Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve fluency and reduce hesitations; shorten and structure answer to 2–4 clear sentences. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail (example or reason). Use linking words like "because" or "so" and avoid repeating words.

예시: I prefer fitted clothes because I go to the gym regularly and like outfits that show my body shape. For example, I often wear slim-fit shirts and joggers when I meet friends because they make me feel confident and sporty.

제안: Make answer concise and correct grammar (use "it depends" and correct nouns). Give a brief comparison with linking words such as "but" and "because". Limit to 2–3 sentences and include a specific example of occasions.

예시: It depends. I usually wear comfortable clothes at home or when traveling because they are soft and relaxed, but I choose smart clothes for work or formal events because they look professional and boost my confidence.

제안: Speak more clearly and use correct sentence structure; avoid filler words. Give one concise reason and one brief example. Use plural/singular correctly and smoother phrasing ("T-shirts are" not "T-shirt is").

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are versatile and comfortable. For example, I often wear a simple T-shirt when I go shopping or have lunch with friends because it is quick and easy.

제안: Reduce hesitations and repeatings; use clear structure: topic sentence + one specific supporting reason. Mention typical occasions and how much time you spend. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

예시: It depends on the occasion. I usually spend more time choosing clothes for formal events or dates because I want to look my best, but I pick outfits quickly when I'm hanging out with friends.

제안: Be concise and correct grammar ("weekday" instead of "weekdays the because"). Give one clear contrast with linking word "but" and a brief specific example of each style. Avoid fillers.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear more professional and decent clothes for school and work, such as shirts and smart trousers, but on weekends I choose comfortable casual clothes like T-shirts and jeans so I can relax.

제안: Give a direct answer first, then one specific detail. Correct grammar ("it depends") and avoid repetition. Mention when you wear the color or why you avoid it to add specificity.

예시: I don't have a single favourite colour because it depends on the occasion, but I like purple. For example, I might wear a purple shirt for casual outings, although I avoid bright purple for formal events because it may not look suitable.

× I prefer the fitted clothes 'cause I go to the gym a lot and like the outfits that can show my body shape and that will make me feel more confident and uh uh, sporty.

✓ I prefer fitted clothes because I go to the gym a lot and like outfits that show my body shape and make me feel more confident and sporty.

The phrase 'that can show' is wordy; use the simple relative clause 'that show' because habitual or general abilities are expressed with the base form after 'that'. Also 'the fitted clothes' is better as 'fitted clothes' (no article) when speaking generally. Use 'because' instead of informal ''cause'. Remove redundant 'will' since it is not needed for a general present statement. (English (Thailand))

× Uh, for me it's depends.

✓ Uh, for me it depends.

The verb 'depends' should not take an extra auxiliary 'is'. Use the simple present 'it depends' for general situations. (English (Thailand))

× But the walk and the some formal events I choose smart clothes because they look more professional and make me feel confident.

✓ But for walks and some formal events I choose smart clothes because they look more professional and make me feel confident.

Use 'for' + noun (for walks) for activities. Remove the extra definite article 'the' before 'some formal events'. 'Walk' should be plural 'walks' if referring to the activity in general. 'I choose smart clothes' is fine after these fixes. (English (Thailand))

× Yeah, of course T-shirt is suitable for many things and it also can use at lunch wear and sometimes you if you just want to go out and buy something, you just need to put on a simple T-shirts then you can go out, you don't need to like so.

✓ Yeah, of course T-shirts are suitable for many situations and can also be worn for lunch. Sometimes, if you just want to go out and buy something, you just need to put on a simple T-shirt and you can go out.

Use plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally and match verb 'are'. 'It also can use' is incorrect passive/active form; use 'can also be worn'. 'Lunch wear' is unnatural — say 'for lunch'. Change 'a simple T-shirts' to singular 'a simple T-shirt' and remove extra words 'you don't need to like so'. (English (Thailand))

× It's depends sometimes if if you, I have to go to some formal events or some like, uh, uh, or go to or hang out with my friends or go to go on a date.

✓ It depends sometimes if I have to go to a formal event, hang out with friends, or go on a date.

Remove redundant 'it's' and duplicate 'if'. Use 'depends' without 'it is'. Use singular/plural consistently: 'a formal event' (or 'formal events') and concise parallel verbs 'hang out' and 'go on a date'. Avoid filler repetitions. (English (Thailand))

× Yes, I mean the weekdays the because I have to go to school and have a job, have a walk, so I have to make myself look like a more professional and decent.

✓ Yes, I mean on weekdays I have to go to school and work, so I have to make myself look more professional and decent.

Use 'on weekdays' for time expressions. 'Have a job' is better as 'work'. Remove extra 'the' and 'like' before 'more professional' — say 'look more professional'. 'Decent' is fine as an adjective; do not use article 'a' before uncountable adjective phrases. (English (Thailand))

× There's no specific color I like.

✓ There is no specific color that I like.

Add 'that' as a relative pronoun to make the sentence clearer and more natural, though the original is understandable. This clarifies the connection between 'color' and 'I like'. (English (Thailand))

× It's really depends.

✓ It really depends.

Do not use 'it's' with 'depends'. Use simple present 'depends' to express a general condition. (English (Thailand))

× I, I for me, I like the purple colour, but maybe it's not very suitable for clothes on me.

✓ For me, I like the color purple, but maybe it's not very suitable for me to wear.

Use 'color purple' or 'the color purple'. 'Clothes on me' is unnatural; use 'suitable for me to wear' or 'suits me'. Adjust word order to be natural in English. (English (Thailand))