Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct minor grammar and word choice errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific example. Avoid redundancy like 'everyday activities' and 'running around meeting.'

예시: I prefer casual, comfortable clothes because they let me move freely and feel relaxed. For example, I usually wear jeans and soft T-shirts when I run errands or meet friends on weekends.

제안: Clarify the reason and fix unnatural phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas and give a concrete situation where casual clothes are better.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they let me move easily when I have a busy day. For instance, when I have back-to-back appointments, casual outfits are more practical than smart clothes.

제안: This answer is unclear and contains many incorrect words. Give a direct yes/no, then explain simply and precisely with one or two specific points. Avoid filler and correct vocabulary.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to wash. I usually choose plain or striped T-shirts for everyday wear and reserve shirts for more formal occasions.

제안: Correct word choices and tenses, and make the explanation more coherent. Use a linking phrase to show habit and give one specific routine.

예시: Yes, I spend a fair amount of time choosing my clothes because I like to look presentable. For example, I usually pick my outfit the night before so I don't have to rush in the morning.

제안: Tighten the response and correct small errors. Use linking words to contrast weekdays and weekends and give one concrete example of each.

예시: Yes, it depends on the occasion. On weekdays I usually wear smart clothes, like a shirt and trousers, because I work in an office. At the weekend I prefer comfortable casual outfits such as jeans and a sweatshirt.

제안: The answer is hard to understand due to incorrect word choices. State the colors you like, explain why briefly, and give a specific example of when you wear them.

예시: I like bright colors such as blue and yellow because they make me feel cheerful and confident. For example, I often wear a bright blue shirt when I go out with friends because it lifts my mood.

× I like wearing casual, comfortable clothes for everyday activities because they help me feel relaxed and free to move.

✓ I like wearing casual, comfortable clothes for everyday activities because they help me feel relaxed and free to move.

No correction needed for the -ing form; sentence is grammatical. Keep present simple with like + -ing to express preference.

× For example, I usually wear jeans and soft T-shirts when I'm running around meeting.

✓ For example, I usually wear jeans and soft T-shirts when I'm running around and meeting people.

The original sentence lacks a coordinating structure and an object after 'meeting'. Add 'and' to join actions and 'people' as the object to make the sentence clear and grammatical.

× I prefer to wear comfortable casual clothes because they allow me to move around friendly for assemble when I have a busy day.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes because they allow me to move around easily when I have a busy day.

'Friendly' is an adjective describing people, not how one moves; use the adverb 'easily'. 'For assemble' is incorrect phrase; replace with 'when' to indicate time. Also add a comma between coordinate adjectives 'comfortable, casual'.

× Casual outfits are much more practical than smart clothes.

✓ Casual outfits are much more practical than smart clothes.

Sentence is correct; no -ing issue. Comparison between clothing types is properly formed.

× Yeah, I like wearing T-shirt, Yeah, instead of dates, I just prefer also for smart T-shirt.

✓ Yeah, I like wearing T-shirts. Instead of formal shirts for dates, I prefer a smart T-shirt.

Use plural 'T-shirts' for general statements. Original phrase 'instead of dates' is unclear; likely meant 'for dates'. Move 'also' or omit it; restructure sentence to place modifiers correctly and use 'smart T-shirt' as noun phrase.

× But actually for my daily activity, I love wearing dessert wear.

✓ But actually, for my daily activities, I love wearing casual wear.

'Dessert wear' is incorrect and likely a mispronunciation of 'casual' or 'everyday' wear. Use plural 'activities' for general routines and add comma after 'But actually'.

× I just want to go to everywhere.

✓ I just want to go everywhere.

'Go to everywhere' is ungrammatical; 'everywhere' does not need 'to'. Remove 'to' to form the correct adverbial phrase.

× Yes, I spend quite a lot of time choosing my classes because I like to look presentable.

✓ Yes, I spend quite a lot of time choosing my clothes because I like to look presentable.

'Classes' is incorrect in context; should be 'clothes'. This is a word choice error resulting in singular/plural confusion with wrong noun.

× For example, I usually pick my outfit tonight before I saw I don't have to rush in the morning.

✓ For example, I usually pick my outfit the night before so I don't have to rush in the morning.

Tense and structure are incorrect: use 'the night before' and 'so I don't have to' to express purpose. 'Pick my outfit tonight before I saw' is ungrammatical.

× Yes I do I it depends on the occasion.

✓ Yes I do; it depends on the occasion.

Extraneous words 'I it' make the sentence ungrammatical. Use a semicolon or period to separate the two clauses.

× During weekdays I usually wear formal or smart clothes because I go to the office and wanna look professional.

✓ During weekdays I usually wear formal or smart clothes because I go to the office and want to look professional.

Use standard 'want to' instead of colloquial 'wanna' in formal responses. Pronoun use is fine; this corrects register rather than pronoun form.

× Well at weekend I prefer comfortable casual clothes, relaxed.

✓ Well, at the weekend I prefer comfortable, casual clothes; I like to be relaxed.

Add comma after 'Well', include article 'the' before 'weekend' (common in British English), add comma between adjectives, and rephrase 'relaxed' as a clause for clarity.

× I've been noticed because the color makes me feel cheerful and confidence.

✓ I am drawn to bright colours because the color makes me feel cheerful and confident.

'I've been noticed' is passive and incorrect here; likely intended 'I am drawn to' or 'I have noticed'. 'Confidence' should be the adjective 'confident' to describe 'me'. Maintain present simple for general preferences.

× I often wear bustle pain when I go out with my friend because it brightens my mood and sweets my style.

✓ I often wear bright patterns when I go out with my friends because they brighten my mood and suit my style.

Original has multiple incorrect words: 'bustle pain' and 'sweets my style' are nonsensical. Replace with 'bright patterns' (or 'colorful clothes'), correct 'friend' to plural if general, use plural pronoun 'they', and use verb 'suit' to describe how style is appropriate.