Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Reduce hesitation and repetition, give a clear topic sentence then one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., 'at home' vs 'when I go out'). Keep answer within 3–4 sentences.

예시: I usually wear jeans and T-shirts because they are comfortable. At home I prefer pajamas or shorts for relaxing, but when I go out with friends I choose casual jeans and a nicer T-shirt so I look presentable.

제안: Answer directly and avoid filler words. State your preference clearly then give specific examples of occasions and clothing choices. Use linking words like 'however' or 'otherwise' to contrast.

예시: It depends on the occasion. For family gatherings or nicer restaurants I prefer to wear smart clothes like a shirt and chinos; however, for commuting or running errands I usually wear casual clothes such as jeans and a T-shirt.

제안: Avoid repetition and tighten sentences. Start with a clear statement of liking, then give two concise reasons with a linking word. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I really like T-shirts because they are comfortable and breathable. In summer I wear them almost every day since they keep me cool and are easy to clean.

제안: Be concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Give a clear main sentence and one reason with an example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to clarify cause and effect.

예시: Yes, I do when I go out because I want to look good for the occasion. For example, I often try on several outfits before a party to make sure my clothes match and look neat.

제안: Organize answer by contrasting weekdays and weekends clearly. Use linking words ('on weekdays', 'on weekends', 'however') and avoid contradictions. Provide one specific example for each.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear smart or business-casual clothes for work, such as dress shirts or chinos. On weekends I relax in pajamas, T-shirts and shorts because they are comfortable.

제안: Clarify colour preference and explain reasons with specific examples. Replace fillers and unclear phrases ('new colours', 'nude more') with precise terms like 'light' or 'pastel' colours. Keep it 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer light or pastel colours rather than dark tones. For example, I like beige and soft pink because they look pleasant and are easy on the eyes.

× I I usually wear uh, jeans and T-shirt and some comfortable clothes.

✓ I usually wear jeans, T-shirts, and other comfortable clothes.

Duplicate filler 'I I' and inconsistent article/plural use. Correct to single 'I', pluralize 'T-shirts' for general statement, and add commas for clarity. Avoid filler words for formal speech.

× Whenever I'm home I try to wear pajamas and shorts and whenever I have to go out with my friends to catch up then.

✓ When I'm at home, I try to wear pajamas or shorts, and when I go out to meet my friends, I dress differently.

Awkward repetition and incorrect use of 'whenever' and 'then'. Use 'when' and 'at home', choose 'or' for alternatives, and replace 'to catch up then' with 'to meet my friends' for clarity.

× It depends upon the occasion.

✓ It depends on the occasion.

'Depend on' is the more natural and correct prepositional collocation in this context; 'depend upon' is less common and can sound formal or awkward.

× If I'm going out, then with my friends or family, I think, uh, I prefer to wear com, uh, smart clothes or smart clothes.

✓ If I'm going out with my friends or family, I prefer to wear smart clothes.

Redundant phrases and fillers ('then', 'I think', 'uh', repeated 'smart clothes'). Remove fillers and repetition and place the prepositional phrase correctly after 'going out'.

× And if I'm going in some bus office, then I prefer to wear, uh, casual, uh, uh.

✓ If I'm going to the office by bus, I prefer to wear casual clothes.

'Going in some bus office' is incorrect. Use 'going to the office by bus' or simply 'going to the office'. Remove fillers and supply the noun 'clothes' after 'casual' for completeness.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts a lot because they are very comfortable.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts a lot because they are very comfortable.

This sentence is fine except for minor extra fillers elsewhere; here no grammatical correction is needed but ensure consistent plural 'T-shirts'.

× Whenever I'm hot home and I I have some free time I always wear T-shirts because they are so comfy and easy to breathe and and in summer I usually wear T-shirts every day.

✓ Whenever I'm at home and I have free time, I always wear T-shirts because they are comfortable and breathable; in summer I usually wear them every day.

Incorrect phrase 'hot home' should be 'at home'. Remove duplicate 'I I' and duplicate 'and'. Replace 'comfy and easy to breathe' with 'comfortable and breathable'. Use 'them' to avoid repetition.

× Yes, it depends upon the occasion. If I'm going out, then yes I spend a lot of time in choosing clothes which are which I have to wear because I'm getting choosy when it comes about my clothes and I spent a lot of time choosing clothes which kind of waste of time also.

✓ Yes, it depends on the occasion. If I'm going out, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I get choosy about what to wear, which can be a bit of a waste of time.

Replace 'depends upon' with 'depends on'. Remove unnecessary preposition 'in' before 'choosing'. 'When it comes about my clothes' should be 'about what to wear'. Fix tense 'spent' to present 'spend' for habitual action and restructure for clarity.

× Yes, I wear different types of clothes.

✓ Yes, I wear different types of clothes.

Sentence is acceptable as is; no grammatical correction needed.

× On weekdays I usually wear cash uh, smart or casual or or maybe uh some formats when I go to the office.

✓ On weekdays I usually wear smart or casual clothes when I go to the office.

'Cash' and 'formats' are incorrect word choices. Remove fillers ('uh') and duplicate 'or'. Use 'clothes' after 'smart or casual' and place 'when I go to the office' at the end for clarity.

× But on week days I only wear pajama T-shirt and some casual clothes which makes me feel easy and breathable.

✓ But on weekends I usually wear pajamas, T-shirts, and other casual clothes that make me feel comfortable and allow me to breathe easily.

Confusion between 'week days' and intended 'weekends' given context. Use plural 'pajamas' and 'T-shirts'. 'Makes me feel easy and breathable' is incorrect; replace with 'make me feel comfortable and allow me to breathe easily'.

× I like new colours, I don't like dark colours.

✓ I like neutral colors; I don't like dark colors.

'New colours' is unclear; likely intended 'neutral' or 'nude' colors. Use 'neutral' or 'nude' for common color preference. Also American spelling 'colors' vs British 'colours'—be consistent.

× I like I'm into nude more because they're MMM, because they are good to see and they give your eyes a kind of ease and calm.

✓ I'm more into nude colors because they look nice and are easy on the eyes; they feel calm.

Remove filler 'I like' and 'they're MMM'. Use 'nude colors' and correct agreement 'they are' and clarify 'easy on the eyes' rather than 'give your eyes a kind of ease'. Simplify and make phrasing natural.

× So yeah.

✓ So yeah.

Acceptable as a conversational filler; no grammatical correction needed.