Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap daha doğal ama dilbilgisi ve netlik sorunları var. Basit, doğru cümle yapıları kullan; gereksiz tekrarları çıkar. Bir konu cümlesi ile başlayıp kısa bir neden veya örnek ekle (maksimum 3-4 cümle). Örneğin “I prefer black because it suits my hair and body shape” gibi net ifade ve bağlaçlar kullan.

예시: I usually wear clothes that suit my body shape. For example, I often choose black outfits because they match my hair and make me feel confident.

제안: Cevap kafa karıştırıcı ve gereksiz ayrıntılar içeriyor. İlişki geçmişine çok girmeyin; doğrudan tercih belirtin ve kısa gerekçe verin. Bağlaçlar (because, so) ile akışı düzenleyin. Dilbilgisi (tense, artikeller) düzeltilmeli.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I like clothes that are loose and easy to move in. I find them more practical for daily life.

제안: Cümle yapısı bozuk ve ifadeler uygun değil; negatif/utanç ifadeler yerine basit, olumlu nedenler verin. Kısa, doğrudan bir konu cümlesi kurun ve bir neden ekleyin. Uygunsuz kelimeler (miseries) kullanmayın.

예시: Yes, I often wear T-shirts because they are comfortable and cover my body in a way I prefer. I feel more relaxed and confident in them.

제안: Cevap fazla dolaylı ve kelime seçimi yanlış (fined, seductive). Net bir konu cümlesi ile başlayın: genelde zaman harcarım/harcamam. Gerektiğinde nasıl aradığınızı kısa açıklayın. Basit ve uygun kelimeler kullanın.

예시: Normally I don't spend much time choosing clothes. Only for special occasions I might browse online shopping apps to find something more fashionable.

제안: Cevap anlaşılmaz ve uygunsuz sağlık terimi kullanılmış. Kısa ve doğrudan cevap verin: evet/hayır ve neden. ADHD gibi tıbbi terimleri rastgele kullanmayın.

예시: No, I usually wear similar styles both on weekdays and weekends because I prefer comfortable clothes every day.

제안: Cevap nedenleriyle birlikte daha düzgün cümlelerle verilmelidir. Uygunsuz veya anlamsız ifadeler (“goats style”) kullanmayın. Kısa neden ve bir örnek ekleyin.

예시: I prefer black because it matches my hair and is easy to match with other items. For example, I often wear a black dress or jacket for a simple look.

× I like to wear clothes that's compatible with my body and suitable for me.

✓ I like to wear clothes that are compatible with my body and suitable for me.

'Clothes' is plural, so the relative pronoun must be followed by the plural verb 'are' not the contraction 'that's' (that is). Use 'that are' for correct agreement. Suggestion: Use 'that are' after plural nouns (clothes are -> that are).

× For instance, I generally prefer being full black, which is compatible with my hair color.

✓ For instance, I generally prefer wearing all black, which matches my hair color.

After 'prefer' use the gerund 'wearing' to refer to an activity. 'Full black' is nonnative; use 'all black'. 'Compatible' is not natural with 'hair color' here; 'matches' is better. Suggestion: Use 'prefer + -ing' and choose natural adjective phrases ('wearing all black', 'matches my hair color').

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes after I break up with my boyfriend. ex-boyfriend because he always said to me.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes since I broke up with my ex-boyfriend because he always told me so.

The sentence mixes tenses and fragments. 'After I break up' should be past: 'since I broke up' or 'after I broke up'. 'Ex-boyfriend' should be integrated, and 'said to me' is awkward; use 'told me'. Suggestion: Keep consistent tense (past) and combine fragments into one sentence: 'since I broke up with my ex-boyfriend because he always told me so.'

× Not sticky to your body, clothes are suitable for you and I accepted this idea.

✓ I prefer clothes that are not tight to the body because they suit me, and I accepted that idea.

The original is a fragment and unclear conjunction use. 'Not sticky to your body' should be 'not tight to the body' or 'not clingy'. Combine clauses with 'because' and use 'that idea' to refer back. Suggestion: Use clear conjunctions and relative clauses: 'clothes that are not clingy to the body because they suit me.'

× Yes, I like always wearing T-shirts, clothing my body fats because I need to not show to everyone my body line because miseries things are attractive.

✓ Yes, I always like wearing T-shirts that hide my body fat because I don't want to show my body shape; I find revealing things unattractive.

Word order: 'always like wearing' is natural. 'Clothing my body fats' is incorrect; use 'hide my body fat' or 'hide my body shape'. 'Miseries things' is incorrect word choice; likely 'revealing things' or 'sexy things'—here use 'revealing things' or 'sexy things' with appropriate adjective. Also avoid double 'because'. Suggestion: Use clear verbs for covering ('hide') and natural adjectives ('revealing', 'sexy', 'unattractive').

× If I need to be fined by someone as attractive person, I can search for seductive clothes on dollop application, but in normal times I don't spend my time for it.

✓ If I want someone to find me attractive, I can look for seductive clothes on a shopping app, but normally I don't spend time doing that.

'Need to be fined' is wrong; likely 'want to be found'. Use modal 'can' for ability, but better 'I can look for' or 'I might look for'. 'Dollop application' unclear—use 'a shopping app'. 'Spend my time for it' should be 'spend time doing that' or 'spend time on it'. Suggestion: Use 'want to be found' and 'spend time doing that' and clear nouns for apps ('shopping app').

× Not because my perceiving of time is different from someone's because I am not person that's having ADHD which is leads to. Time differentiation.

✓ No, because my perception of time is different from other people's; I am not a person with ADHD that leads to time differentiation.

Problems: 'perceiving of time' should be 'perception of time'. 'Someone's' should be 'other people's'. 'I am not person that's having ADHD' should be 'I am not a person with ADHD'. 'Which is leads to' is incorrect; use 'which leads to' or 'that leads to'. Suggestion: Use 'perception', plural possessive for comparisons ('other people's'), and correct relative clauses: 'a person with ADHD that leads to...'.

× Black absolutely because my hair color is black also and This is why I always wearing black.

✓ Black, absolutely, because my hair is also black, and that is why I always wear black.

Missing commas and capitalization. 'Hair color is black also' is awkward; 'my hair is also black' is natural. 'This is why I always wearing black' requires 'that is why I always wear black' (use base verb after 'always'). Suggestion: Use 'I always wear' not 'always wearing', and ensure proper clause connectors ('that is why').

× And also men's find women attractive because of their goats style.

✓ Also, men find women attractive because of their fashion style.

'Men's' with apostrophe is wrong; should be 'men'. 'Goats style' is likely a mistranslation—use 'fashion style' or 'style'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'men find'. Suggestion: Replace unclear words with correct vocabulary ('fashion style', 'clothing style').