Paper— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更有条理并用时态一致。开头用一句主题句直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体细节（材料、步骤、是谁一起做的、你最喜欢的部分）。注意动词时态（过去式）和单复数。可以删去不必要的重复，使表达更自然。

예시: Yes, I did. When I was in primary school my classmates and I made a paper cat. We first drew the outline on thin card, cut it out, and then coloured it together. I enjoyed decorating the cat because I could choose bright colours and add small details like whiskers.

제안: 保持时态一致并补充完整句子。先用一句主题句说明喜欢做什么，然后用一两句具体细节说明原因或场景（何时、和谁、为什么喜欢）。避免中断或未完成的句子。

예시: I enjoyed making origami when I was a child. During summer vacations, after finishing my homework, I had lots of free time so I would fold paper cranes and boats while listening to music. I liked it because it was relaxing and I could give my creations to friends.

제안: 回答要完整并避免重复。直接说是否还写信，然后给出具体频率、对象和原因，并举例说明信中通常写些什么。注意语法（现在时/现在完成时）和拼写错误（birth→birthday）。

예시: Yes, sometimes I do. I still write physical letters to my best friend who lives in another city, especially for her birthday. I usually write about my recent life, share memories, and include a few photos to make the letter more personal.

제안: 逻辑要清晰并用更自然的表达。先给出总体看法，然后解释原因（例如电子通信更方便、社交媒体普及）并给出例外情况。避免重复词汇和不连贯的插入。

예시: In general, fewer people keep handwritten letters today because digital communication like email and messaging apps is faster and more convenient. However, some people still treasure handwritten notes for special occasions, such as love letters or family keepsakes.

제안: 给出直接、简洁的回答并说明具体情境和理由。用一到两句举例说明什么时候会带纸笔（比如记下电话、做笔记、画草图）。避免碎片化和重复表达。

예시: Yes, I often carry a small notebook and a pen when I go out. I use them to jot down important information like addresses or phone numbers, and sometimes to sketch ideas when I don't have time to use my phone.

× Yes, I have made some craft with paper when I was in primary school with my classmates we made paper cat.

✓ Yes, I made some crafts with paper when I was in primary school. With my classmates we made paper cats.

句子中“craft”和“cat”应使用复数形式，因為說的是多個手工和多個紙做的貓。建議：名詞需與語境中的數量一致；將句子分為兩句以改善流暢度。

× First, I draw the outline of a butterfly thin cartet and colored it.

✓ First, I drew the outline of a butterfly-shaped card and colored it.

此處描述過去發生的動作，動詞應使用過去式“drew”。另外“butterfly thin cartet”為錯寫，應為“butterfly-shaped card”。建議：敘述過去經驗時統一使用過去式，注意拼寫與複合形容詞的使用。

× I like to do origami with paper when I was a child in my primary school.

✓ I liked to do origami with paper when I was a child in primary school.

句子談論過去的習慣，應使用過去時“liked”，而不是現在時“like”。建議：描述過去的喜好或習慣時使用過去時。

× I remembered a summer vacation I have many free time after finish my schoolwork so I will

✓ I remember one summer vacation when I had a lot of free time after finishing my schoolwork, so I...

原句時態混亂且結構不完整。“remembered”與後面描述應用現在時或改為過去時一致，且“have many free time”需改為“had a lot of free time”，“after finish”應為“after finishing”。建議：保持時態一致，使用正確動詞形式並完成句子。

× Sometimes I write physical letters to my best friend because we don't live in same city.

✓ Sometimes I write physical letters to my best friend because we don't live in the same city.

主要錯誤為缺少定冠詞“the”修飾“same city”。時態“write”和“don't live”可保留為現在時，因為描述現在的習慣。建議：注意定冠詞的使用：在“same city”前需加“the”。

× So when her birthday is coming, she birth is coming and I would write physical letters to her to express my

✓ So when her birthday is coming, I would write physical letters to her to express my feelings.

原句中“she birth is coming”語法錯誤，應改為“her birthday is coming”。此外句子不完整，需補全“express my feelings”或其他名詞。建議：使用正確的名詞短語“her birthday”，並完成句子使意思清楚。

× No, just little people write handwritten letters today because the intelligent AI AI the development of AI wasn't the message is is more convenient

✓ No, only a few people write handwritten letters today because with the development of AI and digital messaging, electronic messages are more convenient.

原句“just little people”用法不當，應為“only a few people”。句子後半混亂，應表達“隨着人工智能和數字消息的發展，電子信息更方便”。建議：使用正確量詞“a few”，並將句子重新組織以表達清晰原因。

× Oh yeah, I carry paper and pens with me when I go old if it's convenient for me to remember some important information with papers, paper and when I have I don't have time to use

✓ Oh yeah, I carry paper and pens with me when I go out if it's convenient, so I can write down important information when I don't have time to use my phone.

原句“go old”應為“go out”；“remember... with papers”介詞使用不當，改為“write down... when I don't have time to use my phone”更通順。句子結構混亂且不完整，需要重組以表達完整意思。建議：注意常用片語“go out”，用“write down”表達記錄信息，並完成句子。