Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and reduce repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details (when and why you wear that outfit). Use linking words (for example, "usually", "however") and correct small grammatical errors (e.g., "my go-to choice is to wear").

예시: Usually I wear jeans and a plain white T-shirt because they are comfortable and easy to match. However, for formal events I change into smarter clothes like a shirt and chinos.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence, then briefly explain reasons with clearer grammar and fewer hesitations. Avoid unnecessary phrases like "Thank you". Use linking words ("because", "so") correctly and provide one specific example of a casual outfit.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because as a postgraduate student I rarely attend formal meetings. For example, I usually wear jeans and a sweatshirt when I study or go to campus.

제안: Answer directly and avoid fillers. State one clear reason then add a specific detail or example. Fix small grammar issues ("I like wearing T-shirts because they are easy to put on and wash"). Use linking words like "and" or "also" to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I do. I like wearing T-shirts because they are easy to put on and wash, and they match well with jeans or shorts for a casual look.

제안: Begin with a clear statement about whether you spend time choosing clothes now, then briefly contrast past and present using linking words ("in the past", "now"). Provide a specific example of items you now choose and why (e.g., to look more professional). Reduce hesitations and filler words.

예시: I don't spend much time on clothes in the past, but now I do. In the past I usually wore a T-shirt and jeans, whereas now I buy nicer shirts and jackets to look smarter for presentations and events.

제안: Provide a clear comparison with correct linking words and avoid confusion between "weekend" and "weekdays." State one sentence about weekends and one about weekdays with specific examples (e.g., pajamas/hoodie vs shirt/trousers). Remove vague phrases like "make different kinds of people".

예시: Yes. On weekends I wear comfortable clothes like hoodies and sweatpants because I relax at home. On weekdays I dress more formally, for example wearing a shirt and chinos for classes or meetings.

제안: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and specific color choices. Avoid unclear phrasing and repetition. Explain briefly why you prefer those colours and give an example of an outfit in that color. Use correct vocabulary ("plain" not "playing").

예시: I usually prefer plain colours like white and black because they are versatile and easy to match. For instance, I often wear a white T-shirt with black jeans.

× Well in the most of the time I think my go to choice is is to wear a pair of jeans and a white white T-shirt.

✓ Well, most of the time I think my go-to choice is to wear a pair of jeans and a white T-shirt.

Use of 'in the most of the time' is ungrammatical; correct phrase is 'most of the time'. 'Go to' as adjective should be hyphenated 'go-to'. Remove duplicate 'is'. Keep present simple because describing a habitual preference.

× That's my that's my normal choices.

✓ Those are my normal choices.

Subject and verb number must match: 'That's' (that is) is singular while 'choices' is plural. Use plural demonstrative 'Those are' to agree with plural noun 'choices'.

× But if I'm going to some formal situation I would change a little bit.

✓ But if I'm going to a formal situation, I would change a little.

Use article 'a' with 'formal situation' (article error) and remove 'some' and extra words. Add comma after conditional clause. 'A little' is sufficient; avoid 'a little bit' redundancy.

× Oh well, I would choose the comfortable one because right now I'm still a student in the postgraduate school, so I I don't have to attend some formal situation like some meetings with some businessman.

✓ Oh well, I would choose comfortable clothes because right now I'm still a postgraduate student, so I don't have to attend formal situations like meetings with businessmen.

Several issues: use plural 'clothes' not 'the comfortable one' (singular/plural). 'Postgraduate student' is the normal word order. Remove repeated 'I'. Use plural 'situations' and 'businessmen'. 'Some' is unnecessary here. Maintain present simple/modal structure for general fact.

× So I would choose the comfortable ones.

✓ So I would choose comfortable clothes.

'The comfortable ones' is vague; use 'comfortable clothes' (uncountable/plural noun) to match meaning. Keeps agreement and clarity.

× Why not? I like wear, I like wearing T-shirts because it's very easy to put on and uh, very easy to wash uh, umm, in the most of the time they are easy to match most of the, uh, jeans, right?

✓ Why not? I like wearing T-shirts because they're very easy to put on and very easy to wash. Most of the time they are easy to match with jeans.

After 'like' use gerund 'wearing' not base verb 'wear'. Use contraction 'they're' for 'they are'. 'In the most of the time' should be 'Most of the time'. Add preposition 'with' after 'match' to show object of matching. Remove hesitation words for clarity.

× Well, in the past I used to, uh, put, put on the T-shirt and a pair of jeans, but things have changed.

✓ Well, in the past I used to put on a T-shirt and a pair of jeans, but things have changed.

'Used to' expresses past habit; keep base verb 'put' once. Use 'a T-shirt' not 'the T-shirt' for general statement. Keep present perfect 'have changed' to indicate change up to now.

× Uh, I right now I spend more time and money on some fancy clothes, uh, to dress myself, I guess Umm, so it's a little bit different.

✓ Right now I spend more time and money on fancy clothes to dress myself, so it's a little different.

Remove extra 'I'. 'Right now' uses present simple for habitual/current routine. 'Some' before 'fancy clothes' is unnecessary. 'A little different' is preferable to 'a little bit different' for concision.

× Yeah, In the weekends I would choose the comfortable ones because I don't need to go outside and make different kinds of people.

✓ Yeah, on weekends I would choose comfortable clothes because I don't need to go outside and meet different kinds of people.

Use 'on weekends' not 'In the weekends'. 'Comfortable ones' -> 'comfortable clothes'. 'Make different kinds of people' is incorrect; use 'meet' to indicate encountering people. 'Kinds of people' is acceptable but 'meet different people' is simpler.

× I only need to focus on my own feelings.

✓ I only need to focus on my own feelings.

Sentence is grammatically correct in present simple and matches context of habitual state; no change needed.

× But on the weekend, weekdays, I I need to dress more, much more normal, much more formal, I guess, because, you know, you need to.

✓ But on weekdays I need to dress more normally, more formally, I guess, because, you know, you need to.

Use 'on weekdays' not 'on the weekend, weekdays'. Remove duplicated 'I'. Adverbs 'normally' and 'formally' correctly modify 'dress'. Keep present simple for habitual action. End clause left unfinished in original; here left similarly vague but grammatical.

× Wow, 'cause I'm my man, man. Always choose the the playing one.

✓ Wow, because I'm a man. I always choose plain clothes.

Replace colloquial ''cause' with 'because' for clarity. 'I'm my man, man' is ungrammatical; use 'I'm a man'. 'The playing one' is incorrect; likely 'plain' not 'playing', and use 'plain clothes'. Add article 'a'.

× They like the white or the black. Not, not not complexed pattern, but very plain, very.

✓ I like white or black. Not complex patterns, but very plain ones.

Pronoun agreement: speaker should use 'I like' not 'They like' referring to self. Use 'white or black' without 'the'. 'Complexed' is incorrect; use 'complex patterns'. Make 'plain ones' agree with plural 'patterns/clothes'.