Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and naturally: start with a clear topic sentence saying what you like, avoid asking the examiner a question, remove repetitions and unclear phrases. Add one or two specific supporting details (why you like them or in what situations you wear them) using a linking word.

예시: I like wearing classic T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, I often wear plain T-shirts when I go out with friends or run errands, since they’re easy to match with jeans.

제안: Give a clear direct statement first, then add a specific reason using a linking word. Avoid filler words (uh) and repetition. Keep to two or three sentences maximum.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart outfits, because they allow me to move freely and feel relaxed when I study or meet friends. For instance, I usually choose a cotton T-shirt and jeans for most days.

제안: Be concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Provide one specific reason and a brief example. Use a linking word to connect reason and example if needed.

예시: Yes, I do. I find T-shirts classic and comfortable, so I wear them a lot. For example, I often wear a plain T-shirt when I go to the gym or meet friends.

제안: Answer directly and politely without unnecessary or potentially awkward comments. Give a short explanation and a specific detail about your routine. Use a linking word to connect your reason.

예시: No, I don’t spend much time choosing clothes because I prefer simple outfits. For example, I usually pick the same few shirts and jeans so I can get ready quickly in the morning.

제안: Make a clear comparison between weekdays and weekends: state what you wear on each and why. Avoid fillers and vague labels; give one specific example for each period and use linking words for coherence.

예시: Yes, I dress differently on weekdays and weekends. During the week I wear smart-casual clothes for work, such as a button shirt and chinos, while at the weekend I prefer classic casual outfits like a T-shirt and jeans for relaxing.

제안: State your favorite colours clearly, then give a concise reason and a brief example. Use correct colour names and check pronunciation/word choice (e.g., 'navy blue'). Avoid repeating the same point.

예시: I like navy blue and white because white looks clean and navy blue is easy to match with other clothes. For example, I often wear a navy jacket with a white T-shirt because the combination looks neat and simple.

× OK, Do you like to wear my T-shirts? I like change because it's classic and I like classic clothes.

✓ OK, Do you like to wear my T-shirts? I like change because they're classic and I like classic clothes.

The student used 'it' to refer to plural 'T-shirts' and wrote 'it's classic' which is incorrect for plural subjects. Change 'it's' to 'they're' for subject-pronoun agreement; use 'they' for plural nouns. Also 'change' may be a lexical issue but was not corrected as per instruction.

× I prefer to wear my comfortable and casual clothes because and casual clothes, uh, it's like to me and I like it.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes because they are comfortable to me and I like them.

Original sentence is disfluent and contains repeated phrases and incorrect pronoun references. 'It's like to me' is ungrammatical; replace with 'they are comfortable to me' and use 'them' to refer to plural 'clothes'. Maintain present simple preference.

× Yes, I do. I like wearing T-shirts. Golf. It's classic and I like T-shirts. I like classic clothes.

✓ Yes, I do. I like wearing T-shirts. They are classic and I like them. I like classic clothes.

Use 'they' and 'them' for plural 'T-shirts' instead of 'it' to maintain correct pronoun agreement. 'Golf.' seems extraneous and was left unchanged as not a grammar category listed.

× No, I don't. I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I'm not a woman, I'm a man and I don't like it.

✓ No, I don't. I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I'm a man and I don't like doing that.

The phrase 'I'm not a woman, I'm a man' is redundant; clarify reason. 'I don't like it' is vague—use 'I don't like doing that' to refer to the action of choosing clothes. This fixes pronoun/reference clarity.

× I do wear different styles. Uh, it's classic and St. style. I like classic style because it's awesome and I like it uh, and.

✓ I do wear different styles. I like a classic style because it's simple and I like it.

Original is disfluent and contains 'St.' and trailing conjunctions. Simplify to clear subject-verb structure and a coherent adjective ('simple' instead of 'awesome' if teacher expects concise description). Maintain present simple tense.

× I like Navi Blues and white because white as a clean and I like it and and now we blew. It's my favorite color.

✓ I like navy blue and white because white looks clean and I like it. Navy blue is my favorite color.

'Navi Blues' is a spelling/word-choice error; correct to 'navy blue'. 'White as a clean' is ungrammatical; use 'white looks clean'. Remove repeated words and correct pronoun/reference. Keep consistent singular/plural and adjective use.