Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more organized and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the types of clothes you prefer, then give one or two specific supporting details (brands/styles and occasions). Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

예시: I usually prefer casual clothes, especially baggy T-shirts and checkered shirts. For example, I often wear a baggy Chick-fil-A or Adidas Ambush T-shirt for relaxed office days or weekends because they are comfortable yet look neat.

제안: Answer directly, then give a brief reason with linking words. Reduce hesitation and correct grammar (e.g., "loose clothes" not "loose weight"). Use one or two supporting details only.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I dislike tight garments. For instance, I avoid tight T-shirts since I find them restrictive, so I usually wear loose-fitting shirts that allow me to move freely.

제안: Be specific and use correct vocabulary (e.g., "oversized printed T-shirts," "anime prints"). Keep answer short and organized: state preference, explain what you like, mention color preference, and avoid filler words.

예시: Yes, I like wearing oversized printed T-shirts, especially those with anime designs. I usually choose black or white T-shirts, and I prefer crew necks rather than V-necks.

제안: Structure your answer: give a clear statement about how much time you spend, then give one specific detail about your shopping routine. Use correct tense and simpler phrasing to be clearer.

예시: Yes, I often spend quite a lot of time choosing clothes. I usually go shopping alone and visit several stores; sometimes it takes me two or three days to find a piece I am happy with.

제안: Answer directly, use clearer vocabulary (e.g., "weekdays" vs "weekends," "formal wear"), and give one example of each style. Avoid unclear words like "cash or dress."

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear smart-casual clothes for the office, such as a shirt and chinos. On weekends I dress more casually when meeting friends, and for weddings or formal events I wear traditional or formal attire.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence stating your favorite colour, then explain briefly why with a specific example. Use correct grammar and concise phrasing.

예시: I prefer black because it goes well with almost anything. For example, I often pair black tops with blue jeans or khaki trousers since black matches most bottoms.

× So what kind of I like to wear some T-shirts, Chick-fil-A shirt with a baggy fit and I did I with Adidas Ambush.

✓ I like to wear T-shirts, such as Chick-fil-A shirts with a baggy fit, and I also wear Adidas Ambush.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and extra words ('So what kind of I') creating a sentence structure error. Reorder subject and verb then list examples clearly using conjunctions. Use 'such as' to introduce examples and 'also' to link additional items.

× This gives a kind of a classy look where I can use it for for my office day and sleep here.

✓ This gives a kind of classy look that I can wear for work or on office days.

The phrase uses incorrect prepositions and redundant words ('for for', 'sleep here'). Use 'wear for work' or 'on office days' to express purpose and correct preposition use; remove irrelevant phrase 'sleep here.'

× Basically I like checkered shirts.

✓ Basically, I like checkered shirts.

Add a comma after introductory adverb 'Basically' to improve punctuation and clarity. The adjective 'checkered' is correct; this change clarifies the sentence structure.

× Yeah, I like to wear comfortable clothes. Uh, for example, I don't like to wear tight clothes. Obviously many people used to wear a tight T-shirts and they might showing their muscles.

✓ Yeah, I like to wear comfortable clothes. For example, I don't like wearing tight clothes. Obviously many people used to wear tight T-shirts and show their muscles.

Several pronoun and verb form issues: 'wearing' is the correct gerund after 'like'; remove article 'a' before plural 'T-shirts'; use base verb 'show' not 'showing' after modal-like construction. Also keep pronoun references consistent.

× I don't like those kind of things.

✓ I don't like those kinds of things.

When referring to multiple kinds, use plural 'kinds' and plural 'those.' 'Those kinds of things' is the standard collocation.

× And I, I always used to be with some loose weight so that it will be, uh, so that is considered as a comfortable for me.

✓ And I always try to wear loose clothes so that I feel comfortable.

The original uses 'used to' incorrectly to express habit; 'used to' implies past habitual actions. Use 'try to' or 'prefer' and present tense to describe a current habit. Also correct noun 'loose weight' (nonsense) to 'loose clothes' and simplify phrase to 'feel comfortable.'

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, so I like to wear oversupply T-shirt uh printer printed at the back, mostly uh anime tissue, uh, with the color mostly black and white Umm, and I don't like this B kind of V-neck T-shirts only down.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. I prefer oversized T-shirts with prints on the back, mostly anime designs, usually in black and white. I don't like V-neck T-shirts.

Multiple adjective and noun errors: 'oversupply' should be 'oversized'; 'printer printed at the back' -> 'prints on the back'; 'anime tissue' -> 'anime designs'; 'this B kind of' is unclear and removed. Simplify into clear sentences and correct adjective-noun order.

× These are used to spend a lot of time in using clothes.

✓ I used to spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

The phrase is ungrammatical: 'These are used to' is incorrect. If describing a past habit, 'used to' with 'I' is correct: 'I used to spend a lot of time choosing clothes.' Use 'choosing' rather than 'using' or 'in using clothes.'

× I used to go alone for shopping and do home each and every shops and if I satisfy them one day we buy that as a otherwise I want to buy.

✓ I go shopping alone and visit every shop; if I find something I like, I might buy it the same day; otherwise, I will keep looking.

The original has pronoun confusion ('them') and incorrect tense. Use clear subject 'I', correct verb forms, and refer to 'something I like' instead of 'them.' Use present/present-future to describe typical behavior.

× So it might take 2-3 days continuously to buy some good dresses. That's all right, used to do shopping.

✓ It might take me 2–3 days to find good clothes. That's fine; I enjoy shopping.

'Used to do shopping' is incorrect here. Use present habitual phrasing 'I enjoy shopping.' Add 'me' for clarity and correct word choice 'find good clothes.'

× Uh, yes, in the big days I used to go to office. So go to office I used to wear using the casuals.

✓ Yes, on weekdays I go to the office. For work I usually wear casuals.

Use 'on weekdays' not 'in the big days'; 'go to the office' requires 'the'; simplify verb forms and remove 'used to' if describing current routine. 'Wear casuals' is acceptable phrasing.

× But in the weekends when I'm going out with my friends or family, I used to wear a cash or dress.

✓ But on weekends when I go out with friends or family, I wear casual clothes or a dress.

Use 'on weekends' and present simple 'I go' for routine. Replace 'a cash or dress' with 'casual clothes or a dress.' Avoid 'used to' which implies past habit.

× And if it is depends upon any, uh, marriage function, then according to that I used to wear that particular attire.

✓ If I attend a wedding or similar function, I wear appropriate attire for the occasion.

Fix preposition and verb forms: 'depends upon' should be 'depends on' but better rephrase to 'if I attend a wedding' and use present simple 'I wear' to describe habitual response.

× What most I like black colour because black suits everything and black suitable to all the bottom and and then they used to wear blue jeans, blue jeans and hair cell colour which matches with all the top wear.

✓ I like black the most because black suits everything and goes well with all bottoms; I usually wear blue jeans and neutral colors that match most tops.

Original has incorrect word order 'What most I like' and incorrect quantifier use. Rephrase to 'I like black the most.' Use 'goes well with' instead of 'suitable to,' and replace 'hair cell colour' (unclear) with 'neutral colors.' Clarify 'bottoms' meaning trousers/jeans.