Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer clearer and more natural by giving a direct topic sentence, then briefly explaining why and giving a specific example. Avoid redundancy and awkward phrases (e.g. "that much attractive" and "stitched suits"). Use one or two linking words to organize your ideas.

예시: I usually prefer wearing formal clothes because they make me feel professional and tidy. For example, I often wear a button‑down shirt and tailored trousers to work or important meetings since they help me appear more confident.

제안: Start with a clear statement of preference, then give a concise reason and a brief example. Correct grammar ("comfort comes first" not "comfort is the first apart") and avoid extra words.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because comfort comes first for me. For instance, I usually choose a loose T‑shirt and jeans for long days of study or travel so I can move easily.

제안: Keep the answer natural and precise: say when and why you wear T‑shirts, and give one specific situation. Fix grammar ("on a regular basis," "at school").

예시: Yes, I love wearing T‑shirts because they are comfortable and easy to wash. For example, I wear them most days at school and when I play sports at the playground.

제안: Provide a direct answer and then explain briefly with clearer grammar and a concrete example. Avoid vague phrases like "nicely and gently." Use linking words such as "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I do spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes because I want to look presentable. For example, before going out for an interview I usually try on different shirts so I pick the one that fits best.

제안: Answer more coherently: state the difference between weekday and weekend styles, give specific items, and avoid irrelevant or unclear details (e.g. "headset on my head with a brownie wigged hat"). Keep within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I dress more formally on weekdays because I attend school or classes, usually wearing shirts and trousers. On weekends I prefer casual outfits like T‑shirts, jeans and sneakers for comfort.

제안: Give a clear statement of preference, then explain briefly with specific reasons using natural phrases. Avoid vague expressions like "feels a cooler effect nearby." Use linking words such as "because" and give a short example.

예시: I prefer blue clothes because I find the colour calm and flattering. For example, I often choose a navy shirt for interviews since it looks smart and helps me feel more composed.

× Many of the times I wear formal rather than any that much attractive or stitched suits.

✓ Many times I wear formal clothes rather than very attractive or heavily stitched suits.

The phrase 'Many of the times' is non-idiomatic; use 'Many times' or 'Often' (quantifier issue). 'Any that much attractive' is incorrect adjective/quantifier order; replace with 'very attractive'. 'Suits' needs a clearer modifier, 'heavily stitched suits' or 'tailored suits' is more natural. Suggestion: simplify quantifiers and use natural adjective order.

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because I think so that comfort is the first apart rather than looking smart.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes because I think comfort comes first rather than looking smart.

The phrase 'I think so that' is incorrect; modal/phrase usage should be 'I think' or 'I believe'. 'Comfort is the first apart' is incorrect structure; use 'comfort comes first'. Remove unnecessary words for clarity. Suggestion: use concise clause 'because I think comfort comes first'.

× I like wearing T-shirts on my regular basis when I'm on schools, tuitions, playgrounds and all.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts regularly when I'm at school, at tuition classes, on the playground, and so on.

Use 'regularly' instead of 'on my regular basis' (adverb usage). Use preposition 'at' for 'school' and 'tuition classes' and 'on' for 'the playground'. 'Schools' plural is wrong for personal attendance; use 'school' or 'school and tuition classes'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions and simpler adverb forms.

× Yes, I spend a lot of time to choosing clothes because I think more the time you spend on choosing clothes, more you dressed up nicely and gently.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I think the more time you spend choosing clothes, the more nicely you dress.

'Spend a lot of time to choosing' mixes infinitive with -ing; use 'spend time choosing' (verb + -ing form). The comparative structure 'more the time... more you dressed up' is incorrect; use 'the more..., the more...' and present tense 'you dress' not past 'dressed up'. 'Gently' is inappropriate; use 'nicely'. Suggestion: use correct verb patterns and comparative structure.

× Yes, mostly upon weekends I wear different types of and styles of clothes.

✓ Yes, mostly on weekends I wear different types and styles of clothes.

Use preposition 'on weekends' rather than 'upon weekends'. Remove extra 'of' after 'types'. Suggestion: use standard collocations 'on weekends' and 'types and styles'.

× I like sneakers, shoes and trousers, T-shirts and a headset on my head with a brownie wigged hat.

✓ I like sneakers, shoes, trousers, T-shirts, and a brown, wigged hat worn on my head with headphones.

List punctuation: separate items with commas and include 'and' before final item. 'A headset on my head' is redundant; 'headphones' or 'a headset' suffices. 'Brownie' is wrong adjective; use 'brown'. 'Wigged hat' is unnatural; if meaning a wig or a hat with a wig, clarify as 'a wigged hat' but better 'a brown hat or a wig'. Suggestion: choose correct adjectives and nouns and avoid redundancy.

× I like blue colour clothes because it seems so attractive and bright, gentle and feels a cooler effect nearby and gives a positive response to everyone.

✓ I like blue clothes because it seems attractive and bright, feels cool, and gives a positive impression to others.

'Blue colour clothes' is wordy; use 'blue clothes'. 'It seems so attractive and bright' should be 'they seem attractive and bright' to agree with plural noun (subject-verb agreement). 'Gentle' is wrong collocation; use 'pleasant' or omit. 'Feels a cooler effect nearby' is unidiomatic; use 'feels cool'. 'Gives a positive response to everyone' should be 'gives a positive impression to others'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement, choose natural collocations, and simplify expressions.