Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Begin with a clear topic sentence and avoid repetition. Be concise (max 5 sentences) and add one specific reason or brief example using a linking word to improve coherence. Use varied vocabulary (e.g., relaxed, roomy, oversized) instead of repeating “comfortable.”

예시: I prefer relaxed, oversized clothes because they make me feel comfortable and confident. For example, I often wear roomy jeans and an oversized shirt with a baseball cap when I go out, since this style suits my casual lifestyle and lets me move easily.

제안: Start with a clear, direct statement and avoid contradictory or unclear phrases (e.g., “unfashionable” here is confusing). Use one or two linked reasons and a brief example. Replace filler words like “just” and vary vocabulary (e.g., practical, low-maintenance, informal).

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart outfits because they are practical and easy to wear. For instance, I usually choose soft hoodies and loose trousers for daily errands since they help me feel relaxed and confident.

제안: Give a concise topic sentence followed by one specific reason and an example. Avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words like “because” or “for example” and swap repeated words for synonyms (e.g., roomy, loose).

예시: Yes, I enjoy wearing T-shirts, particularly oversized ones, because they are comfortable and easy to style. For example, I pair a loose T-shirt with jeans and sneakers for a quick, confident look.

제안: Answer directly then provide two connected reasons with linking words. Be specific about what you consider (fit, color, trend) and give a short example of the decision process to show depth.

예시: Yes, I often take time picking outfits because I care about both style and comfort. For instance, I check whether a shirt fits well and complements my skin tone before deciding, since I want to look fashionable and presentable to others.

제안: Begin with a clear direct answer, then give concise reasons using linking words. Mention a specific contrast (e.g., workplace vs leisure) and, if relevant, a short example about budget influencing choices.

예시: Not really; I usually wear the same casual style during the week and at weekends because I prefer affordable, comfortable clothes. If I had more budget, I might wear smarter outfits for work and more relaxed clothes for leisure.

제안: Start with a clear statement and combine supporting details into one or two linked sentences. Be specific about why certain colors suit you (skin tone, mood) and give an example of when you wear them.

예시: I prefer colors that suit my skin tone because they make me look more radiant, such as soft pinks and muted greens. For example, I wear a pastel pink shirt to family gatherings because it brightens my complexion and looks natural.

× To wear baggy clothes, clothes that are very comfortable to wear because it just makes me feel happy and comfortable.

✓ I like to wear baggy, very comfortable clothes because they make me feel happy and relaxed.

The original is a fragment and repeats ideas. Use a complete clause with subject and verb. 'It just makes me' refers to 'clothes' (plural), so use 'they make me'. Combine adjectives adjectivally and avoid redundancy (comfortable/comfortable). Use 'relaxed' or similar to vary vocabulary.

× I like jeans that are short but also baggy.

✓ I like jeans that are short but also baggy.

No grammatical correction needed; sentence is acceptable. Kept as original.

× I like shirts that are oversized and I also like wearing hats.

✓ I like oversized shirts, and I also like wearing hats.

Minor style improvement: move adjective before noun for natural word order. Grammar is correct (subject 'I' with verb 'like').

× I prefer wearing comfortable and casual clothes because it just makes me very unfashionable.

✓ I prefer wearing comfortable and casual clothes because it makes me feel comfortable and confident.

The original meaning appears confused: 'prefer... because it makes me very unfashionable' contradicts preference. Also 'it just makes me' refers to 'wearing clothes' (gerund singular) so 'makes' is correct, but clarity requires matching meaning. Replaced with sensible outcome. Keep present tense 'prefer' and 'makes' consistent.

× It is also my type of clothing for daily and comfortable clothes just makes me very confident and it's just easy to wear.

✓ Comfortable clothes are also my everyday style because they make me very confident and are easy to wear.

Original is run-on and ungrammatical: mixed noun phrases and clauses without proper connectors. Recast into a clear sentence: subject 'comfortable clothes' with verbs 'are' and 'make'. Use plural agreement 'make' for 'clothes'. Remove redundant 'just' and reorder for clarity.

× I do like wearing T-shirts, especially oversized T-shirts, because it's just very comfortable to wear and I feel very confident wearing oversized T-shirts.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts, especially oversized ones, because they are very comfortable and make me feel confident.

Avoid redundant 'do' auxiliary unless for emphasis. Replace 'it's just very comfortable to wear' (awkward pronoun 'it') with 'they are very comfortable' referring to T-shirts (plural). Use pronoun agreement and concise phrasing.

× Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to be fashionable and I want to wear something that makes me comfortable and confident.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to be fashionable and to wear things that make me comfortable and confident.

'Do spend' is acceptable for emphasis but unnecessary; simplified to present simple 'spend'. Use parallel infinitive 'to be... and to wear...' or simplify as shown. Use plural 'things that make' to agree with plural noun 'things'.

× And I'm not only choosing clothes for myself, but also to look decent in front of others.

✓ I don't only choose clothes for myself; I also choose them to look decent in front of others.

Original mixes verb forms ('I'm not only choosing' is awkward for habitual action). Use simple present 'I don't only choose' for habits. Make parallel structure and include object 'them' for clarity.

× Not really, but I would try if I had a chance to because I don't really spend a lot of money on clothes.

✓ Not really, but I would try different styles if I had the chance, because I don't spend much money on clothes.

Minor phrasing issues: 'if I had a chance to' is incomplete — 'had the chance' is natural. 'Don't really spend a lot of money' simplified to 'don't spend much money' for concision and naturalness.

× I only wear the things that I want and the things that I can afford, so I don't really wear different clothing on weekends or weekdays.

✓ I only wear the things I want and the things I can afford, so I don't usually wear different clothes on weekends or weekdays.

Use 'clothes' (plural) rather than uncountable 'clothing' to match 'different'. Also 'usually' is more natural than 'really' in this context. Removed redundant 'the' for smoother English.

× I like colors that suits me because it makes my skin look radiant and bright.

✓ I like colors that suit me because they make my skin look radiant and bright.

Relative clause subject 'colors' is plural, so verb should be 'suit' not 'suits'. Also 'it makes' incorrectly refers to plural 'colors', so use 'they make'.

× Colors such as pink or green.

✓ For example, colors such as pink or green.

Original is a fragment. Add a lead-in like 'For example' or attach to previous sentence to form a complete sentence.

× It makes my looks very natural and very glowing.

✓ They make me look natural and glowing.

'Makes my looks' is awkward; use 'make me look'. 'They' refers to 'colors' (plural). Avoid redundant 'very' twice; 'natural and glowing' is concise and natural.