Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct small errors, be concise and more coherent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and correct vocabulary mistakes (e.g., 'tings' -> 'things'). Use one linking phrase to add contrast. Keep within 3–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes because tight clothes make me feel stressed. I wear my school uniform during the week, but outside school I usually choose casual items like shorts and T-shirts for comfort.

제안: Clarify the contrast and correct the logic: a fancy restaurant usually requires smart clothes, not casual. Avoid fillers like 'umm' and be decisive. Use a linking word to contrast situations.

예시: It depends on the occasion: for a fancy restaurant I would wear smart clothes, whereas for meeting friends at a café or mall I prefer casual, comfortable outfits.

제안: Good clear answer. Make grammar consistent (subject-verb agreement: 'they make me feel relaxed') and be slightly more specific with examples or reasons. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy wearing T-shirts because they make me feel relaxed. I also prefer loose items like sweatshirts when the weather is cool because they are comfortable.

제안: Remove unclear phrase 'Despite my mother' and repetitive clauses. Give a neat topic sentence, then a short reason with one linking word. Be specific about time and conditions.

예시: No, it usually takes me about ten minutes to choose my clothes. If I know where I'm going, it is quick, and because I don't own many clothes, deciding is straightforward.

제안: Good content and clear contrast. Reduce repetition (remove repeated 'because') and tighten the structure: one sentence for weekdays, one for weekends. Use a linking word for contrast.

예시: On weekdays I wear my school uniform, so my style doesn't change. However, on weekends I wear trendy yet comfortable clothes since I meet friends and want to feel relaxed.

제안: Fix small grammar/detail issues ('not quite a big fan' -> 'not a big fan' or 'not quite a fan') and be more specific about when you choose each colour. Use a linking phrase to explain the choice.

예시: I'm not a big fan of bright colours, so I usually choose black or white. For example, I wear white in hot weather because it feels cooler and black when it's colder or for more formal occasions.

× I usually prefer wearing comfortable clothes because I feel stressed when I wear tight tings.

✓ I usually prefer wearing comfortable clothes because I feel stressed when I wear tight things.

The word 'tings' is a misspelling of 'things'. This is a vocabulary/word-choice error rather than a grammatical tense or agreement issue. Correct the spelling to 'things'. Also note that the sentence structure and tense are appropriate.

× That being said, I usually wear my school uniform because I have to go to school for five days a week, but other than that I prefer comfortable clothes like shorts and T-shirts.

✓ That being said, I usually wear my school uniform because I have to go to school five days a week, but other than that I prefer comfortable clothes like shorts and T-shirts.

No grammatical change required; sentence is correct. Included only to confirm no article error. Keep as is.

× If I go to a dinner in a fancy restaurant, I would wear umm, casual clothes.

✓ If I go to dinner in a fancy restaurant, I would wear casual clothes.

Use 'go to dinner' (no article) for the general activity. Also remove filler 'umm' and the extra comma. The conditional 'If I go..., I would...' suggests hypothetical preference; native speakers often use 'will' in first conditional: 'If I go..., I will wear...' but 'would' is acceptable for hypothetical. Keep 'would' if intended hypothetical.

× But if I'm just meeting up with my friends in a cafe or in a shopping mall, I would like to wear some casual clothes.

✓ But if I'm just meeting up with my friends in a cafe or a shopping mall, I would like to wear casual clothes.

Change 'in a shopping mall' to 'a shopping mall' for parallelism and remove 'some' which is unnecessary. The structure 'would like to wear casual clothes' is correct.

× I like wearing T-shirts because it makes me feel relaxed and I like to wear things that are not tight, so I prefer T-shirts or sweatshirts, for instance.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts because they make me feel relaxed, and I like to wear things that are not tight, so I prefer T-shirts or sweatshirts, for instance.

The pronoun 'it' should refer to plural 'T-shirts', so use 'they' and 'make' (plural verb). This is a pronoun-antecedent agreement issue; correct pronoun and verb number.

× Despite my mother, it actually takes my 10 minutes to choose what I'm going to wear because if I know where I'm going, then it is easy for me to choose what I'm going to wear.

✓ Despite my mother, it actually takes me 10 minutes to choose what I'm going to wear because if I know where I'm going, it is easy for me to choose.

Use 'takes me 10 minutes' not 'takes my 10 minutes'. Also avoid repetition: remove the second 'what I'm going to wear'. The phrase 'Despite my mother' is odd; if meaning 'contrary to my mother', better 'Contrary to my mother' but leaving as 'Despite my mother' is acceptable if context implies contrast.

× And choosing clothes is a straightforward thing for me because I don't have so much.

✓ Choosing clothes is straightforward for me because I don't have many clothes.

The phrase 'I don't have so much' is incomplete; 'so much' needs a noun. Use 'many clothes' to convey limited quantity. Also avoid starting with 'And' and simplify structure.

× On weekdays I don't because I mainly wear my school uniform because I have to go to school five days a week.

✓ On weekdays I don't because I mainly wear my school uniform; I have to go to school five days a week.

Sentence is understandable but repetitive 'because'. Replace second 'because' with a semicolon or restructure. No major article error; adjusted for clarity and style.

× However, on the weekends I try to wear some trendy and comfortable clothes because that's the time when I meet up with my friends the most and I like to wear some relaxed clothes.

✓ However, on weekends I try to wear trendy, comfortable clothes because that's when I meet up with my friends the most and I like to wear relaxed outfits.

Use 'on weekends' (no article) for habitual actions. Remove redundant 'some' and repeat of 'clothes' by using 'outfits'. Commas for adjective list improve style.

× I'm not a quite a big fan of colorful clothes so I usually prefer white or black clothes depending on the weather.

✓ I'm not quite a big fan of colorful clothes, so I usually prefer white or black clothes depending on the weather.

Remove the extra article 'a' before 'quite'. Add a comma before 'so' to separate clauses. Sentence then reads naturally.