explain briefly why with one clear reason and example. Avoid unclear phrases like "drop something down" or "juicing paper." Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I usually carry a small notebook and a pen in my bag for emergencies. For instance, I use them to jot down ideas, phone numbers, or directions when my phone battery dies.

× Yes, I did. I remember when I was a kid, we often flopped the paper and cried the playing and for playing.

✓ Yes, I did. I remember when I was a kid, we often folded paper and played with it.

The student used 'flopped' and 'cried the playing and for playing', which are incorrect verbs for the intended actions. 'Folded' is the correct past tense of 'fold' for shaping paper, and 'played with it' correctly expresses engaging in play. Use clear past-tense verbs and simple phrasing to describe childhood activities. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× This is a favourite toys for me.

✓ These were my favourite toys.

The original mixes singular 'this is' with plural 'toys'. Match number: use 'these were' for plural 'toys' in past context. Also 'for me' is awkward; 'my favourite toys' is natural. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× When I was a child, I usually use paper for drawing some crayon or just drawing some pictures I like and share with my friends.

✓ When I was a child, I usually used paper to draw with crayons or to draw pictures I liked and share them with my friends.

The sentence describes habitual past action, so verbs should be in past tense: 'used', 'liked'. Also use 'to draw with crayons' rather than 'drawing some crayon'. Include the object 'them' after 'share' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Sometimes I will draw pictures with my friend.

✓ Sometimes I would draw pictures with my friends.

Talking about past habitual actions, use 'would' or 'used to' rather than future 'will'. Also 'friend' should be plural if referring to more than one companion; use 'friends' or 'a friend' depending on meaning. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I don't think so because nowadays there are so many communication apps just like WhatsApp, TikTok, Instagram for communication.

✓ I don't think so because nowadays there are so many communication apps like WhatsApp, TikTok and Instagram for communicating.

Use 'like' instead of 'just like' for examples; add 'and' between items. Use 'for communicating' or 'for communication'—both correct; ensure parallel structure. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× So even not only me, I think that most of most people don't like a physical letter for now.

✓ So not only me, but I think that most people don't like physical letters now.

Remove redundant 'most of most' and correct quantifier usage: 'most people'. Use plural 'letters' for generalization and 'now' instead of 'for now'. Reorder to 'not only me' then 'but' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 14

× I think it's only for special occasions because I think the physical lesson would be very memorable maybe just left from their parents and it's a very important letter for them.

✓ I think it's only for special occasions because a physical letter would be very memorable, perhaps one left by their parents, and it would be very important to them.

'Physical lesson' is incorrect; should be 'physical letter'. Rephrase for clarity: use 'would be' consistently for hypothetical/past perspective and 'left by' instead of 'left from'. Add commas and restructure to make meaning clear. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× So I would say people will keep some important and memorable letter for now.

✓ So I would say people keep some important and memorable letters now.

Use plural 'letters' for general statement and present simple 'keep' or 'would keep' depending on nuance. 'For now' is better as 'now'. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× Yes, I do. I always keep a pens or some paper in my bed.

✓ Yes, I do. I always keep a pen or some paper by my bed.

'A pens' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'pens'; use 'a pen' or 'pens'. 'In my bed' is incorrect placement; use 'by my bed' or 'in my bag'. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× I don't know the reason behind but I would say just for the emergency situation to drop something down.

✓ I don't know the reason, but I would say it's just for emergencies, to jot something down.

'To drop something down' is wrong verb choice; intended meaning is 'jot something down'. Use plural 'emergencies' and add 'it's' to complete the clause. Use commas to separate clauses. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× But actually I am a kind of a traditional guy so I like juicing paper and pen for some emergency situation.

✓ But actually I am a bit traditional, so I like having paper and a pen for emergencies.

'A kind of a traditional guy' is awkward; use 'a bit traditional' or 'kind of traditional'. 'Juicing paper and pen' is incorrect; likely meant 'keeping' or 'having' paper and a pen. Use plural 'emergencies'. Grammar problem type ID: 13