Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise, correct grammar (word order, articles, singular/plural), and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Fix pronunciation of 'skirt' if needed and avoid overly dramatic expressions like 'walk like a Princess' unless elaborated.

예시: I usually prefer skirts, although my choice depends on the season. For example, in summer I wear light cotton skirts because they keep me cool, while in winter I pair skirts with tights and boots to stay warm.

제안: Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement, singular/plural) and reduce hesitation. Use linking words (for example, however) and provide one clear reason for each preference. Replace vague phrases like 'some occasions and situations' with specific examples.

예시: It depends on the situation. For example, at home I usually wear comfortable clothes such as sweatpants because they help me relax; however, for formal occasions like going to the bank or university presentations I choose smart, elegant outfits to look professional.

제안: Avoid inappropriate or unclear details and correct grammar (plural agreement, pronouns). Be concise and choose polite, neutral phrasing. Offer one clear reason and an example of when you wear T-shirts.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially oversized ones because they are very comfortable and allow good airflow. For instance, I often wear an oversized T-shirt at home in the evenings when I want to relax.

제안: Reduce hesitation and correct tense and phrasing. Avoid improbable details (two hours after a bath sounds exaggerated). Provide a more realistic time and explain why with a linking word. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I often spend a fair amount of time choosing clothes — usually around 20 to 30 minutes — because I want my outfit to match my mood and the occasion. For example, if I'm going out with friends I pick something casual but stylish so I feel confident.

제안: Remove filler words and repetitions. Use clearer structure: state whether you change styles, then give specific examples for weekdays vs weekends and for different times of day. Correct adjectives and phrasing ('feel comfortable').

예시: Yes, I change my style depending on the day and time. On weekday mornings I wear smart-casual clothes to be productive, while in the evenings and on weekends I prefer comfortable outfits like joggers or loose tops so I can relax.

제안: Avoid hesitation and use consistent vocabulary (e.g., 'saturated' vs 'bright'). Give specific color examples and explain briefly why you choose them. Use linking words such as 'when' and 'because' for clarity.

예시: My clothing colors depend on my mood. When I'm happy I choose bright colors like red or yellow because they feel energising, while when I'm low I prefer muted shades such as gray, navy or white because they feel calming.

× one item that will always be my wardrobe is skirt.

✓ One item that will always be in my wardrobe is a skirt.

Missing articles and preposition. English requires 'in my wardrobe' and the singular countable noun 'skirt' needs an indefinite article 'a'. Use 'a skirt' and 'in my wardrobe' for natural phrasing.

× It doesn't matter what weather is it it's summer or it's winter, I love wearing skirts it it makes me feel comfortable and it makes me walk like a Princess.

✓ It doesn't matter what the weather is; whether it's summer or winter, I love wearing skirts because they make me feel comfortable and make me walk like a princess.

Word order and tense: 'what the weather is' is correct order for embedded question. Use 'whether' to present alternatives. Use plural pronoun 'they' to agree with 'skirts'. Avoid repeating words and capitalize 'princess' is unnecessary. Use semicolon or sentence break for clarity.

× some comfortable clothes that makes me feel relaxed, like a skirt or a sweatpant.

✓ some comfortable clothes that make me feel relaxed, like a skirt or sweatpants.

Subject 'clothes' is plural, so verb should be 'make' not 'makes'. 'Sweatpants' is normally plural; use plural form for consistency. Articles: 'a skirt' is fine but pairing with 'sweatpants' omit 'a'.

× But in some occasions and situations, like when there are formal, like going to the bank or university, I prefer something smart and elegant.

✓ But on some occasions, such as when there is a formal event, for example going to the bank or university, I prefer something smart and elegant.

Preposition and article issues plus awkward structure. Use 'on some occasions' and 'a formal event' (countable). Rephrase 'such as' or 'for example' to introduce instances. Remove redundant 'situations' and duplicate 'like'.

× especially when they're oversized because it makes me feel he absolutely comfortable and air goes around my body.

✓ especially when they're oversized because they make me feel completely comfortable and let air circulate around my body.

Pronoun and adverb errors: 'they' must refer to 'T-shirts' (plural). 'He' is incorrect. Use adverb 'completely' instead of 'absolutely' in this context. 'Let air circulate' is more natural than 'air goes around my body'.

× And I always wear T-shirts with no pants at home when I'm alone because it makes me feel relaxed.

✓ And I always wear T-shirts without pants at home when I'm alone because it makes me feel relaxed.

Preposition choice: 'without pants' is more natural than 'with no pants'. The pronoun 'it' refers ambiguously to 'wearing T-shirts'; consider 'they make me feel relaxed' if referring to T-shirts. To correct: 'because they make me feel relaxed.'

× Whenever I want to take a bath, I take about, uh, two hours even, uh, choosing what I wanna wear after I went out of the bathroom.

✓ Whenever I want to take a bath, I spend about two hours choosing what I want to wear after I get out of the bathroom.

Tense consistency: use present 'want' and 'get out' for habitual actions. 'Spend time' is more natural than 'take about two hours'. Avoid colloquial 'wanna' in formal correction. Past 'went out' conflicts with present context.

× Because when I'm clean, I want to wear something that makes me feel good.

✓ Because when I'm clean, I want to wear something that makes me feel good.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It matches present habitual context. Included to confirm no error detected.

× Yes, I do and actually it depends on not only on the time of the weekdays and weekend, but also in different hours of the day.

✓ Yes, I do, and actually it depends not only on whether it is a weekday or weekend, but also on the different hours of the day.

Preposition and structure: remove duplicate 'on' and use 'whether it is a weekday or weekend' for clarity. Use 'depends on' with parallel 'on the different hours'.

× I, I just, uh, change my clothes because, uh, from morning to evening I'd like to wear something that makes me feel awake, but at night I wanna feel comfort, comfortable.

✓ I just change my clothes because from morning to evening I'd like to wear something that makes me feel awake, but at night I want to feel comfortable.

Remove filler words. 'Want to' instead of 'wanna' in formal correction. 'Feel comfort, comfortable' is wrong; use adjective 'comfortable'. Place adverb 'just' before verb. Maintain consistent form 'want to feel comfortable.'

× My taste in, uh, colors of the clothes depends on my mood.

✓ My taste in the colors of clothes depends on my mood.

Preposition and article: use 'in the colors of clothes' or more naturally 'my taste in clothes' or 'my taste in the colors of my clothes'. Remove filler 'uh'.

× When I'm happy, I would like to wear some saturated colors, but when I'm in a low mood, I would like to wear muted colors like Gray or umm, white.

✓ When I'm happy, I like to wear saturated colors, but when I'm in a low mood, I prefer muted colors like gray or white.

Modal and style: 'would like to' is acceptable but 'like' and 'prefer' are more natural for habitual preferences. Capitalization: 'gray' should be lowercase. Remove filler 'umm'. Use consistent verbs 'like'/'prefer' for clarity.