Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one supporting detail using a linking word. Correct verb agreement and reduce fillers (uh).

예시: I usually wear pajamas at home because they are very comfortable and allow free movement. However, when I go out I prefer to wear a jalabiya because it reflects my cultural traditions.

제안: Avoid repetition and improve grammar (subject-verb agreement). Give a brief reason using a linking word to strengthen the answer.

예시: It depends on the situation. I prefer casual clothes at home because they are more comfortable, but for events I choose smart clothes to look more presentable.

제안: Eliminate hesitations and correct word choice and repetition. Use one clear reason and a linking word; correct collocations (e.g., trousers, shirts).

예시: It depends, but usually I avoid T-shirts because they can look too casual and are harder to match with trousers. For work, I prefer shirts because they look smarter.

제안: Remove fillers and improve sentence structure. Be specific about what makes choosing difficult and use linking words to contrast ideas.

예시: Yes, I do, especially when choosing clothes for my children. For example, it is easy to pick outfits for my son, but I find it harder to choose for my daughter because there are so many styles and colours to consider.

제안: Avoid trailing off and filler words. Use clear linking words to contrast weekday and weekend habits and correct vocabulary (daily, dresses).

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear comfortable clothes like jeans and a sweater for daily tasks. At the weekend, my family and I dress more formally, for example wearing dresses and smart shoes when we visit relatives.

제안: Fix grammar (colour, makes, occasions) and avoid vague words like 'visual'. Add a brief example of how you use black in outfits.

예시: I prefer black because it makes my outfits look more stylish and flattering. For instance, a black jacket is easy to match with different shirts, so I can wear it for both work and casual occasions.

× I like to wear pajama because it is uh, comfortable and allow to, to allow freedom to movement.

✓ I like to wear pajamas because they are comfortable and allow freedom of movement.

Use plural 'pajamas' for the garment (article error and singular/plural). Also 'pajamas' refers to a plural noun so use 'they are' (subject-verb agreement). Replace 'freedom to movement' with the correct phrase 'freedom of movement'. Suggestion: Use 'pajamas' and match verb form and preposition: 'allow freedom of movement'.

× But usually, uh, for going outside, uh, I wear jalabiya because it is reflect our tradition and cultural value.

✓ But usually, when going outside, I wear a jalabiya because it reflects our tradition and cultural values.

'Jalabiya' as a singular countable noun needs the article 'a' (article error) and the verb must agree with the singular subject: use 'reflects' (subject-verb agreement). 'Cultural value' should be plural 'cultural values' for general practice. Also 'for going outside' is better as 'when going outside'. Suggestion: Use the article 'a', match verb to subject, and pluralize 'values' when speaking generally.

× It it depend on the situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

Present simple requires third person singular verb form 'depends' with subject 'it'. Also remove the duplicated 'it'. Suggestion: Use 'depends' for present simple statements about general conditions.

× I prefer casual when I sit at home, but when I have a party or event I prefer to wear smart clothes.

✓ I prefer casual clothes when I am at home, but when I have a party or event I prefer to wear smart clothes.

Add 'clothes' after 'casual' for clarity (word choice) and use 'I am at home' or 'when I am at home' for natural present tense phrasing. The rest is correct.

× And depend on the situation, but usually I don't like to wear a T-shirt because it's difficult to match with the trouser and often look to casual.

✓ It depends on the situation, but usually I don't like to wear a T-shirt because it's difficult to match with trousers and it often looks too casual.

Begin with 'It depends' (present tense third person). 'Trouser' should be plural 'trousers'. Add 'it' for the verb 'looks' to agree with 'a T-shirt' or the general situation: 'it often looks'. Use 'too casual' rather than 'to casual'. Suggestion: Use plural 'trousers', correct adverb 'too', and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× For example, I prefer I prefer shared for work because they look smarter.

✓ For example, I prefer shirts for work because they look smarter.

Duplicate 'I prefer' removed. 'Shared' is incorrect word; likely 'shirts' is intended. Ensure plural noun 'shirts' matches plural pronoun 'they'. Suggestion: Use the correct noun 'shirts' and avoid duplicated phrases.

× Uh, actually yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes especially for my kids.

✓ Actually, yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes, especially for my kids.

Minor punctuation and filler removal; tense is fine (present simple describing habitual action). Add a comma before 'especially' for clarity. Suggestion: Use commas to separate clauses for readability.

× It is easy to find or pick outfit for my son, but I faced the difficult to match uh or pick for my daughter because I have a different alternatives or.

✓ It is easy to find or pick outfits for my son, but I find it difficult to match or pick outfits for my daughter because I have different alternatives.

Use plural 'outfits' and 'for my son' (preposition correct). Replace 'I faced the difficult' with 'I find it difficult' for present habitual. 'Different alternatives' does not need the article 'a'. Remove trailing 'or'. Suggestion: Use 'find it difficult', plural 'outfits', and correct article usage.

× In the weekday I usually wear comfortable casual clothes for work or diary task, uh, such as jeans and sweater.

✓ On weekdays I usually wear comfortable, casual clothes for work or daily tasks, such as jeans and a sweater.

Use 'on weekdays' (plural) or 'in the weekday' is incorrect preposition. 'Daily' is the correct adjective, not 'diary'. Use 'a sweater' or 'a sweater' with singular countable noun and include comma between adjectives. 'Jeans' is plural and fine. Suggestion: Use 'on weekdays', 'daily tasks', and include the article 'a' before 'sweater'.

× At the weekend, my children and I dress more formally. When we visit family, we often wear nice dress and shoes. Because it is.

✓ At the weekend, my children and I dress more formally. When we visit family, we often wear nice dresses and shoes because it is a special occasion.

Combine fragments to avoid sentence fragment 'Because it is.' Use plural 'dresses' to match 'we' and add a reason 'a special occasion' or similar to complete the thought. Suggestion: Avoid sentence fragments; finish the reason or join sentences.

× I like color black because it make my outfit look more stylish and flattering.

✓ I like the color black because it makes my outfit look more stylish and flattering.

Include the article 'the' before 'color'. Use third person singular 'makes' to agree with 'it'. Suggestion: Use 'the color black' and 'makes' for subject-verb agreement.

× It is also visual and easy to match with other items so I can wear the same piece for different occasion.

✓ It is also versatile and easy to match with other items, so I can wear the same piece for different occasions.

'Visual' is incorrect word choice; 'versatile' fits the meaning. Use plural 'occasions'. Add a comma before 'so' for clarity. Suggestion: Choose the correct adjective 'versatile' and pluralize 'occasions'.