Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific supporting details (styles, colors, occasions). Avoid unclear words and incorrect phrases like “bottomless.” Use correct nouns (e.g., jeans, trousers).

예시: I prefer simple, casual clothes. For example, I usually wear plain-coloured T-shirts and jeans because they are comfortable and easy to match for everyday activities.

제안: Organize your answer: give a clear topic sentence (which you prefer), then one specific reason using correct grammar. Avoid vague phrases like “protect our life by cloth.” Mention temperature or activities as reasons. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes. Because the weather has been very hot lately, I choose lightweight T-shirts and shorts so I can stay cool and move around easily.

제안: Give a direct answer and a clear, natural explanation with one or two specific points (comfort, versatility). Avoid awkward expressions like “for all humanity” and redundant sentences. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and very versatile. I can wear them at home, when meeting friends, or layered under a jacket for a casual look.

제안: Be specific and concise: state whether you spend much time selecting clothes, then give a clear reason and an example. Avoid fillers and repetition. Use words like 'decisive' correctly—if you mean you decide quickly, say so; if you mean you think carefully, use 'careful' or 'take my time.'

예시: Yes, I usually take my time choosing clothes because I want to make sure I like the style and the quality. For instance, I compare sizes and materials before buying to avoid regretting the purchase.

제안: Answer directly and give a clear condition: state your general habit, then explain the exception with a specific example. Use linking words like 'but' and 'when' properly and reduce hesitations.

예시: Generally I wear the same basic style during weekdays and weekends. However, when I go out with friends on weekends, I choose slightly more fashionable clothes, such as a nice shirt and jeans.

제안: Make a clear opening sentence about your colour preference, then give one concrete example. Avoid repetition and incorrect grammar. Use precise phrasing like 'choose bright colours' or 'I like red when...'

예시: I prefer colourful clothes rather than sticking to one colour. For example, if I don't own a red shirt, I might intentionally buy one because I like how red brightens my outfits.

× Actually I always try a variety of things to do where but pleasantly I'm more into a simple code such as just one color, T-shirts and bottomless.

✓ Actually I always try a variety of styles, but I prefer a simple look with one color, T-shirts, and bottoms.

The original sentence has unclear structure and incorrect word choices ('code', 'bottomless'). This is a sentence structure error: ideas are not connected properly and some words are wrong. Suggestion: break into clear clauses, use 'prefer' for preference, 'look' or 'style' instead of 'code', and 'bottoms' instead of 'bottomless'. Ensure parallel structure in the list: 'one color, T-shirts, and bottoms.'

× I I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because at recently it's getting hot outside so when I walk around outside it's. We have to protect our life by cloth by selecting such comfortable clothes.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because recently it's been getting hot outside, so when I walk around I choose comfortable clothing to protect myself.

Errors include redundant words ('I I'), incorrect adverb placement ('at recently'), incomplete sentence ('it's.'), and awkward phrasing ('protect our life by cloth'). These are present tense and sentence structure issues. Suggestion: remove repetition, use 'recently it's been getting hot' for ongoing recent change, complete clauses, and use 'protect myself' and 'comfortable clothing' for natural phrasing.

× Yes, definitely T-shirts is suitable, suitable for all humanity and casual and comfortable to wear that we could like.

✓ Yes, definitely T-shirts are suitable for everyone; they are casual and comfortable to wear.

The original uses singular verb 'is' with plural subject 'T-shirts'—a subject-verb agreement error. Also awkward phrases ('all humanity', 'that we could like'). Suggestion: match plural subject with 'are', use 'everyone' or 'people', and simplify: 'they are casual and comfortable to wear.'

× Yes, I am, uh, actually a decisive person and always try not to regret what I bought. So I take all all time to, to to choose and to buy something and I like, I like the style.

✓ Yes, I am actually a decisive person and try not to regret what I buy, so I take my time to choose and buy something because I like the style.

Problems: repetition ('all all', 'to, to to', 'I like, I like'), awkward tense ('what I bought' vs context), and unclear phrasing—these are sentence structure and tense-related issues. Suggestion: remove filler words and repetition, use present tense for habits ('what I buy'), and say 'take my time' to express careful choice.

× I don't really change my style depending on the, the, the days, but it depends on, uh, my plan When I hang out with my friend, it's I focus on like stylish clothes.

✓ I don't really change my style depending on the day, but it depends on my plans. When I hang out with my friends, I focus on wearing stylish clothes.

Issues: unnecessary repetition ('the, the, the'), inconsistent number ('friend' vs plural), and awkward phrasing ('it's I focus on like'). These are sentence structure problems. Suggestion: use 'day' singular for general statement, 'plans' plural, 'friends' if referring to more than one, and a clean clause: 'I focus on wearing stylish clothes.'

× I don't really have a specific color that I wear and I'm more I choose more colorful things Such As for example, I if I don't really have a red clothes I intentionally choose, I chose choose red.

✓ I don't have a specific color that I always wear; I tend to choose more colorful things. For example, if I don't have a red item of clothing, I intentionally choose red.

Errors include incorrect article usage ('a red clothes'), plural/singular mismatch ('clothes' with 'a'), redundancy and tense/confused verbs ('I chose choose'). These are article and sentence structure errors. Suggestion: use 'an item of clothing' or 'a red piece of clothing' for singular, avoid redundant phrases, and keep verbs consistent: 'I intentionally choose red.'