Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer direct, grammatical and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid hesitations, and give one specific supporting detail (e.g., activities or fabrics). Use linking phrase if adding detail.

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes, such as jeans and sweaters. For example, when I study or go out with friends I usually choose soft cotton sweaters because they are warm and easy to move in.

제안: Give a direct statement and add a brief reason or example to make the answer more informative. Use a linking word like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they suit my daily routine. For instance, I often work from home or meet friends, so casual outfits are more practical.

제안: Expand slightly to avoid one-word answers. Give a reason or example and keep it within two sentences. Use a linking word such as 'because' or 'for example'.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to wash. For example, I often wear a plain cotton T-shirt when I go shopping or exercise.

제안: Make the sentence grammatically correct and add a specific reason or situation to support your answer. Use a linking word like 'because' to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I spend quite a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to look neat and match colors. For example, I often try different combinations before going to an important event.

제안: Give a clear contrast between weekdays and weekends with a supporting detail. Use linking words like 'on weekdays' and 'on weekends' for clarity.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear smart-casual clothes for work or classes, while on weekends I prefer relaxed outfits like jeans and hoodies because I rest and meet friends.

제안: Answer directly and add a brief reason or example to make it natural and informative. Use a linking word such as 'because' or 'for example'.

예시: I prefer black clothes because they look neat and are easy to match with other items. For example, I often wear a black jacket with different shirts because it suits many occasions.

× I like where umm comfort clothes like wearing a jeans and wearing a sweater.

✓ I like comfortable clothes, such as jeans and sweaters.

The student used 'where' incorrectly and repeated 'wearing'. 'Like wearing a jeans' has two issues: 'jeans' is plural so does not take 'a', and 'like' with noun description is followed by an adjective phrase 'comfortable clothes' or examples. Use 'such as' to list examples and pluralize 'sweater' to match general preference. Suggestion: say 'I like comfortable clothes, such as jeans and sweaters.' Grammar problem type ID: 8

× I prefer like to wear comfortable and casual clothes.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes.

The phrase 'prefer like to' is redundant. Use 'prefer to' + verb. Also combine adjectives with a comma. Suggestion: 'I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes.' Grammar problem type ID: 8

× Yes, I like.

✓ Yes, I do.

When answering 'Do you like wearing T-shirts?' a short affirmative should use the auxiliary verb 'do' rather than 'like' alone. 'Yes, I like' is incomplete; use 'Yes, I do' or 'Yes, I like them.' Suggestion: 'Yes, I do.' or 'Yes, I like them.' Grammar problem type ID: 12

× Yes, I spend a lot of time for choosing clothes.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

After 'spend time' we use the -ing form without a preposition. 'For choosing' is incorrect here. Suggestion: 'I spend a lot of time choosing clothes.' Grammar problem type ID: 11

× Yes, I wear a different style of clothes when I go.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and different ones at the weekend.

The original answer is vague and mixes singular 'a different style' with plural 'clothes'. Match number: 'styles of clothes' or 'a different style of clothing'. Also respond to question about weekdays and weekends specifically. Suggestion: 'I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and different ones at the weekend.' Grammar problem type ID: 27

× I like black color of clothes.

✓ I like black clothes.

English does not normally use 'black color of clothes' for preference; we say 'black clothes' or 'the color black'. The noun 'color' is unnecessary. Suggestion: 'I like black clothes.' or 'I like the color black.' Grammar problem type ID: 13